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H20: Just Add water a Rikki Story
It
was a Saturday night at about eleven at
night. Zane and Rikki were
sitting on the Gold coast beach, the beach was
empty, not a soul
was about. the two of them didn't mind they just sat there
looking
over the calm blue ocean that Rikki knew very well having swam in
it
many times as a Mermaid.
Zane had brought Rikki there to
unwind from the movie and dinner. Dinner had
been wonderful, but
the movie was far from perfect. Rikki had been bored but
he had
been scared though he would never tell her that.
."Did you enjoy that Rikki?" Zane asked looking over at her
"Enjoy what?" she looked back at him making eye contact
"The dinner and the movie" he replied laughing.
"Well ...
I loved the dinner, I would never have gone there in a million
dreams
I don't have the money. The movie though ..." she stopped and
looked at
Zane.
"I know it wasn't very scary" he lied looking back to the ocean
"Are you serious Zane I
could tell you were terrified, You were sitting in
your chair
hardly looking at the screen" she screamed hitting his
shoulder
with a laugh
"Shh, keep your voice down!"
he whispered, "Or we will have curious people
out here to see
what we are doing out this late at night."
They laughed
together and Zane started tickling Rikki's waist getting her
to
squirm and laugh a bit more
"Zane! What happened to
being quiet so we won't arouse suspicion?" She
laughed as
she got free and ran off the sand dune as he chased after her.
He
chased her around the beach as she ran along the shore dodging the
wet
spots on the beach from where the tide had just washed onto
the sand until she
stopped giving him opportunity to jump on her
and push her into the dry sand.
Rolling her over he bent down and
kissed her lips softly and she kissed him
back.
When they
had stopped they sat up together returning to watching the
waves
crash on the shore when he noticed that Rikki had started to
shiver a bit,
"Are you cold Rikki?" he asked her as he placed
his Jacket over her
shoulders.
"No! Ok I was but
that's only because it's starting to get really windy
down here"
she replied as she felt the jacket lay over her shoulders,
"Thank
you"
Zane replied kissing her cheek, "Anything
for you, I love you, and I always
will"
But before
Rikki could say anything in reply a thunder storm broke out
overhead
and Zane could feel little droplets of rain.
"Zane?!"
Rikki panicked seeing the rain start to fall she put the jacket
over
her head in a futile attempt to stay dry.
"Don't
worry Rikki come on let's go back to my house"
They
started running towards the Juicenet, the fastest way off of the
beach.
It was then that they saw Miriam and Nate coming out of the
juicenet where
they had had one of Miriam's exclusive
parties.
"Oh god Zane it's coming down harder, I'm not going to make it to your house"
"Well what about the
Juicenet? It is right there" he said looking towards
the
doors.
"Zane! People!" she reminded him, "I'm
going to have to go in the ocean, I have
no other choice" she
turned to run back to the beach.
"Rikki no! It'll be way
to rough for you out there!" He shouted trying to
pull her
quickly to some form of safety
"Zane remember, I have a tail,
I am a mermaid, I sort of can swim below the
current." With
that she took off and made it to the waters edge
before
transforming.
ONCE AGAIN I WOULD LIKE TO SAY A HUGE THANK YOU TO ANYBAR1987 FOR RE WRITTING THIS CHAPTER FOR ME!
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