Everybody reading this I am sorry. THIS version of the story is done for. There is areason for this. When I read through this story I didn't think it was well good enough. I read it and it was rather bland, no character development, hell not even that much action. However, I am putting up a new version of it. The proulouge is similar, meaning it tells most of the same stuff, but slightly diffrent, longer, and in my opinion better.