Chapter 1: secret revealed

Chapter 1: secret revealed

Aslan slowly walked toward Susan and Peter, who talking about King Caspian's recent coronation. Aslan had a look of sadness in his eyes, though neither of them could understand why.

" High King Peter, son of Adam and Queen Susan, daughter of Eve, come walk with me. We have matters of great importance to discuss."

" Is anyone hurt Aslan?" Susan Questioned.

" Nobody is hurt, dear one. These issues deal with you and Peter."

" Did we do something wrong, Aslan?" Peter asked.

" When we turn the corner, I shall tell you." Then they turned into a corridor with only a few candles flickering and a light at the end. " You both have learned many lessons in Narnia, have you not? Both of you have learned unconditional love, kindness, bravery, skills of archery and the sword, leadership and the ability to believe in the impossible. You have both grown up and matured a lot in this world, now it is time for you to do that in your own world."

" Does that mean none of us can come back?" Susan asked with a hint of sadness in her voice.

" It is you and Peter who have learned your lessons here." They had reached the end of the corridor now. " Edmund and Lucy still have much to learn." Aslan finished. Peter looked over at Susan and realized she was crying.

" Oh, Su. Don't be sad. Please don't cry!" his efforts were useless because that made Susan cry even harder. Unexpectedly, Susan collapsed onto the ground. She was sobbing so hard that she could not walk. The sun was beaming on all of them and out of the corner of his eye, peter saw Caspian coming. Peter beckoned for him to come help Susan.

" Susan! What on earth has happened to you?" Susan raised her head, which had been buried in peters arm. She didn't speak a word, but instead, threw her arms around Caspian (he had knelt down to help her). " Shh… Shh…" Caspian soothed as he rocked Susan back and forth in his arms. Finally, Susan raised her head.

" Aslan, I can't go back." Susan sobbed. " I had just gotten used to living in England. It was so hard to adjust. Then we got transported back to Narnia. And I've just gotten used to living here again." Aslan looked at her.

" That is not the real reason you don't want to leave, Queen Susan." They all looked down at Susan, whose cheeks had turned bright red.

" Well, I… I Think… I think I'm in love." Susan said looking embarrassed. Peter looked at her like she was insane. Aslan was simply smiling and Caspian was looking down at her happily.

" Who is it, Susan?" Peter asked. Susan turned to look at Caspian who nodded his head.

" Caspian". Susan said. Peter looked at her than turned hid gaze to Caspian.

" Aslan, High King Peter, we really do love each other, I don't think I'd be able to bear it if Susan and I were separated". Caspian said, hugging Susan close to him.

" Peter, do you really want to stay?" Aslan questioned. Peter looked down at Susan. Who was weeping in Caspian's arms now. Then he looked at Caspian who was looking at him pleadingly. Finally, he turned over to Aslan.

" Susan is right. We did just get used to living in England before we were transported back to Narnia. We know that our reign here is over. But I do remember you telling us at our coronation so long ago: Once a king or queen of narnia, always a king or queen of narnia. Please let us stay Aslan."

" I did say that. I will let you stay, but you will never be able to return home again. Do you understand that?"

" Yes" Peter said.

" Susan?"

"Yes, I understand."

" Very well then."

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" I can't believe You didn't tell me!" Peter yelled.

"Tell you what." Susan snapped back.

"That you liked Caspian!"

" I don't have to tell you every little thing in my life Peter! I'm sixteen! I can look after myself!

" Susan, what if he breaks your heart?'

" What's life without a little risk, Peter? I know you worry for me, but trust me i give you full power to slap him if he hurts me." Peter felt some what re-asurred now,but he was going to do anything he could to protect his little sister.

" Let's go to the town meeting now."

" Alright, Susan."

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Peter was sucked into deep thought. He was standing on the balcony that looked over the palace gardens. Why did Susan like Caspian, he wondered. Then he saw Susan and Caspian out in the garden, just walking. Then Caspian spoke.

" Lucy seems to be estatic that we love each other"

" She's such a sweet girl that way. Always thinking about others. She certainly lives up to her title, Lucy the valiant."

" Ahh, my queen, do you know that you live up to your title? Susan", he paused for a moment to cup her chin in his hands" The gentle". Then he bent down to kiss her. Peter could fell the heat in his face. The kiss he was observing was so tender and gentle, their lips moving in sync. He couldn't help but wonder, will Susan get pregnant before she's married? Then he scolded himself for thinking such a thought. Susan knew how to use her head. But looking at them together actually softened his heart. They seemed to fit perfectly together. And he couldn't help but hope that they would get married someday. He smiled and walked back into his room. He quickly undressed and but on his night clothes and crawled into the soft feather bed. He hoped that someday he would find someone to love just like Susan had.

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