I like the idea of this story, but I really don't like how I wrote it.


Rain

It was dark, the rain poured, the thunder roared.

Niou stood in the doorway, Marui put the phone down next to the receiver.

"Where were you?" Marui asked calmly.

"Who were you talking too?" Niou asked shaking the water out of his hair. "I can't have a night out with friends without you worrying?"

"Were you with that girl?" Marui tried not to sound hesitated.

"Yeah, so what if I was with that girl."

Marui hoped Niou was drunk and didn't know what he talking about.

"What do you mean you were with that girl? You said you wouldn't see her again."

"Now Marui, I know what I said and we were just fooling around." Niou shrugged.

"Fooling around! How?"

Niou was unsure how to answer this, but said the first thing that came to his mind:

"You know, playing around… in a bed?" Niou bit the corner of his bottom lip.

Tears began to swell in Marui's eyes.

Niou indeed did noticed and tried to embrace him, only to be pushed away by a trembling Marui.

"How long…" He choked.

"Huh?"

"How long have you been fooling around with her?"

Niou looked away softly saying, "Two months."

"I knew it."

Marui softly sobbed; the only thing Niou could do was watch his boyfriend do so. He tried to comfort him, but was pushed away yet again.

"Marui, how do you know about her?" Niou wonder.

"She called the house asking for you."

Niou hesitated. Marui went on;

"When she called, she told me to tell you she was pregnant." Marui kept sobbing. Niou look away again while sighing and shaking his head.

The rain had stop; only inside the house was there rain.