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I'm a first time writer, so PLEASE review and tell me things I should and shouldn't do. And if I'm doing any good!

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taylorcullenforever

I woke to find myself running for the bathroom. Once reaching the toilet I instantly vomited. There was no one in the house except for me and Charlie. I heard footsteps then Charlie came in looking scared and startled to see me on the title of the bathroom floor.

"I think I have stomach bug," I chocked out, trying to catch my breath.

"Oh… do you need anything?" he asked sounding quite scared.

"No," but I did need something. I needed Edward. But it was no use he had left me saying that I was not longer wanted. Even though I knew it was useless I kept silently asking for him to come back to me Edward where are you please I need you. I sat there remembering his dazzling face, and his golden eyes. Wanting them to come home to me. Suddenly another round of food came up. After about 20 minutes the nausea finally passed. I trudged back to my bed exhausted from the lack of sleep. I soon fell back to sleep with my hand on my stomach. But while I was sleeping I felt that something was coming.

I woke up to it being 11:00 on a Saturday. I groaned and finally got up from bed. I went straight to my bathroom mirror to have a look at myself. "Gah!" I was appalled at how I looked. I was very pale, with dark circles under my eyes. And I was shaking all over. I turned the sink on and splashed cold, soothing water on my face. But I still looked pale. I stumbled over to my counter to get a ponytail holder for my hair. I put my hair in a loose ponytail and went down to get some breakfast.

Charlie was already there sitting on one of the stools. He had some eggs and bacon in front of him on a plate.

"Good Morning, are you feeling any better?" he asked softly. I stopped where I was and just stared at him. Feeling as if something was happening that I just couldn't figure out.

"Yes, much better just a little tired." I scooted over to the refrigerator and got a box of cereal, a bowl, a spoon, and some milk. With that I sate down across from Charlie and started to eat my breakfast.

"That's good," he said, watching me intently. I just continued looking at the counter and eating my breakfast. I soon finished and went to the sink to rinse my bowl out.

"I'm going to take a shower." I told him already walking towards the stairs.

"Ok, just take it easy," he looked back watching me as to make sure I didn't fall.

I went to the bathroom and was suddenly over whelmed with nausea. I barfed up about all of my breakfast before I started feeling normal again.

I'ma first time writer and i'm not sure if i'm doinggood or not.So for the writers who know what to put in and things to have inyour storiesplease review and tell me things i'm not doing, things i shoulddo, and if i'm doing ok. I'm trying to do my best hopingat least some people will like it. Thanks for reading the first chapter. PLEASE (I'M BEGGING YOU) PLEASE REVEIW!