Utapau,
3rd year of the war
General Grievous is speeding down the Separatist facility, wondering how he can get rid of the pesky General Kenobi and his blasted dragon. He then makes a decision that will save his life. He brings up a data pad, keys in a code, and transmits it. Somewhere deep in the facility, something flickers to life...
Meanwhile, Commander Cody is ordering his troops to go further in, when the whole base starts shaking. The thing from earlier leaps out of a hole, and turns out to be a prototype magnaguard. It sprints over to a spare uni-bike, collecting the General's dropped lightsabers as it goes, and pilots it out. Commander Cody is now thinking, "What the hell was that about?" when the base starts rumbling again. Outside, the panels of the facility start moving and sliding back, some of them breaking off with strain, the clones having to hold on for dear life. General Grievous's personal dreadnought, the Sword of Kalee, floats out, and begins searching. During its search, it attacks Pau City and the Republic invasion forces with its high-powered turbolasers, destroying many gunships and setting the city ablaze... Meanwhile, on a lower level platform, Kenobi and Grievous are brawling. It is close to the point where Obi-Wan would rip his chest cavity open, when the magnaguard arrives. It throws the General his lightsabers (one of which Obi-Wan catches) and tells him to get away while he holds Kenobi off. It fights much better than it's brethren, parrying the cut that beheaded it's brother, but Kenobi soon tires of it, and leaps over, hacking at the starfighter's engines. General Grievous, now very angry, rises from the cockpit, prepared to kill Kenobi for ruining his favorite starfighter. At that moment though, the dreadnought arrives, and he changes his mind. He and the guard leap over, Kenobi in pursuit, saying, "Leaving so soon, General?" He is kicked back off however, and lands just as the fighter explodes, losing an eye to shrapnel. As the dreadnought begins to leave Utapau, It creates more havoc, releasing biological weapons, pounding Republic positions, and blasting down the Utapaun resistance. As it gets higher into the atmosphere, it engages the Venators, heavily damaging some, and, using mirrored hull plates, reflects their SPAHT cannon fire, fatally blowing holes in one. It leaves Utapau, and goes into hyperspace... Despite the General's protests, the magnaguard insists on giving him repairs. It operates on the his chest cavity and lungs, gives him new arms made of phrik-duranium alloy, and installs a cutting edge energy absorption system. During this, it asks what has happened to its brothers. The General looks uneasily at it, knowing now why it was put into storage, but answers its question. The guard looks down at the floor, hisses with anger, and then looks up, telling the General not to mind, and to think about the assault on Utapau. The General then becomes suspicious about the proximity of Sidious' messages and the Republic attack, and decides to look at some holo recordings... I require reviews for this, please.
General Grievous is speeding down the Separatist facility, wondering how he can get rid of the pesky General Kenobi and his blasted dragon. He then makes a decision that will save his life. He brings up a data pad, keys in a code, and transmits it. Somewhere deep in the facility, something flickers to life...
Meanwhile, Commander Cody is ordering his troops to go further in, when the whole base starts shaking. The thing from earlier leaps out of a hole, and turns out to be a prototype magnaguard. It sprints over to a spare uni-bike, collecting the General's dropped lightsabers as it goes, and pilots it out. Commander Cody is now thinking, "What the hell was that about?" when the base starts rumbling again. Outside, the panels of the facility start moving and sliding back, some of them breaking off with strain, the clones having to hold on for dear life. General Grievous's personal dreadnought, the Sword of Kalee, floats out, and begins searching. During its search, it attacks Pau City and the Republic invasion forces with its high-powered turbolasers, destroying many gunships and setting the city ablaze... Meanwhile, on a lower level platform, Kenobi and Grievous are brawling. It is close to the point where Obi-Wan would rip his chest cavity open, when the magnaguard arrives. It throws the General his lightsabers (one of which Obi-Wan catches) and tells him to get away while he holds Kenobi off. It fights much better than it's brethren, parrying the cut that beheaded it's brother, but Kenobi soon tires of it, and leaps over, hacking at the starfighter's engines. General Grievous, now very angry, rises from the cockpit, prepared to kill Kenobi for ruining his favorite starfighter. At that moment though, the dreadnought arrives, and he changes his mind. He and the guard leap over, Kenobi in pursuit, saying, "Leaving so soon, General?" He is kicked back off however, and lands just as the fighter explodes, losing an eye to shrapnel. As the dreadnought begins to leave Utapau, It creates more havoc, releasing biological weapons, pounding Republic positions, and blasting down the Utapaun resistance. As it gets higher into the atmosphere, it engages the Venators, heavily damaging some, and, using mirrored hull plates, reflects their SPAHT cannon fire, fatally blowing holes in one. It leaves Utapau, and goes into hyperspace... Despite the General's protests, the magnaguard insists on giving him repairs. It operates on the his chest cavity and lungs, gives him new arms made of phrik-duranium alloy, and installs a cutting edge energy absorption system. During this, it asks what has happened to its brothers. The General looks uneasily at it, knowing now why it was put into storage, but answers its question. The guard looks down at the floor, hisses with anger, and then looks up, telling the General not to mind, and to think about the assault on Utapau. The General then becomes suspicious about the proximity of Sidious' messages and the Republic attack, and decides to look at some holo recordings... I require reviews for this, please.