I know that I'm breaking the rules, but at the moment, I could truly care less.

This story will no longer be continued.

I would be continuing this story, but yesterday, I came across a story in the bleach archives. It's called the 'Department of Mary Sues, Bleach Division'. If you wish to know my reasoning, read the first chapter.

I don't want anyone to Flame the writer. Please.

Though probably just to make fun of other writers, this story has opened my eyes to my own writing.

I didn't believe my story was a Mary-sue story. Apparently, it is.

I don't know if I will ever write this story again. Probably not for some time, and not without serious changes to my story.

I need suggestions to improve my story. If any of you have one that you didn't want to say before hand, or that you just didn't remember to put before, don't hesitate to leave a review or PM me.

Rewriting will be a difficult process. I hope that everyone can forgive me.

Kana090