As you know, Alex and I are taking turns. This chapter is written by her. It's really good, isn't it?
Chapter Four: Banished Warrior
Heavy
rain pattered down on the dreary LeafClan camp. Foxpaw stood under
the
shelter of an elm tree, his ginger fur fluffed up as he
watched puddles form
in the mud. He sighed. The weather seemed to
be imitating his feelings as
perfectly as anything today. Or maybe
StarClan pitied him for that morning's
dreadful training
exercise.
It had all started with Nightpaw tripped him flat on
his face with that
battle technique Mighteye had demonstrated.
Obviously both cats were against
him, and he hated it. Though some
nagging thought told him it had been because
he let his
disappointment get to him, he relished blaming
Mighteye,
Nightpaw–even Rockpaw was a good target.
Around
the clearing he could see eyes glinting from their dens, watching
the
rain warily. Foxpaw made himself more comfortable in his crude
shelter and
replayed the exercise in the sandy hollow: Nightpaw,
tripping him again and
again every time he tried to nick Nightpaw
off his paws. And then, of course,
for Dragonpaw, who was doing as
poorly as he was, Mighteye decided it was
worth using his example
as a way of how not to attacking enemy warriors.
Rosepaw had
gibbered all the way back to camp later that afternoon, the sun
well
hidden behind stormy gray clouds. She had been nearly as good as
Nightpaw
and Whitepaw; both toms proved good in combat, and even
stupid
Rockpaw–Foxpaw admitted grudgingly–was good. Dragonpaw
did better then
him, and she didn't even try to raise a paw at
the white apprentice.
Nightpaw had even gone as far as to insult
him right in front of Mighteye. And
the stupid old flea-bag was
too busy praising his own little Rockpaw to
notice! Foxpaw bit
back a snarl as he thought grudgingly, And then you go and
blow up
cursing at him! Mouse-brained, feather-headed, stupid—
"Foxpaw!"
a loud voice called, and Foxpaw blinked his green eyes,
glancing
up. Outside the fallen log he could see Bristlepelt glaring at
him,
looking ill-tempered and cranky.
Foxpaw groaned,
remembering the best part of his day: As punishment for
nearly
jumping on Nightpaw and trying to pummel, him he was to clean
out
soiled bedding, get new moss, go over her pelt with
mouse-bile, and bring her
food (not that he had yet learned how to
hunt, of course).
Dejectedly he sped out across the clearing
and into the grassy space outside
the den. Bristlepelt was waiting
for him with her paws tucked under her and
her black eyes
glinting.
"Yes?" Foxpaw grunted.
"Show some
respect, I've done my duties a hundred times more than you
ever
will," she meowed smugly, flicking an ear. "Besides," she
meowed
slyly, "seeing as how often I have the fortune of you
caring for me, I
thought we'd be good old friends by
now."
Foxpaw ducked his head to hide his mutinous glare.
"Right," she grunted, "I want you to go dump
that"–she pointed to a
clump of rain-sodden moss–"behind
the nursery and go catch me something. I
have a preference for
birds, you know, the usual chaffinch, sparrow,
wagtail–"
"I can't hunt yet, it's only been two days." Foxpaw sighed.
"Oh?"
Bristlepelt perked her white ears in fake surprise. "Terribly
sorry.
Then go get me something from the fresh-kill pile."
Foxpaw
hesitated, wondering wether to find some sort of loophole that
was
weather-related, when the cranky elder snapped, "Now!" and
he ran for it.
Her tongue was as sharp as any set of claws!
He
skidded across the clearing, sending up sprays of water. His ginger
fur
stuck against his small frame. Approaching the pile he now
noticed a wet
bundle of tabby fur next to it, and he purred.
"Hi,
Greentail," he mewed delightedly, shaking water droplets from
his
fur.
"Nice way to give a greeting!" Greentail
meowed, ducking away as droplets
splattered her fur, though her
eyes brimmed with cheek. "StarClan, this is
too wet, even for
MistClan."
"Any birds?" asked Foxpaw hopefully.
"One
muddy sparrow," Greentail meowed, as the ginger tomcat selected
it.
"Who's it for? Bristlepelt?"
His mouth full of feathers, Foxpaw nodded.
Greentail's eyes were sympathetic.
"You know," she mewed suddenly,
looking mischievous, "all
you have to do is stuff in a few poppy seeds, and
there you go,
she'll be out faster than a rain on a fire. Oh, come on off
it,"
she meowed incredulously, seeing his disbelieving look, "I did
that
when I was an apprentice, and I never had to lift a claw
afterward. The elders
just slept on endlessly, which was a
complete mystery to the medicine cat."
Foxpaw's chest soared. Could it really work?
"But wouldn't Fawnspots
notice if I just walked into his den and took a
whole store of his
herbs?" he pointed out dully.
"Ah." Greentail gave her
ears a few quick strokes. "See, this is where
I come in. I'll
lure him away so you have enough time to take some poppy
seeds and
run for it."
"But—"
"FOXPAW!" came an
impatient yowling from across the camp: it was
Bristlepelt.
"Now or never, apprentice," mewed Greentail swiftly.
Foxpaw
flattened his ears, remembering the last time how Bristlepelt
had
mocked him mercilessly while he scooped out bedding. "Shame
I can't give
her a few deathberries while I'm at
it."
Greentail grinned broadly. "Foxpaw!" she gasped in
fake astonishment.
"She's a delicate, lazy, old codger of a
Clan elder! Show some
respect!"
"Or maybe a little
less," Foxpaw growled, tearing impatiently at the
ground with
his claws, imagining that it was Bristlepelt's fur. "Get
going;
hurry, please!" he added as another loud complaint rose into
the
air.
Greentail gave him a fake bow of importance, "O,
yes, great Clan leader,"
before nodding smartly and disappearing
toward Fawnspot's den, calling
loudly, "Fawnspots! Can you
look at something?"
He watched as the medicine cat and tabby
warrior left the fern-enclosed
clearing, and as fast as flash
Foxpaw pelted toward it.
He had never been inside the den
before, only just outside the small
enclosure. Through the gloom
of the rocky crevice he picked out the shape of
moss. That must be
Fawnspot's nest. There were other sparse nests for what
must be
patients, because the scent of sickness and cat was stale. He
edged
along nicks in the stone and piles of neatly-stacked herbs,
snuffling at
leaves and berries until he found what he was looking
for: tiny, black seeds.
Licking his pad, Foxpaw gently plucked
them on, shaking off extras. He limped
toward the bedraggled
sparrow and tore into the breast, hiding five poppy
seeds beneath
its plumage. Certain that they were well hidden, he grabbed
its
wing-tip gingerly and peeked outside.
No sign of Fawnspots or Greentail. Time to go.
Foxpaw couldn't have
felt less like a spy even if he tried, though a giddy
excitement
overcame him, and he trembled. Flattening his fur, the ginger
tomcat
stealthily padded over to Bristelpelt and laid the limp bird at
her
paws, hiding his twitching whiskers.
"About time,
too," she meowed ungratefully, snatching up the sparrow.
"Ugh!
All water-logged and everything! How MistClan can stand it is
beyond
me..."
The seeds seemed to be working (Foxpaw
dared to hope) and within a few
minutes her ranting broke into
tired snores.
Foxpaw gently back away, overcome with success.
The only thing missing
was—
"Greentail, you cheeky she-cat! Mouse-doffer, immature warrior!"
Foxpaw's (and
half a dozen others) heads turned to see Greentail dart into
camp,
her fur smoothed with rain water, but otherwise brimming.
Fawnspots
trotted after her, his fur bristling
indignantly.
"Honestly, playing me up with that load of
mouse-dung! There's a reason
you haven't gotten your own
apprentices yet!"
Beyond the gorsetunnel he could see the
brown-furred tom heave with
exasperation, his paws carrying him
back into LeafClan's camp. The medicine
cat snorted, glancing
pointedly at Greentail before disappearing into his
den.
Greentail
let out a mrrow of laughter as she joined Foxpaw, her
eyes
watering.
"What did you tell him?" Foxpaw meowed
curiously, embolden by her
success.
Greentail drew herself
up proudly. "That I was fathering another Clan
cat's kits, and
wanted him to check in private. I'm pretty sure he knew I
was
lying, but I had just downed three mice, so I might have looked
plumper...
Don't flatten your ears, it worked, didn't it?"
she meowed rather
bluntly, plopping down despite the constant
tearful rain showers.
Foxpaw grimaced. "That's something pretty serious to lie about–"
"Don't get your fur in a
twist," scoffed the brown she-cat, shaking her
head. "I've
been doing worse since I was kit; my apprentice ceremony was
almost
postponed, but Brownstar though otherwise...he thought a mentor
to
discipline me was a brilliant idea. Anyway, don't follow my
example, unless
you really want to keep dosing old she-cats with
sleeping drugs until you're
my age."
Through the sheets
of rain that wrecked the camp, Foxpaw saw Fawnspots nudge
Bristepelt,
shake his head slowly, and pad back toward his own den
again.
"Anyway!" grunted Greentail, heaving herself into a
stretch, "I have to
get going soon! I'm due for the evening
patrol with Scarface, Russeteye and,
ah, I believe a few of you
apprentices."
The flame-coated kitten's ears drooped with
disappointment. "Oh. Well,
see you, then."
"'Bye,
Foxpaw!" Greentail purred, quickly touching noses with him
before
charging through the much and mire. "Keep out of trouble!"
In
spite of himself, Foxpaw grinned, and when he turned away he saw
something
in the deserted clearing he hadn't expected to be
there: Cleverpaw.
The small-framed tabby was oblivious to
gusts of rain pounding his fur. He
merely shuddered, blinking
after the spot where Fawnspot's hindquarters had
vanished into
his den.
"Cleverpaw?" Foxpaw meowed, but his denmate
remained solitary. "Hey,
Cleverpaw, you're going to catch a
cold out in the rain!"
Cleverpaw, at the sound of his name,
gave a startled jump and spun on his
heels, whipping around
wildly. Upon seeing Foxpaw his long fur stopped
bristling. "Oh.
It's you."
"Yeah, me," Foxpaw meowed with a pang of
uncertainty. "Are you not
feeling well? I hope you realize that
Fawnspots is here to look after you; you
only have to give him
your say-so—"
"No!" Cleverpaw meowed in a much higher
voice than usual; his eyes were
wide with some unmasked emotion
that he couldn't read.
"It was just a thought!" Panic
washed over Foxpaw. Was Cleverpaw really
sick?
"I'm not
a kit anymore, and neither are you!" Cleverpaw hissed, lashing
his
tail. "I'm fine! Fine! Why does everyone keep asking?"
With
a final glance at the rocky shelter, Cleverpaw stalked away toward
their
own nests, muttering darkly. Foxpaw opened his mouth to call
an angry retort
after him, but he fell silent. What had riled
Cleverpaw up so badly? The tabby
was normally undisturbed and
relaxed; he never took a temper. Feeling lost, he
dragged his paws
across the clearing and headed for the fern enclosure that
made
their den. Padding inside, he carefully chose a nest away from
Cleverpaw.
The only cats out of the rain were Cleverpaw, himself,
and Sunpaw, dozing
sleepily in her nest.
His green eyes
rested briefly on the pale she-cat for half a heartbeat.
After
today's disastrous training, he wanted to be as far away
as he could from
Nightpaw and Rosepaw.
Slowly he circled
the moss clump until next to hers until he found a dry
spot; he
tucked in and slumped into it with grateful exhaustion. Next to
him,
Sunpaw mewled in her sleep and rolled onto her back.
Side-by-side, he listened
to the rain as it began to ease. The
sounds of the forest, a starling
chirruping, cats meowing to each
other outside their den, became meaningless
noise as Foxpaw's
eyes
drooped.
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Four
massive oaks rose into the sky. In a sheltered clearing, shaped
by
ancient times long past, Foxpaw found himself in the middle of
sweeping, tall
grass. He was confused. How did I get here? He
racked his memory for any
recollection of coming to the hollow
before settling down to sleep, but
nothing occurred to him. The
tom lifted his head and glanced up. The leaves
were so leafy and
inviting, flitting on warm breezes that tugged at his
fur
playfully.
Green? Leafy? It's leaf-fall, not
greenleaf! Foxpaw thought in
bewilderment. And when have the stars
ever been so close? The frosty lights
looked like they barely
reached the topmost branches of the great oaks he now
recognized
as Fourtrees.
A leaf-crackle in the undergrowth made him
freeze. Foxpaw exploded into a run
and just barely threw himself
into the shelter of a bramble bush. Ducking his
ears, he peered
out of the clump of leaves to see a pale gray outline crossing
the
clearing and standing with its back toward the Great Rock. A
familiar
scent hit the roof of his parted mouth.
Tsunamistar.
He
crouched lower, not out of respect, but fear for being caught spying.
From
across the tall grassy clearing came a rustle. His ears
swivelled toward it.
Pawsteps? he wondered. It sounded distant and
mute; suddenly, the noise become
louder, and a massive tomcat
stepped out. His fur glittered with the tangle of
stars, and under
a watery crescent-moon he looked halfway into the world of
StarClan,
half hidden among shadows and darkness. Foxpaw's belly
tightened.
He held his breath, not daring to call out.
His
scent was foreign yet not unfamiliar, the tang of LeafClan riding
a
breeze that tore clouds over the moon. Tattered, dappled
moonlight washed the
clearing in silver light, striking
Tsunamistar's broad shoulders. The two
cats stood apart a
tail-length for a moment's pause, then touched noses like
old
friends.
And with a feeling of dread, Foxpaw realized that the
waking world was well
behind him now: This was StarClan's
hunting grounds.
Am I dead?
"Do StarClan have a
message for me?" his leader asked, her ice-chipped
eyes
unmoving.
The brown cat nodded. "A time is fast-approaching
where imminent battle may
be upon your Clan, and the
forest."
Tsunamistar's fur bristled. "Can you explain
this to me? What is the
danger?" she meowed softly, but the
terror was still in her full-moon eyes.
The dead warrior's
pelt rippled. "Water and wind are abroad, as is an
enemy I
thought banished seasons ago. You must fear and carry so much on
your
shoulders; it is a burden that I tell you to fear those who
seem so innocent
and trusting."
Foxpaw's heart skipped
a beat. He strained his senses harder, desperate to
hear
more.
The old cat suddenly fixed his gaze past her shoulders
and parted his jaws,
trembling. "When darkness, fire, and air
collide, the earth, born in the
stars, shall shake the
sky."
Tsunamistar was as still as the massive rock behind
her, the wind picking up
and carrying over the ground the scent of
ice and fire of the wild places of
the night. His words had the
unmistakable ring of a prophecy.
The gray she-cat shuddered,
her fur on end. "Please, tell me what you
mean!"
"I
can tell you know more, for we have an audience," the old cat
rasped,
his night-eyes glinting amber in the darkness. Dappled
shadows shredded his
pelt; for a moment, his gaze crossed the
heather-ringed hollow, and Foxpaw
swore that for several
heartbeats too long they rested on where he hid.
He knows I'm
here! Foxpaw panicked, turning and running into the trees. His
paws
carried him into the thicket of trees, alive with forest-scents that
hung
crisply in his fur. He didn't know where he was going, just
that he had to
run, run as far as his legs would take him.
Bunching his muscles, Foxpaw
prepared to leap a shallow log when
the crunching of paws in the undergrowth
alerted him. He swivelled
his ears back, afraid of what he would see, despite
the fact that
those dreaming could not necessarily be hurt.
Before he could
move a whirl of fur crashed into him. Foxpaw opened his
mouth,
preparing to give off a noisy caterwaul when a thick bushel of tail
fur
clamped over his mouth. Two soft paws pinned him, and Foxpaw
was forced to
look up into a pair of familiar nettled, green eyes
and squared muzzle.
"Rosepaw?"
The she-cat glared
at him, though her ears twitched involuntarily. "These
woods,"
she hissed, "aren't safe! We shouldn't be here."
Gradually
she sheathed her claws and scrambled off him, allowing Foxpaw a
gasp
of air. Was this what that old cat meant when he said 'we have
an
audience," besides him?
"How—?" he spluttered.
Hesitantly, quite unsure if she was really here
or not, he padded
toward her and gave her a quick jab in the ribs. Rosepaw
recoiled
wth disgust.
"Ouch! What was that for?" she mewed crossly.
"S–Sorry," he stammered, relieved, "I just didn't—"
"Didn't think I could be here, too, did
you?" Rosepaw meowed tartly,
flattening her ears. "Well, too
bad, I am."
"What's going—" Foxpaw began, but before
he could finish they heard
the sound of many cats' paws drumming
against the forest floor. There came
deep, pattered meows that
sounded anxious, and an alien scent wreathed around
them, almost
sinister, far different from the presence of the
Starclan
warrior's.
Danger inflamed his instincts, and
Rosepaw, all disguise forgotten, yowled,
"Run!"
The two
apprentices shot out through the ferns and grass,
undergrowth
brushing their flanks as they propelled through the
dark trees. Slivers of
starlight cris-crossed their path, marking
unfamiliar trees as they plunged
deeper through the foliage. The
moon had vanished into an eerily gloomy sky,
and soon Foxpaw found
that he couldn't recognize the woods they
bounded
through.
"Rosepaw," he panted, "we need to stop—it seems safe to—"
Rosepaw, her eyes wild with
terror gradually, slid to a halt. The forest had
changed heavily.
Large, leafy planted furled with mist and gloom, and
gathering
among the roots of tree trunks were glowing mushrooms and fungi
that
had a transparent, musky yellow-green glow. Ivy curled about
rotting trees,
shaping a dark forest that was thick and pungent
with odd scents.
Rosepaw shivered. "This place has never
known warmth or sunshine," she
whispered hoarsely.
"The
sun never rises here?" Foxpaw meowed, glancing up to stare at
the
sky. It was an endless black void, as un-penetrable as
Mothermouth's winding
tunnels. It was all cold.
There were no stars.
"How d-did we get he-here?" he asked,
scanning the branches for any sign
of life.
Rosepaw, for
once, couldn't find an answer to the question. "We've
left
StarClan's territory far behind us."
"We need to
go, we need to get out of here," the ginger apprentice
meowed.
"Oh, can't we just wake up?"
Off in the distance he
heard a sound that filled him with dread: an odd sort
of chanting,
vibrating within him from tail-tip to nose. This forest
seemed
sinister, hunted by things he didn't dare try to name, as
if keeping them
unspoken of would banish their existence. But by
how much? he wondered darkly,
unsheathing his claws into the peaty
ground.
Rosepaw shifted her paws uneasily, scuttling up dead
leaves. "You hear
that?"
"Cats," Foxpaw agreed
softly. "Come on, whatever it"–he
swallowed–"is, we
better move on before they can catch up."
"But how did we
get here?" she wondered, sniffing the creaky wet-wood set
of an
oak's bark. "However we managed to leave Fourtrees and wind up
here,
it isn't a good place. There's no light."
Foxpaw
couldn't hold back any longer. "Do you think we're dead?"
he
blurted out, his voice coming out as a squeak.
Rosepaw
hesitated for a heartbeat, then: "No, we're very much alive.
My
heartbeat is going so wildly I thought it would burst from my
chest."
"But how did we both–you know?" He had no
words for how they had both
eavesdropped on their Clan leader and
warrior ancestors.
Again, Rosepaw looked uncertain, even
terrified. A dim light kindled in her
stormy green eyes, reliving
Foxpaw's own fears.
"I don't know," she mewed. "But
we weren't suppose to hear
that—" She stopped suddenly, her
ears pricked. The odd mix of chanting-few
voices had grown
slightly into a distant thunder of noise.
"Let's head this
way; move it!" she hissed, glancing toward a dark
corner of
leaves and brambles.
Foxpaw nodded, her urgent mew reawakening
him somehow and giving him energy.
"Lead the way." Together,
side-by-side, they bounded into the leafy
bushes, pushing through
the
darkness.
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Something was shaking Foxpaw hard. He snored heavily and muttered a curse.
"What? What's the matter? Is StoneClan invading or
something?" he
grunted, batting away at the persistent paws with
sleepiness.
"No," growled a voice, "but we do have a
problem. Blackmask is
back."
Foxpaw's green eyes shot
open as he gazed up into Nightpaw's stoic face.
The tabby shook
his head and padded outside, his tabby fur outlined by the
light
of a near-full moon. Sitting up, the ginger apprentice saw
some
stragglers milling about the cramped den, shaking their
fellows awake. Fangpaw
nudged Rosepaw until she staggered to her
paws, and then slipped outside.
They found each other's eyes
and stared, each mirroring the same
bewilderment and shock.
Rosepaw stood, jerked with her head for him to hurry,
and followed
Nightpaw outside.
Foxpaw glanced around. Sunpaw was gone, her nest
cold and warm scent stale;
he could feel beads of hot sweat
sticking beneath his facial fur, and
unwillingly he stretched,
padding outside with anxiety prickling his pads.
Cold night air
gushed over his face; the storm clouds had cleared.
The rest
of the Clan was gathered at the center of camp in a ragged
circle,
their fur bristling and hackles raised. He squeezed his
way through the
company, rudely bumping into Palefur until he
stood between Bugpaw and
Talonwing. Blackmask was limping forward
from the gorsetunnel, exhausted and
wiry, and his companion wasn't
much better off: a large, muscular tom with a
clumped, dirty
rowan-red tabby fur and a white-marked faced and speckled
torso.
Gray hairs tinged his tail-tip and around his muzzle, but he
still
looked strong, a few more active moons before retirement,
perhaps.
"Tsunamistar." Flowernose stepped forward,
looking small among the older
cats. She had only been named a
warrior two moons ago. "Who is this?"
The LeafClan leader
stepped forward so that she stood almost nose-to-nose
with the
loner. "This," she meowed, "is Toadstep, a former warrior
of
LeafClan."
Murmuring broke out, and a few older
cats—Russeteye and Moontree, for
example—called out
greetings.
"Former?" meowed a suspicious voice, and
without even turning his head to
see the speaker Foxpaw recognized
Bristlepelt's scathing voice.
"So you're awake." Tsunamistar blinked calm blue eyes at the elder.
"Yes,"
she meowed, and fixed the loner with cool eyes. "I
remember
watching you in the nursery," she grunted, "and then
you were that spying
little apprentice, but still, Brownstar saw
that you were made a senior
warrior." Her eyes narrowed. "Why
do you come back now?"
"It was at my request," growled
Tsunamistar, and at that moment Blackmask
heaved and slumped onto
his side, panting heavily. Loyalheart darted forward
and sniffed
his flank, glancing back into the sea of faces.
"Fawnspots!"
she called, waiting to see the medicine cat come ambling
forward
with a bundle of herbs between his teeth.
Tsunamistar waved
her tail to silence the chorus of meowing. "All is
safe," she
assured them with warmth and confidence. "Smokeheart,
Eveningsun,
I would like you to take the moonhigh patrol. Everyone else,
return
to your dens, please. Toadstep, Loyalheart, if you would—"
She
beckoned them with her tail, and the three cats, with
Fawnspots
supporting Blackmask, headed for the medicine cat's
den. Foxpaw tried to
catch his leader's eye, but she stared
straightforward with no disturbance
to punctuate her concerned
expression.
The cats broke apart, some nodding approval,
others looking uncertain. In a
disordered line the apprentices
scuttled for their nests, Mighteye meowing
over their heads, "Come
on, the lot of you, bright and early tomorrow!
Don't forget that
tomorrow night is the Gathering!"
Foxpaw slumped into his
nest beside Sunpaw, who fidgeted awkwardly and
squeaked, "'Night,"
before curling up to sleep. To his immense surprise,
however,
Rosepaw padded over to join them, followed by a
contemptuous-looking
Nightpaw.
The two cats didn't glance
at each other: in fact, the only one who spoke
was Nightpaw, only
to mutter, "Tomorrow's news, I suppose."
The apprentices
nodded and called out sleepy meows before settling in. Only
Foxpaw
remained awake, Sunpaw and Rosepaw flanking him on either side.
That
dream was too real to not have happened. I didn't imagine
it, he told
himself. Rosepaw was there, and so was Tsunamistar.
And Blackmask was back.
What about Toadstep? And that prophecy?
Questions he couldn't answer swarmed
like angry bees in his
head, until finally he only managed, Where was that
starless
place? before he fell into a dreamless sleep.