Hey, here is the rewrite. I hope you like it.

I don't own any of the original characters or plot, J.K Rollings does.

You have probably heard all the stories of the "Golden Trio." How they defeated Voldemort, their great adventures, their friends, and even more their enemies, but only one person really knows what happened, and that's me. I was there when it all happened. It wasn't as glorious as you might think. But that's what people do they want everything to be so perfect and right that they forget what really is important, and that's love and family. I'm one of the few who have experienced that. The first look, the first hug, and the first real memory, it may not seem a lot to some, but it means everything to those few. Some may say that it was a mess and that it was just another fling. And it was a mess, but it never would be just a fling. It would last for the rest of our lives. Right about now you are probably wanting to now what happened, so I will tell you. It all started with two enemies.

"Hey, mud blood," I yelled after Hermione. I had so much pent up anger in side that I didn't know what to do with it. So Hermione was at the receiving end of my anger. I sure wasn't angry at her. I was angry with my father, my life always being second, and most of all I think I was actually jealous of Hermione, for always be better than me and seeming to have a perfect life, but oh boy was I wrong. But I'm getting of track. She turned around frustrated. "What ferret? Have you come to apologizes, for being alive?" she snapped back. Before I could open my mouth, she said, "No, then I don't want to hear it. I've had enough of your rude comments and your utterly absurd commits, like mud blood for example. So just take your comments and shove them up your arse." With that she walked away. Her friends snickered and followed her. I stocked off with a scowl. That was point one to her, but oh was I going to get her back.

So what did u think?? I know it is short, but I don't have that much time. Please review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will not write another chapter unless at least three people don't review. Look, I will give u a fantabulouse reward for your reviews.

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Me!!!!!!!