This story is over for now. I tried writing another chapter and I got bitched at I may bring it back later but for right now it makes me sick to write it. The story didn't come out right and I keep making mistakes.

My writing is better then this I swear go read some of my other work. My characters can tend to be occ but they are like 4 or 5 years older then they were in the show that many years could change a person.

Gaz has been thinking about Tak a lot since she left. Have you ever heard of absence makes the heart grow fonder? Gaz has started from time to time feel love not only about Tak but about other girls because of it she has become more defensive and mean around Dib. Yes I meant for her to call him Dib-Stink

As for Tak yes she can feel love but it is a defect (that was going to be explained in later chapters) At one point a long time ago Irken's could feel love and reproduce but they lost the ability when the test tube birthing came about. Feeling love is a defect. The bolt in her head is supposed to fix her defects but feeling love is one that didn't get fix.

I do have a learning disorder when it comes to spelling and grammar, I have a very hard time getting my ideas down on to paper. I often time have anxiety attacks during class because I know what I want to say but I can't get it out. It's easier when I type though because I have spelling and grammar check

So the story is over it is gone. If I do rewrite it (which I highly doubt) it will not be for a long time. Sorry If I seem bitchy its just I was having a really bad day today and I got a flame and I went back and realized what a piece of crap this story is. I really am sorry.