Hi everyone this is my first time posting a story in fanfiction so i hope you like it, please do not copy my story.Please review!

I do not own Cars,nor Herbie, Horace, Giselle, Jim, Simon or Trip. Herbie and Trip comes from disney Herbie fully loaded, Jim, Giselle,Simon and Horace comes from

other Herbie films. I do own Carolina, Kiro and DouglasI who are my only original characters...for now.

It will really help if you review, my family been bugging me to post my stories in the internet, I would really appreciate if you can leave a review.

Any who have seen Herbie film and seen that I've change the character a bit can message me, and i can explain, their is a whole other side of the story that i am still thinking of posting online so i would need a lot of people for me to know their interested...i will still be thinking if i'll posted till then alot will be left unknown.

CHAPTER ONE: Trapped!

Carolina breathing was heavy, she was bruised all over but Herbie was in worst condition then her. Herbie and her backed away further

from Kiro who had a long evil grin across his grill. "I cant believe that idiot Horace couldn't finish you off you guys are so pathedic"

said Kiro with a smirk has he rewved his engine and charged toward Herbie and Carolina. A white glow stopped him dead and in seconds

the glow was gone, but so were they.

I know I know the chapter was very short but the next chapter will be posted very soon very soon and i hope it has caught a few of your attentions, and i hope the little bit so far you like, please leave a review and any one who wants to know about Carolina well she is in the other side of the story that i am unsure i will post online, You will learn a little about her in this story, but you wont learn how she whined up with herbie in the first place if your interested just let me know. Hope you liked it, though it isn't much.