I had lots of fun writing this and im sure you guys had a lot of fun reading it too. At the end of the last chappie I wanted to add some of the lyrics of this song I was listening to and its called ill be goes like this:

I'll be your cryin shoulder

I'll be love suicide

I like that first part…its cute! My friends are going to add on to this later and share their points of view on how it turned out and if they liked it or not.