So I took Cowgirl4Christ's advice and am re-writing this chapter and I gave it more detail. So read it again! Once again, this is still just the intro chapter.

Chapter 1

"The Trouble Begins"

Miley's POV

Me, Oliver, Jake, Lilly, and Jackson were all walking back to school sine Lilly and I forgot our history books. It's already 6 pm so I'm hoping that the janitor will still be here. It's storming out real bad. When we left it wasn't even raining out but now it's pouring, thundering and lightning.. We're just gonna go in and come back out. Simple as that, five minutes. We have a 4 day weekend! We're off from friday untill monday. We go back tuesday. After the first semester Jackson became friends with us. Weird I know, but he's actually pretty cool. He still picks on me and does all the brother stuff, but atleast we're friends. Okay so we're here, Lilly and I wrung our hair out so it wasn't soaked. Luckily the janitor is here. We walked up to my locker, since Lilly had her history stuff in my locker. I started looking through my locker for it. Oh gosh I can't find it.

"C'mon Miley. Hurry up." Jackson whined, "If you don't hurry up we're gonna get locked in here"

"Oh knock it off Jackson, if you keep it up. She's gonna take a lot longer." I heard Lilly say holding her fist up to him. Haha. That girl seizes to amaze me. Thinking she can beat Jackson up.

"Okay, I found them. We can go now." I informed them.

"Finally!" Jake, Oliver, and Jackson said all at the same time. Lilly and I glared at them. Suddenly the light's went out, then a loud CRACK and I looked behind me into one of the classrooms and saw a flash.. Wow, Lilly and I aren't the only one's to jump. The only light they had was from the window's in the classrooms. The corners of the hallway had darkness pouring out into the rest of the wall. I never imagined that the lockers would look scary. All most as if something was gonna jump out of them.

"Uh, w-w-what was that?" Lilly asked getting scared and grabbed onto the first person she felt. That just happened to be Jackson.

"You baby." Jackson said while laughing lightly. I know that he's scared because he's afraid of the dark. He never told anybody that before. I just know because I'm his sister. He started speaking again, "The light's went out. My guess is the janitor left because you two took so long and he didn't think anybody was still in here."

"Yeah that had to have been what happened, Oliver and I will go see if the doors are locked. Jackson you stay here with the girls." Jake said dragging Oliver along with them. While they were gone we didn't say anything. Lilly was still clinging onto Jackson's arm. I had a hold of his other arm. I was so scared right now. I didn't want to be in here all weekend. That will ruin all of our plans! Jake has a photoshoot on sunday. Hannah Montana has an interview on a talk show tomorrow and a concert on Saturday.

"Uh, girls, and Jackson, we're locked in. The janitor left, and the powers out. So we can't use the phones here at school. We don't get service here at school. This storm's supposed to last a loong time." Oliver said getting worried.

"WHAT! NO WAY!" Me and Lilly said at the same time and let go of Jackson.

"Could this get any worse?" I whined.

"Let's go to the lunch room and see what we can get to eat. I don't know about you guys but i'm hungry!" Jake said. Boy do I agree, I didn't eat very much lunch, I was planning on eating dinner when Jackson and I got home. I just realized. It's all my fault. All of it. My fault. I had to take so long because I couldn't find them. Oh my gosh. I'm such a bad person. We could have always borrowed Oliver or Jake's book.

"Hmm, what about this?" Oliver said holding a frozen pizza.

"Sure, why not." I answered and shrugged my shoulders. I haven't had pizza in a long time.

Oliver walked over to the oven with the pizza in hand. He opened the oven door, put the pizza in and turned the oven onto 350 degrees.

"How long?" I asked him.

"About 20 minutes." He replied. We all walked back into the cafeteria and sat down at a table. I'm still pretty scared. It looks so dark and gloomy in the lunch room. Darkness creeping out of every corner. Every table. Every chair. It made it seem so unearthly.

"JACKSON!" I accidently yelled.

"What?!" He replied.

"We forgot to tell dad where we were going! We just left! He's probably worried sick by now! Ahh." I yelled again.

"SHOOT! I totally forot to tell him. I still can't believe we're locked in here!" Jackson said throwing his hands up in the air.

"I know, Miley, it's kind of your fault. I mean couldn't you get detention one time, or you could've atleast taken a little faster." Jake said. WHAT! He think's it's MY FAULT! Well, it kind of is my fault but he doesn't have to be mean about it! Plus, it's Lilly's too.

"It's not just Miley's fault! I forgot my homework too!" Lilly stood up for me.

"Fine then. It's both of your faults. You're both the reason that we're locked up in here!" Jake said and looked pretty mad.

"Hey! Don't take it out on the girls." Oliver replied narrowing his eyes down at Jake.

"Well it is their fault" Jake started raising his voice louder and louder.

"No, it's not! They didn't mean to forget there history homework. And to answer you're question. No, they couldn't get detention one time! If you were actually there friend you would know that if they got detention one more time. They're gonna get suspended for 3 days because they already got detention countless times for falling asleep in class, not doing homework, etc." Wow, Oliver's so nice, Sticking up for us. Aww, how sweet.

"Oh I'm sorry that I have to be a hott movie star that doesn't have time for people back home because i'm to busy shooting movies!" Oh that egotistical maniac! I kept listening to them argure. Untill, Jake punched Oliver's stomach. Oliver returned that with a crunch to Jake's jaw. Ouch. That gotta hurt. They started rolling around on the ground fighting. Untill I stopped it.

"STOP IT!" I yelled "This is ridiculas!" Jake and Oliver stopped punching eachother and looked up at me. Everybody was suprised. I never yelled unless I was really mad. It has been 20 minutes so I stormed off into the kitchen. Grabbed a pot holder, opened up the oven door, took out the pizza and grabbed a peice and put it on a plate. I'm guessing they're all still pretty suprised, one of them would have came to me by now. I went back into the halls. They're a lot darker and scarier now. I slowly crept down the halls of darkness and what now seemed like doom. Each corner had even more darkness seeping out from it. Like, it was coming out to get me. I got even more scared and ran down the hall, pizza still in hand, I ran around a corner and down to a class room. I looked closly at the name. Mr. Riley. I made my way to a desk, sat on top of it, and at my pizza. I threw the plate away at the desk and started singing.

"Who said, who said I can't be worldwide
I say, I say time is on my side
Who said, who said i can't be ten feet tall
I say, I say that i can have it all

Who said, who said I can't be Superman
I say, I say that I know I can
Who said, who said i won't be President
I say, I say you ain't seen nothin' yet you ain't seen nothing yet.." I was about to finish untill someone interrrupted me. I looked closly at the dark figure and realized it was Oliver when he started speaking. While he was speeking he sat on a desk next to me.

"I think that it would be pretty cool if you'd be president. The first girl to be president. Wow that would be soo cool, and have you ever thought about being ten feet tall?!" Oliver said, it seemed like he was trying to cheer me up.

I giggled slightly, he had a point. "Yeah you're right it would be pretty cool."

"Are you okay Miles?" Oliver asked me sincerely.

"Yeah, I'm fine. You know, you're the only one that cares. Sometimes you gotta run out or something to figure out who will follow. The ones that follow are the one's that really care." I said with a hint of sadness in my voice.

"Don't say that Miley, Lilly and Jackson care about you. I think that we were just all suprised that you blew up like that." Oliver was trying to comfor me, it was somewat working.

"I only blew up like that because you two were beating eachother up! I hate it when people fight, and if they cared they would have-" I was trying to finish untill Lilly interrupted me.

"Geez Miley. Think you could pick the place that would be farthest away from the cafeteria! It took us forever to find you. I don't know how Oliver did it so fast. We went out right after we ate, which was pretty quick by the way. We tried to follow where Oliver went but we got lost!" Lilly exaggerated on forever. "Come on. It's 7:30 let's go look around." Lilly, Jake, and Jackson all walked out.

"See Miles? They really do care. Maybe I showed up first but atleast they showed up. C'mon let's go." Oliver said, jumped off the desk and held a hand out to help me up. I gladly took it. Let go and grabbed his arm to keep myself from getting lost in the darkness and we followed Jackson, Lilly, and Jake

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Next chapter: they find a hidden place. That's haunted, and look's like it was for a royal family. It look's like a palace. What does it do to them? Oliver's POV next. REVIEW!

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