Lovelyanime: Hello everyone! This is LA-san at your surface! I know I should be working on my stories, but I decided to do this for a second. This is the first poem I have really ever made and it's part of my homework for English. I want to know if anyone likes it before I turn it in on Monday. I'm really embarrassed to turn it in and not sure if anyone will like it. My teachre says the poem can be any style we want and has to be 14-20 lines. It doesn'y really have to rhyme too. I based this poem on Hinata and she talks about Naruto. So lets see how everyone likes it

Declaimer: Lovelyanime does not own Naruto.

2/28/07

Poem- Hinata's poem.

He would look at me
With those deep blue ocean eyes of his
The first time I saw them, I fell into a deep spell
A spell that took hold of me so many years ago

He was under his own spell though
He cared for another girl
Thought she was beautiful and smart
While I was just weird and plain

Everyone knows of my deep spell
He had cast upon me years ago
Except for him since he
Can be quite dense at times
But I never cared that he did not know
If he did, he would most likely keep his distance

If he ends up with another
I would not mind as long as he is happy
I would put his feelings before mine
For that is part of the spell he put me under
Funny, I would fall for someone like him
And funnier if he would fall for someone like me

Twelve year old Hinata set down her pencil and read what she had written over and over. Her class was having free time so she had decided that she could write a poem. Since she did not have anything else to do except talked to Sakura and Ino; in her case listen to Sakura and Ino.

Hinata glanced over at Naruto and blushed. He was bothering Sasuke about how he was going to become hokage. Sasuke just ignored him as he tried to read a scroll he had in front of him.

"Naruto-kun." Hinata sighed.

She then saw Naruto glance toward her direction as he stopped talking. Hinata gave out a little squeak as she looked away. Kiba laughed at her as he sat next to her. He had been talking with Shino about how Akamaru was doing since he was sick.

Hinata looked back at her poem. She grabbed it and folded it a couple times before putting it in her pocket. She sighed to herself as she continued to watch Naruto after he thought he was imagining things. Hinata continued to watch him and thought about what the future would come for the both of them.

End of poem

Lovelyanime: I hope it was good. Please review and tell me how it was please. Flames are welcomed to I guess. I was thinking about writing a Sakura talking about Sasuke one and see if people like that one. Which story gets the most and best reviews will be the one I turn in. But if they're both the same, I'll turn them both in. Since I have to write five poems and I have a free choice.( I have to write childhood memory, love/not love, war, nature, free choice) So I could put two love poems. Anyway, please review to tell me if I need to change things or keep as is. I've never written a poem before; a love one at that! So I don't know how good or bad it is. Please review! (does puppy dog eyes) It would make me really happy.

Hinata: Thank you for reading the poem. Lovelyanime really appreciates it.