Dear Readers,
Well, as sad –or as happy—as it may seem, I might want to delete this story. No--it's not becaues of Flame Rising's last comment (believe me, I have better things to fret about than to fret about). It's just that, I had no idea where I was going with this ...especially since the last chapter!
Because this was my first Fanfic, I find my writing so immature and less thought-out. The beginning wouldn't catch my eye if I was reading it as a reader, and the whole story seems so done over that it just seems so unrealistic. Come on, all the D-Tent taking an immediate friendship to her?!?! How self-inserted (lol)!!
As I was complaining in my Alex story, writer's block has me gripped, but with this story there might be no hope.
But NEVER FEAR—if you guys really want to see this story well thought-out, more mature, and more realistic (if there is a way), than send me a line saying so. I was thinking of rewriting this anyways, because I couldn't bear to read it over and think of how to add in another chapter. Believe me, I still have the whole idea in my head (about the mystery and stuff), but I didn't think the whole thing through enough.
Well, to those who want to read some well thought-out, more mature, and more realistic writings, check out my oneshot (for now) on Holes called The Aftermath of His Hurricane. It's really neat stuff –from what I heard—and I guarantee you that you haven't read anything like it!!
May your keyboard stay fresh!
Lalika K
PS: Don't forget to tell me your input: rewrite/encourage to go on?
PPS: Should The Aftermath of His Hurricane be a oneshot, or should I go on with it?