This is my third chapter…no duh.
But seriously people, let's add up some reviews PEOPLE!
Anyway Numbah 55 I'll try to put in Numbah 5 in…it's a hard chose but I'll try to fit her in on the next two or three chapters.
Anyway this chapter isn't much…hoping you like.
By Tenkan Cormboo
Chapter.3: Walking High on the Bridge of the Green Gate
There were no turns, no cracks, and no way that Nigel Uno going to survive this bridge. This was known as The Bridge of the Green Gate.
He tried looking beyond but could not see, the whole bridge was covered with fog, and the only way to find out what lurks behind it is to…cross it.
He had second thoughts, "This bridge is way to risky, I don't really have to give the Envelope for real, I can just rip it up and say that I already did it, or say that I…wait a minute, what's wrong with me, I'm not a coward…I'm Numbah One, Kids Next Door Supreme Leader of Sector V…I can do anything more riskier than this"
He took a few steps forward just before he started crossing it; he took one deep breath, and then stepped on it. An echoey empty metal noise came out, he's never been this far in the Land of IPS, it feels…creepy to him.
He took one big swallow and took another step, then slowly by slowly, each step he took went faster and faster, he had to, to cross this bridge in time…whilst running he kept these words in his mind, that his father told him before he dropped him off because he knew Nigel will get such a burden like this, those words were going in his head, nonstop, All you have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to you.
Running with great haste, afraid if anything would just grab him from front or back, or even from the sides. There was no time; if he wanted to get there safe he had to run. He couldn't see a thing, just fog and every time he looked down, only the path he could see, no balusters to help Nigel if he fell off, it was just a narrow hard metal stick. He was nearly there, that's what he thought, but that was just the beginning.
He was thinking…what if right now, his life would end, what will his friends think or even his family think, there was not knowing what will happen next.
Panting…it was useless, there was still about a whole kilometer of running, to tired, he needed a break.
"Who cares…" he panted, bending down to catch his breath, "…why am I doing this, there's no reward, no gratitude, just me trying to deliver a stupid envelope for a stupid Secretary. I don't even know what he/she looks like." He stood up straight and started walking slowly, not looking down.
After a 5 minute walk Nigel spots a small pillar, and around it balusters. He quickly ran towards it and leaped over in, he was safe for now, inside this cold area, just for a rest…but the journey didn't even start yet…there is still more coming to Nigel Uno…more…
Well…I hope you liked it…but I didn't put a lot of effort here, next chapter I'm sure I will.
I just needed more ideas, that's all. I just hope have enough for the next chapter, which might take long to post.
From: Tenkan Cormboo (A writer who needs some help getting ideas)
Thank you….