Here is teh start of a nwe story hope you like.

Chapter One:

They had been walking for days now and still no sign of him. Kagome held her bag as she tried to pick up the on the jewel. "I know that Naraku is around here with him." Kagome was losing it as she ran through the forest. Naraku had just appeared out of nowhere and just took Inuyasha away from her. He laughed when he disappeared, the thing was even though they couldn't see him she could sense the jewel still. They had been running almost all day and the sun was only a few more hours away from being gone from sight. "Kagome are you sure the jewel is moving this way?" Kagome looked at Miroku who sat behind her. "Yes. Its like he's moving slowly so we don't miss him." Speaking the words made her skin stand on its ends. Kagome knew that this had to be a trap for her but she wasn't about to leave Inuyasha to him. They were about to run through a small clearing when an aura made Kagome stop Sango. "Someone is coming at us fast." Sango pulled on Kirara to make her stop running. Kagome jumped off and looked as a white blur came at her. "Sesshomaru." Kagome was still looking when the blur came to a stop in front of her. "Where is he?" "Who?" "Human don't play with me. Where is that demon Naraku?" Kagome looked at Sesshomaru then noticed that a small voice was missing. "Where is Rin?" "That is why I am asking you girl where is Naraku?" "For the last time my name is Kagome and I am hunting him down myself." Sesshomaru stopped and when he took in who was standing before him he saw that someone was missing. "So we both are being pulled to that demon." Kagome nodded and before she could say another word Sesshomaru pulled her onto his shoulder and started off after the smell of the demon Naraku. Sango was in shock but told Kirara to follow as fast as she could.

Soon Sesshomaru stopped near a cliff where the scent stopped. "That best should be here." Kagome was looking around and looked over the cliff. "Uh, what is that?" Sesshomaru looked passed the girl in her odd white shirt and green shirt at the red pool below them. "That is a pool of dead demons. Years ago humans in the mountains started to toss the bodies of their killed demons here. Soon the blood of the demons would seep out and formed that pool. The blood is like acid to any living thing, so if you or I were to fall in we would die." Kagome took a step away from the cliff when she felt the jewel coming at her fast. Kagome turned in time to see a red blur coming at her. Kagome hit the floor as Inuyasha landed on her. "Inuyasha!" Kagome hugged the man on her till she heard the voice of Rin crying. She looked up to find that Naraku still had Rin tight laughing at the great Sesshomaru. "What will you do? I will snap this little girl like a twig if you take one step towards me." Kagome looked at Sesshomaru and saw that he wasn't going to make a more. He seemed to be stuck in thought about how he was going to get to her without harming her. Kagome then felt a hand touch her cheek; Inuyasha was looking at her as he smiled. "I am so glad your not hurt Kagome. I will help my brother." Inuyasha jumped and drew his sword. "Don't make me laugh half-breed. She will be dead before you take your next breath." Inuyasha and Sesshomaru stood as the wind blew passed them. Rin cried some more as Naraku tightened his grip on the back of her shirt. "Please save me Sesshomaru." Kagome stood behind them all and she looked at the ground she had one arrow left. "I got it." Kagome ran passed the two demons and at Naraku. "I knew you'd come priestess." Naraku tossed Rin at Kagome as she came near. Kagome stopped to catch Rin as she did large tentacles came flying at her. "I don't think so." Inuyasha came swinging at the tentacles severing them from their owner. Kagome smiled as she started to run with Rin in her arms. "You wont get away from me this time Kagome." Naraku grew more arms to block Kagome and Rin from getting back into the forest where Sango was. Rin screamed as Kagome picked her back up. "Hold on Rin we'll get away." "Okay." Rin held tight to Kagome as she backed up then Kagome had to jump as two large tentacles came bearing down at her. "Kagome!" Inuyasha was about to move when a green light passed his face. Sesshomaru stood as he sent his poison whip again at the arms reaching for Rin. "You wont touch her again you nasty half-breed." Naraku laughed as he saw the anger in the dog demons' eyes.

As Naraku took his eye away from Kagome he started to fight with the two dogs before him. Kagome took in a deep breath as she released her grip on Rin a little. Kagome then saw a little white cat peeking out from the forest. "Sango!" Kagome took Rin's hand and started to run for Sango and the others. "Not today!" Naraku pushed Sesshomaru and Inuyasha to the ground then turned sharply to Kagome.

"Kagome!" Sango tried to reach her best friends hand but was ripped off when Naraku wrapped his large tentacle around her and Rin. "No!" Naraku pulled Kagome away from her friends and back into the fight. Kagome held onto Rin as tears of fear ran down her face. Kagome tried to use her priestess powers to get Naraku to let go but Rin's shaking was causing her to lose her concentration. "Rin it's okay Sesshomaru wont let anything happen to you and neither will I." Rin took in a deep breath as she looked out to where her Sesshomaru was.

Inuyasha and Sesshomaru saw Naraku take hold of Kagome and Rin. "No you don't!" Inuyasha rushed Naraku knocking him to the ground as the tentacle that held Kagome was forced into the air Sesshomaru used his claws to sever it. "You fools walked right into my trap." Inuyasha turned to see that Naraku had the girls over the cliff and when Sesshomaru severed the tentacle the girls were left with only one option to fall. "Kagome!" Inuyasha started to run to the cliff but when he reached the edge all he could see was Kagome and Rin hit the blood pool. "I'm going in after them." "You can't if you do then you will die with them." Inuyasha looked up at his brother and it looked like he had a tear in his eye. "This is all your fault!" Inuyasha turned to the laughing Naraku. "I have done what I came to do. I will fight you again dog boys but I want to give the death of those girls to sink in." Naraku disappeared in a cloud of purple smoke. Inuyasha fell to his knees, as he could no longer see Kagome. "Inuyasha!" As Inuyasha turned around he fell right into Sango's arms. He felt his body give as he realized that his love was killed before him and like Kikyou he could do nothing. Sesshomaru walked away from the group and back into the forest alone.

As night fell Inuyasha sat near a tree when they finally stopped for the night. Sango tried to make food with smile but was having a hard time pushing back the tears. Miroku sat holding the little fox who was crying so hard he was having trouble catching his breath. "Kagome is gone!" "Shippo she will always be in your heart." "I want her here with me!" Shippo buried his head into the robes of the monk. Miroku looked over at Inuyasha who hadn't said a word in hours. "You know you did all you could." Inuyasha looked up at Sango who was trying to smile at him. "I should have known what he was up to." Sango looked away Inuyasha was still beating himself up over Kagome's death. As night continued on the group sat and ate. The wind started to pick up and everyone felt cold.

As Kagome was Falling:

Kagome felt the wind as the tentacle was severed from its owner and she and Rin were falling. "Rin hold on tight to me." Kagome closed her eyes as she felt the blood touch her skin as the two fell in. At first they felt nothing Kagome was holding all her thoughts to holding back the blood with her spiritual power. Rin started to cry louder and Kagome could feel the power of the blood around them. "Rin don't let go of me no matter what happens." "Okay." As Kagome's barrier started to fall the blood started to leak on to the two. Rin screamed out in pain as the blood started to dissolve her skin. Kagome felt her body starting to burn so she looked deep inside and found all the power she had. "Kagome!" "Hold on Rin!" Kagome then lost all consciousness as she looked at Rin falling asleep. "We have to live, Naraku can't win."

As night moved on the pool of blood started to move. Kagome shot up out of the blood gasping for air. Kagome pulled herself and Rin out of the bloody pool and onto solid ground. "Rin are you okay speak to me." Rin opened her eyes and smiled. "We lived. I'm not sure how but we lived."