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Wait of the Opertune Moment Luv

I sat on my bed, holding my legs up to my stomach as the teers rolled down my face. "Look at me, I am crying, again!" I yelled at myself. "Sitting here and crying isn't going to stop Jack from being hanged!" I scolded myself as I wiped the tears from my cheeks. I herd a knock on the door and glared at it.

"Miss, can I have the honor of comming in?" Asked a maid. Her name is Rachel and is a dear friend to me.

"Rachel, don't call me Miss. You know it erks me." I scolded her.

"I am sorry Korie, I guess I have forgotten, you know, it's been around a year that you have been gone."

"Yeah, I guess so. So much has happened, I guess I forgot about time."

"Well, what did you do when you were gone? Those pirates didn't hurt you, did they?" Rachel asked walking into my room and comming over to me. She sat down on the edge of the bed and folded her legs like she was meditating, which she does a lot.

"Pirates aren't as bad as people make them out to be, well, at least the ones I was with. I don't think it is right that they are going to be hanging Jack at all." I sobbed.

"Korie, shhhh, it's going to be ok Korie, you will forget about him soon enough, he will just be some other man that gets hanged." Rachel said wrapping her arms around me. I pushed her away and stood up, glaring at her.

"He will never just be another man that gets hanged! He is my friend and I can't just stand there watching him die! I will never forget him!" I yelled.

"So you do truley care about him? Good, Will, Lizzy and I have thought of something." Rachel said smiling.

"What?"

"That was kind of a test on how far you are willing to go."

"No, I got that, but Will and Elizabeth are helping me? I thought that they hated me!"

"No, they were just a little shaken up about the whole thing, you know, her getting taken away, and all. Don't you remember you three being close friends? Well, this is how they are going to repay you for bringing them together again."

"Well, took long enough, do you think that it will work?" I asked.

"Yes, I made the plans myself!" Rachel said smiling.

"Oh, nothing can go wrong then, especially when you tried to get me out of Port Royal before and I ended up being arrested for being a Pirate!" I yelled recalling the whole reason why I was even in the cell when I met Jack.

"Hey, I didn't know that they would be so harsh! I thought that if they caught you they would go easy since you knew them and all, but this plan is different. Four people are doing it, not just two."

"Fine, let's hear it." I siad. Rachel told me everything to do, and what Lizzy, Will, and her were going to do.

"You know, this actually might work." I smiled happily.

"Well, the real reason I was here was to help you get dressed, so let's do that as quickly as possiable and get down there and help Jack!" Rachel said. After ten minutes, we got the dress on and walked down stairs. The dress was white with gold trimming and it showed every curve of my body. I didn't really like how tight it was, but I managed. What made the dress so tight was that I was wearing the same things that I wore on the Black Pearl. Yes, I was wearing a shirt and pants under it.

We were now at the place and it seemed like all the people that lived in Port Royal were there. Jack was standing by the nuse, hands chained together and it broke my heart.

"This better work." I said to mysefl. He looked over to me and gave me a week smile. I smiled back and waved. He waved back a bit but then the man came over and put the rope around his neck. He tilted his head up to the sky with his eyes closed, and he looked breath taking. It seemed like he was saying something, but then the man hit something and the floor beneith Jack folded away and Jack started falling, but then a sword came under his feet.

I looked over and saw Will doing his part, so I went and did mine. I went behind a piller, and took off my dress, revieling my man clothes. I ran back out and people gasped.

"Were you not just wearing a dress?" One lady asked.

"Yes I was." I said and ran up to where Jack was, trying to stand on the sword. I took out my sword from my belt and cut the rope, and removing the sword from Jack's feet. He fell down and got up.

"Thanks luv." He said.

"You help me, I help you." I smiled. Will was fighint with three gards, and more were swarming around us. "Will, this way." I yelled as Jack and I started running the other way. Jack grabbed his prefects from a table by the nuse, and Will joined us. A gard grabbed my arm and I yelped by the preasure he put on it. Jack and Will both whirled around. Jack glared at the man and walked up to us and punched him. He leg go of my arm and Jack pulled me to his side. We started running again, but all the gards surrounded us. Will had the end of his sword tapp some of them, trying to look all heroic and all. Jack blew at the feather on Will's hat when it came into his face and I laughed a little.

"Will, do you really want to get in with Pirates? Korie, do-"

"If you don't recally, that is the reason why you put me in prision, for being a Pirate." I snapped at the Govenor.

"This is my place, between you, Jack, and Korie." Will said.

"As with me, I am here with Jack, Korie, and Will." Elizabeth siad stepping by Will. I wrapped my arms around Jack as he put his arm around my waist.

"Same here, except I am not going to say all the names." I smirked. Jack pulled me closer to me and smiled down at me. I smiled back and sighed. 'Looks like everything did turn out good.' I thought to myself.

"Put your weapons down, I said put them down!" The Govonor yelled at the gards. They did what they were told and I smiled.

"Elizabeth, Korie, is this really where your heart lies?" James asked.

"Yes." We both anwsered. I felt Jack tense up a bit, and I looked up to see that something was troubling him.

"Jack, what is it?" I asked putting my hand on his cheek, rubbing it lightly.

"Luv." Jack moaned.

"Yes?" I asked. He looked down at me and gave me a week smile. He bent down and kissed me passiontaly.

"Luv, I am so sorry." He said putting a hand on my hand that was on his cheek.

"Sorry for what?" I asked a little worried.

"Luv, you have to stay here." He said his voise craking a little.

"What? Why?" I asked.

"Luv, you...you just cant come with me!" Jack yelled at me.

"Why not?!" I yelled and glared at him. "I don't belong here!"

"You don't belong with me either! Get married and have kids with a large house and forget about me!" He demanded.

"Well, I wont! I wont forget about you! I wont get a husband and have kids! You can't make me!" I yelled. I heard people gasp and I glared at them. I turned my attention back to Jack. "Jack, I thought you cared about me." I said, letting a tear role down my cheek.

"Luv I-"

"So when we made love, it was just sex to you?" I asked. That got people talking, but I didn't really care, my heart was breaking all over again, but this time, it was worse.

"No luv, it was love! I do care for you, you just can't come with me!"

"Well, if you care, then why can't I come with you?"

"Wait for the opertune moment luv.

"When is that?"

"I will come back, don't you worry. Just wait for the opertune moment, and every thing will be fine."

Jack let go of me and walked to the edge of the building.

"Jack, wait!" I called, but he just kept walking.

"You can remember this as the day that you almo-" Jack said but tripped off of the edge of the building and fell down the side. I ran to the edge and saw him hit the water. I was about to jump off, but someone grabbed my arm.

"What!" I yelled and saw that it was Elizabeth.

"Jack said to wait, he will come back, just believe in him." She said.

I looked out and saw the Pearl comming and I saw Jack's head appear from the water. I saw him swim over and his crew helped him aboard. I felt tears run down my face. He ran to the ropes and climed up to the crows nest.

"Wait for the opertune moment luv! I will come and get you!" He yelled.

"Jack!" I cried trying to jum off. He turned around and climed back down the rope.

I fell to my knees, and cried. Elizabeth and Will sat besides me and tried to make me feel better. Rachel ran over and asked what had happened, and they said that they would tell her later. I got up and looked over to see that the Pearl was a black speck in the distance.

"Good by Jack Sparrow." I whispered.


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