I deleted the old 'In Between Here and There' so that I could start off with fresh reviews because the whole style of the story has changed and I wanted critiques that match the new style. :P
You didn't honestly think it was dead did you? XP
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In Between Here and There
Prologue
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A wisp of pink gently swayed at the top of a too pale face.
A mop of blonde spiked upwards atop a determined head.
She was weak, severely injured and limp in his arms.
He was strong, capable and sturdy as he carried her.
The female glanced up wearily from her prone position towards the blue eyed shinobi.
The male gazed down calmly as he leapt from tree to tree at the green eyed kunoichi.
A hoarse voice queried, "Wh . . Who are . . you?"
A smooth voice replied, "The Yondaime Hokage of Konoha-no-Sato. Arashi."
Green eyes widened. The female slumped unconscious.
Blue eyes narrowed. The male tightened his grip and increased his speed.
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XP This is my first try with this style. Is it okay?
EDIT: Someone mentioned to me that Arashi's last name was not Uzumaki and that it was a name commonly given to orphans or what not . . . .