For all those who enjoyed this story and said this was the wrong place to end it, or they wanted to know more about what happened to the boys, this story now has a sequel. It is entitled "Moving On" and is on its way. First three chapters should be going up shortly after this.
Thank you to everyone who has reviewed and to all those who suggested I carry the story on. It now has two sequels although one is still in handwritten form as I am backpacking my way round the world and internet access is intermittent so updates will be as many as I can as often as I can for this part.
Please do continue to review as I watch anxiously to find out what people think before I start writing my new pieces.