Right, here's my first peice of fanfiction...fingers crossed its good...but as it is my first i really wanna get some advice from more experianced writers on how to improve. Don't hesitate to be harsh if u need to! meep!
This was really written for my wonderfully strange friend Ki-san cause there wasnt much about this threesome. hope u enjoy.
Disclamer: yeah i think its pretty obvious im not Bisco Hatori and therfore i sadly don't own ouran high school.
Haruhi sat down at her desk as the bell went to signal the start of first period. A few seconds later, she had a pair of arms around her shoulders and a pair of faces either side of hers. Haruhi gave out a sigh.
"Morning." She stated flatly continuing to take books out of her bag.
"Oh, no need to be so grumpy," moaned Hikaru.
"Yeah," Kaoru carried on. "Today is a very special day! You should be excited!"
Haruhi thought for a moment as the twins came to stand in front of her, grinning like Cheshire cats. "What's special about today?" Haruhi put a finger to her lips. "I don't know of any events on the 9th of June…"
"It's our birthday!" The boys chorused, raising their arms in joy. "That explains their enthusiasm then," Thought Haruhi. Just as she had this thought the teacher came into the room and quickly told the twins to sit down and stop being nuisances.
In second period, the students were put into groups of six to work through a set of question together. As always Haruhi somehow ended up working with the Hitachiin brothers along with three, very excited, girls. As the class settled down to the assignment, a low buzz of conversation filled the room; a noise that Hikaru and Kaoru decided to take advantage of. They pulled Haruhi to the end of the tables they were working at and the three leaned in to have a private conversation.
"So…" began Kaoru grinning. "We were wondering what you might get us for our birthday."
"Yeah," agreed his brother. "It better be something good." Hikaru said this in a teasing singsong voice but the message was still there: We know you're a commoner but that's no excuse for a bad present.
Haruhi rolled her eyes. "It's always to the point with you two isn't it? You don't exactly beat around the bush." She sat up and was about to go join the three girls, who were watching them curiously across the length of the table, when Hikaru pulled her back down into the conversation.
"Of course, if you're stuck for something to get us…" He said with a mischievous smile.
"…we do have something in mind." Finished the younger twin. His smile was even more suspicious and Haruhi was about to enquire into the cause of such a disturbing look when a shadow was cast over the three. They looked up to see their teacher glaring down at them and pointing at the rest of their group.
"I think it's time you got to work don't you?" Her voice was full of warning so they scuttled back over silently and the topic wasn't mentioned again till it came to the end of the day.
"So Haruhi," Hikaru began as he and counterpart pulled her away from any of other Host Club members. "Thought of something to get us? The day is almost up."
"Or is it?" asked Kaoru looking at his twin. Hikaru looked back, acting surprised. Then he gave a knowing smile and turned back to Haruhi.
"Okay, okay, stop acting all clever. I know I can't get you guys as great a present as your other friends, so how about we hang out together instead?" she offered, jumping the gun. She knew exactly what they had been hinting at. The brothers looked at each other and a dangerous smirk crossed their lips.
"What a great idea." The two replied slowly and licked their lips. Haruhi's eyes grew wide. What had she done?
"Get off her you lascivious twins!" Tamaki approached at a run and knocked the younger boys away before holding Haruhi in his protective grip. "Oh, Haruhi! Don't you worry! I won't let these horrible twins do anything to you!"
"We're the ones who need to save her from you milord." Kaoru complained as he picked himself off the ground. "Stop glomping on Haruhi!"
"Exactly Milord, we can't be any worse than you."
Haruhi pushed Tamaki away and rubbed her arm that he had crushed in the process of 'protecting' her. "I think it's time we went home senpai. I'll see you all tomorrow." Haruhi said as she quickly left the room hoping she might be able to escape the twins. No luck.
Hikaru and Kaoru came running up behind her and soon caught up. "What's the rush Haruhi?" Hikaru teased, throwing an arm lazily over her shoulder. "We get picked up by our driver."
Haruhi looked up at the boys either side of her. "Are you guys serious about this? You know what Tamaki-senpai would say."
"Yup." They replied in unison. "Hope you like spicy food!"
I know, i know. It's not exciting...but it's a build up. I practically have the second chapter done so it'll be up soon. this was originally gonna be a two-piece bit of work, but as usual i got carried away so it's gonna end up longer...please review >