Queen Susan the Not-So-Gentle

By Narnian magic

Hey people! I just had an urge to write a story on Susan…her bad side. So yeah. Enjoy!

Disclaimer: Own nothing but story line and the prince

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Queen Susan the Gentle looked at the door from her throne. Inside, she was screaming like crazy. It was another suitor. Any girl in London would have died for some of the princes asking for the hand of the Gentle Queen. But, the other girls weren't Susan, nor were they Queens.

The suitor approached, and Susan nearly vomited. She hated suitors! She felt her brother's eyes on her. Susan turned her head, locking her azure eyes to the brilliant blue of King Peter the Magnificent. He was looking at her with eyes of concern. Then she immediately knew that he saw that she was about to vomit. She gave him a small smile and a little nod to let him know that she was fine. He looked relieved, then he gave a little nod in return. Then, his eyes were filled with…amusement. Susan gasped. That look was not good. Then just as the suitor approached them, she turned her attention to the front.

"Announcing the prince of Calormen." Susan put a hand to her throat, and she felt all her siblings look at her. She faced them. Lucy first. Lucy had a look of concern on her face, and Edmund and Peter both had a mixture of mischief and concern on their faces. They were smirking. Susan knew this was big trouble.

"My Gentle Queen." Said the prince, bowing. "I am Prince Granitine of Calormen." Susan stood up, her sky blue dress rustled softly as she did so. "Welcome to Cair Paravel, Prince Granitine." He bowed. "Queen Susan, you are my star in the mist of darkness…" At this, all four Pevensies zoned out. Every one of her suitors was like this. At first, it was interesting to see what her suitors said about her. Then, it seemed like all of them said the same thing. It was just too boring. When she was aware that he had finished speaking, Susan said, "Thank you, Prince Granitine. I shall consider your proposal." Then Peter stood up. "Prince Granitine, shall they show you to your quarters?" he asked. "Thank you, High King." Peter looked at the servants, and they scurried out of the room with the Prince, leaving the four siblings alone.

Susan couldn't take it anymore. She put her hands to her cheek and screamed. Peter flinched, and said, "Whoa, calm down, Su." Susan stopped screaming, her throat hurting and sore. Lucy couldn't help but laugh. Susan playfully glared at her sister. Edmund was thinking, but with a big smile on his face. Peter laughed as well, then escorted Susan to her chambers, making sure she didn't do anything stupid, just because she didn't like the suitors. He left her in her room, then went back to the throne room to find Edmund. As he expected, Edmund went to escort Lucy to her chambers, and he had returned sooner than Peter thought. Edmund was smirking and pacing when Peter opened the door.

Peter smirked and walked to his brother. "Well Edmund…you got a plan in mind?" Edmund looked up, a glint of happiness in his eyes. "No, not yet. Peter, have you ever thought about our past pranks we did on the other princes?" Peter laughed, then said, "Duh. They were so good." At this, the two brothers cracked up. Then Edmund put on a mask of seriousness. Then he cleared his throat. "I've found a way we could improve them." Then he whispered it to Peter. Peter frowned. "But then they have to stay here longer. Edmund, you DO know that Su and I hate these people." He said with pure disgust. Edmund smirked. "Fine. It's just a thought anyway." Peter just sighed.

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Susan stomped around in her room. She was furious. Who does these princes think they were? She suddenly wished that Lucy had all the beauty she had. Why must the world be so cruel? She then sighed and sat down at the foot of the bed. She felt the silken material beneath her, and she fell back, closing her eyes. The cool material felt good against her porcelain cheeks. She let her thoughts roam, and suddenly, she felt very tired. Susan could remember nothing as she slipped into a dreamless sleep.

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As soon as Edmund was gone, Lucy crept out of her bedroom, and snuck into the gardens. She breathed deeply, inhaling the scent of blooming flowers. She strolled along the path, enjoying the flowers, completely aware of what Peter and Edmund was going to do. Obviously. She was the accomplice to their little pranks. Out of the four, only Susan didn't know that it was all three of them involved. Sometimes it was Peter. Sometimes Edmund. Lucy smirked and continued walking, thinking of what prank they should play on the Calormen prince next.

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Narnian magic: hey, I had an urge to write a story on Susan's bad side…and decided that there would be a pairing later on. : P