Hey all you out there. I would like your help. If you could be so kind as to tell me what your options are of this story, I would be very grateful. I'm trying to get better in writing and you can't get better if you don't have any criticize, plus I'm a bad spell, so I use the wrong words or spell something wrong, please bear with me.
Disclaimer: I don't own Inuyasha or anything that goes along with them. So now that that's over with, on with the story.
It's about mid-night and the streets are abandoned of all people as they are inside their houses fast asleep. Softly sobs can be heard down the street from inside a small, two story house, that empty of all living things but in a small room is a girl about seventeen is curled up in a ball on her bed with the door locked tightly. Her long raven black hair is a mess and her clothes are tern and ripped. She thinks to herself as tears keep streaming down the side of her face, 'Why does it hurt? What did I do?'
She has blood all over her body and on her bed. She does not try to stop the bleeding as she keeps on wondering what she did wrong. Her parents wouldn't be back from their trip until next Tuesday, which is seven days away. She has seven day to try and hide until they get back. She had to find a way to stay in her room until them, that way he can't get to her. But she knows that she can't. She has school tomorrow and she has to be there.
She tries to wipe all the tears away, but found that the tears would only slow down a bit. She got slowly and shakily off her bed and went into her bathroom. She locks the bathroom door and window. She drew a hot bath and put her tern cloth in the trash. She slips into the hot bath and starts to examine herself for the first time that night after what had happen. She has mostly small cuts and a few bruises over her body, but she only found one deep cut over her stomach. After she had gotten all the dried blood off and stops the wounds, she got out of the tub and drains the water. She grabs her under wear and a pair of pant and t-shirt that was there in the corner, and put the on. She unlocks the door and carefully opening the door to peer into her room to make sure that no one was in there.
She jumps as she hears the phone rang, as the rand cut through the silence. She jumps slightly in alarm and she looks around the room to see on one. She unlocks her door and careful goes into the hallway. She quietly sneaks into the living, looking in every corner, as she approaches the phone. She picks up the phone and says softly, "Hello."
"Hello, Kagome, sorry I'm calling so early." She hears a female voice apologizing on the other end of the phone.
"Momma," she says with a sigh of relief.
"I just wanted to check up on you. Is everything alright?" her mom ask concern when she hear the sigh.
"Yes momma," she says quickly.
"Ok, I just wanted to ask if you didn't mind that we stayed a little longer. Your aunt is having to much trouble." Her mom says sadly.
"How much longer?" she asks farsightedly.
"About another week. If that's alright with you." Her mom asks.
She wanted to yell that it wasn't alright with her and that she wanted her mom home with her now. She didn't want to be home alone anymore. But she know how close her mom and aunt were, so instead she says, "Yes, momma. I'll see you in two weeks then." Her mom seen to be glad of the answer because she gave a grateful thank you. She told her mom that she had to go to bed because she got school in the morning. She hung up the phone and quickly checks to see if all the windows and doors were tightly lock. She run quickly to her room and lock the door before she quickly curls on her bed again to try to get some sleep. She falls into an uneasy sleep as she keeps thinking that she got two whole weeks by herself and that something like this come happen again.
Sorry about the first chapter being so short. Its probably not tell you much, but you will find out in the next chapter what she's talking about and how she got her cuts and bruises. Please R&R. Thinks to self hopefully I can get the next chapter out before I leave for my trip. Smile until then.
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