As promised from the last chapter, deleted scenes from this story.
To be honest most of my stories just flow out. I come up with an idea, I write it out as it plays in my head. I think of a few events, write it as it comes to mind. Most of the time I don't change a plot much. Usually I leave it as it is with small changes that still lead to the same outcome. I've reached new grounds with this story, with it actually being the first story the original plot was thrown out because of reviews.
This story was only supposed to be a time gap. I wanted time to focus and write Love is more than enough. But I needed something to keep my readers occupied while I wrote it. But something amazing happened. When the truth came out got popular. I received 100 reviews before I got to chapter ten. Positive reviews. I couldn't end it the way I originally planned it, because it would make it end sooner and destroy my chances of getting 200 reviews. Which I actually accomplished with this story.
For the most part the events were unchanged to a certain point. The only thing changed was the ending. Here's how dramatic the ending was originally.
Alternate ending…
Yumi and Ulrich manage to find Yumi's grandmother in the same way. They talk about her mother with some differences. It's a few chapters before this I decided to expand and change. Yumi Furuki knows where her father is, and gives Yumi the address. Ulrich and Yumi by cab go there. They pay the fare then look to the address.
It's a graveyard. Yumi walks over to the gates of the graveyard slowly then looks at the address, making sure it was right. It is. Yumi's mother arrives shortly afterward and tells her everything.
Rinoka was deeply in love with Yumi's father. Even at the young age they were. He proposed to her and she said yes. That's a change on it's own. A month into the engagement her father was in an accident, and died. Rinoka and her father was having trouble having ends meet together, and with her alone and pregnant it'd be impossible. Then she meets Takeo and you can guess what flows from there.
They go back to France and Yumi falls into a depression. Her father was dead the entire time. She starts hating her mother for not telling her that, so this adventure could have been avoided. It was too hard to say it. Ulrich manages to get some information on her father, pictures and manages to find Yumi's uncle from her fathers side. Ulrich gets her some things from her father and gives them to Yumi, and helps pull her out of the depression and back to her feet.
That's the original ending I would have wrote. If I did, this would have ended at about chapter nine or ten. Short of 200 reviews. Love is more than enough is doing well enough to be happy about. That's all there is for deleted scenes of When the truth comes out.
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