Hi. First Sky High story. Review please.
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Layla and Will ended up together. Magenta and Zack ended up together. But what about Warren? Well, my friends, this is what my story is about.
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I have a power. There I said it. Now, I usually don't tell anyone about this because I don't want anyone to find out. I only told you because it is key to this story. To my story.
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It all started when my parents met. You know how it goes. Met, got started dating, got married, got into bed, got to wait a while, then got me. Now, much like Will, my parents were both super heroes. Unlike him, though, I didn't inherit any of my parent's powers. In fact, my power is nothing like theirs at all.
Much like Warren, though, I can control fire. The difference? I do not turn into fire I bend it.
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OK, let me tell you about who I am before you jump to conclusions.
Probably the most different thing about me is that I am blind. I have never, nor will ever, see. My eyes are an extremely light blue with white pupils.
I have long, jet-black hair that is streaked in red.
Ooooh, I can just feel the irony.
Anyways, I am very tall. I have to silver canes that I am forced to use.
Now, you might expect me to be this shy, little blind girl who just happens to have powers.
Well…. you're dead wrong.
I am very outspoken and I have an extremely fiery temper.
Again, ironic.
Well, that's about it about me, so let's concentrate on my first year at Sky High.
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The first day. Naturally, I was scared. I said goodbye to my parents and headed towards the bus stop.
I stepped on when it arrived. All the talking that was going on suddenly stopped. I stopped too. After a few awkward moments, the bus driver helped me to my seat.
I could sense everyone staring.
I looked around and said, "What? Do you think there's something wrong with me?" The bus lit up as a dragon made of fire appeared. No one was hurt, just severely shaken. I smiled and my dragon dispersed.
I heard murmurs around me of, "Great. Another hothead." Or "She'd be perfect for warren." I wondered who this "Warren" kid was. But then again, I didn't care.
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Once everyone was on, the bus speeded up. Straps slapped across my chest and everyone started screaming. Suddenly, I felt my stomach disappear. Everyone started screaming louder. I started to also. Finally, things quieted down. The bus stopped and I was helped out. I followed the others.
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Suddenly, we were being welcomed. And then we were ushered into what seemed to be the gym. The coach gave a speech about heroes and sidekicks, and then called me up.
A fire dragon appeared and flew around me and carried me to the stage.
"Name?"
"Rai."
"Power?"
"Isn't it obvious? Controlling fire."
"Hmmm…car."
The car that was dropped burst into flame. The flame then disappeared, leaving behind ashes.
"Hero. You. Get over here!" the coach shouted at another kid.
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Soon, it was lunch. I had heard of another fire controller at the school this year. I also heard she was blind. When she walked in, I called her over. She looked in my direction and sat down across from me.
"I heard you can control fire."
-Sigh- "Yes."
"So can I."
She actually looked interested at this.
"Really."
"Yup."
"I can assume your Warren then?"
"Yes."
Suddenly, Will, Layla, Zack, and Magenta sat down. The other controller got up and left without her lunch or saying goodbye.
"What's up with her?" Zack asked bluntly.
I threw him a dirty look and started talking to Will.
My thoughts? Elsewhere…
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Well, there's the first chapter. Tell me if it sucked or not.
-ZukoKrazy