DISCLAIMER: I DON'T OWN NARUTO!
Hey all! I decided to revise all of my chapters! I hated it, so here! This the revise chapter of chappy 1 with new scenes! I hope this is better than the last one!
ENJOY!
"S-Sakura-chan, are you sure?" Hinata asked quietly, fidgeting in her spot.
Sakura waved her hand up and down, "Don't worry Hinata-chan, they wouldn't even notice we were gone," she said with no care. Hinata nodded, still uncertain. She put her hands together in front of her, listening intently to what the others think.
"Yeah," Tenten agreed, "Except Naruto." Hinata blushed hard and looked down at the ground. Her grip tightened on her hands as her eyes clouded with embarrassment.
"How do we keep them occupied?" asked Ino, "For, like, a month or so?" she added.
"Well, I'm not sure," Sakura said slowly, "Actually, Neji will notice we're gone 'cause he would be wondering where his missing female teammate would be," The pink haired beauty though silently, figuring out a plan. But, Tenten on the other one was throwing kunais.
"SAKURA!"
She just giggled as she dodged them all with ease. "Just joking!" Sakura yelled out laughing.
"But she is right. They'll track us down until we're found," Ino stated, disappointed.
"I-I have an idea," Hinata stuttered. They looked at her, seeing this attention and chance, she continued, "W-Well, while we're at t-the h-hot springs-"
"Wait a minute. Maybe we can knock them out for a bit," Tenten suggested, cutting off the Hyuuga heiress.
"Yeah, but, Shika-kun can easily spot us and use his shadow jutsu," Ino countered, "Sasuke-kun and Neji-kun are equally strong,"
"So true" Sakura said and sighed, "Anyways, what were you about to say, Hinata-chan?" Sakura asked, smiling at her white pearl eyes friend.
"Well…Can't we just tell them….that we need….a break….for…a bit…? I think they'd mind," Hinata finished. She looked up at them and saw them, dotted eye. She tilted her head to the side, patiently waiting for their thoughts. After a while, they finally snapped out.
"That's a great idea!" Sakura cheered.
"And so simple," Ino said, "Why didn't we think of that?"
Tenten answered, "Maybe because we went through the hard way of thinking,"
"Hinata-chan is really smart, ne?" Sakura said, grinning childishly.
"Well," Ino began, "Let's see if we can go first." She sighed, "Come on girls. If it's a no, then let's start to unpack," They all headed to the training grounds, to see their team mates training and fighting, "Good luck," they muttered to each other before separating and walked towards their team.
Sakura nervously walked towards Kakashi, who was busy reading his perverted book. "Um…" she began, "Kakashi-sensei? Can I ask you something?" She paused, "I was thinking…"
Kakashi sighed, "I'm sorry, Sakura," her face faulted, "But it's forbidden. Look, I know how handsome I am and it's hard to contain yourself. You're my student, I'm your teacher. I have to say no,"
Sakura's eyes twitched and her fists clenched, trying to contain herself from killing her teacher, "I-I understand, sensei. But that's not what I-"
He held up a hand, "If you're thinking of eloping with me, I may consider it, but if you're older, the better,"
She gritted her teeth, "I realize what you think I was going to ask you. But none of you're guesses are correct, Kakashi-sensei." She sighed, "You know how hard I train and work to get stronger, ne?" He nodded, "Here's the thing. You know, as well, all the stress I have after you-know-what happened, so I was thinking of –"
He gasped and stood up; his hands on her shoulder, eyes wide, "Sakura! Don't do it!"
"Eh? What?"
"For the love of myself, you are too beautiful to do such a thing! Don't take it out on anyone, please!"
"Kakashi-sensei, what're you saying?"
"Don't go, Itachi. I understand how he can help, but in a bad way,"
"KAKASHI-SENSEI! LET ME TALK AND DON'T YOU DARE INTERUPT ME OR I WILL GO TO HIM AND I WILL KILL YOU!" she threatened. He opened his mouth, "NO TALKING I SAID! JUST SHUT UP AND LISTEN TO WHAT I HAVE TO SAY!"
He nodded, backing away from the raging Sakura.
The pink beauty sighed, calming herself. "Here's the thing, what all I've said is really stressing me out," she looked at the corner of her eye to watch Sasuke training; Kakashi followed her gaze and nodded, understanding. "Great. So I was thinking of getting away for a bit…you know what I mean?"
"I understand what you need, Sakura. So, I'll agree," A smile crept her lips, "But you know you'll miss a lot of training, Sakura, "Kakashi said; her shoulders slumped. "How long are you going to be gone?"
'It took me about two years to heal and regain my confidence.' She thought. "I was wondering if I can be gone for a month. I can train in the mountains there too,"
"Where are you going?"
"To a hotsprings hotel in the mountains; I've heard it's relaxing. It has great service, they've said,"
'Maybe I should go there in my spare time,' he thought silently, "You're right about that. Hmm, well… alright," Sakura beamed and hugged him tightly, a smile forming her lips, "Thank you so much, Kakashi-sensei! You're the coolest!"
"But remember to do you're training while you're there. If you forget, I'll send a couple of people to help you train,"
"Okay!"
"Sakura-chan!" A new voice called out. "Where have you been?" Naruto asked worriedly. Sakura faced him with a grin.
"Hey, Naruto-kun," she greeted, "I was just relaxing with my friends. Y'know, with all the things that happened a while ago," she answered, her smile faded a bit. Naruto frowned, "Sakura-chan, are you alright?" Sakura giggled and embraced him, "Yeah I am,"
She pulled away and patted his head, "I'll be gone for a while, ok? Don't do anything rash. Watch yourself, okay?" He cried anime tears, "Sakura-chan! You're leaving me with Sasuke-teme?"
"What about me?" a deep voice interjected. Sakura looked over her shoulder, her smile gone and her face unreadable. Naruto peeked at her side, wanting to know. It was silent for a while after.
Sakura turned to Naruto again, "Don't worry, Naruto-kun. I know you're stronger than him! C'mon, you've worked hard already, don't let all of those training go to waste," she cheered. Naruto's face brightened and looked at Sasuke, pointing a finger, "Hah! Did you hear that, Sasuke-teme? Sakura-chan agrees that I'm stronger than you!"
"Hn."
Sakura stayed quiet as Naruto boasted and Sasuke just said 'hn' to all his answers. Sakura looked at Sasuke for a bit; he caught her gaze and his orbs bore into her jade ones. She saw something in those intense eyes, but she couldn't make it out. She took a step back, as if being slapped.
Naruto turned to face her, noticing, "Are you alright, Sakura-chan?"
"Y-yeah. Just thinking…"
"About me right?" he boasted, a cheesy grin forming his face. Sasuke slammed his elbow on his head, "Bastard! What was that for?"
"Hn."
"Hey, Sakura!" Ino's voice called out. Sakura watched Ino jogged towards her. "Hey, so I got my okay. How about you?" The blonde beauty questioned, slightly worried; she ignored Naruto's fight with Sasuke.
Sakura smiled, "Yes for me!" They squealed in delight and hugged each other.
Hinata walked towards them, "I can go." She said and smiled.
"All that's left is Tenten," Sakura said, glancing around, "There she is. Looks like she's still asking, come on," They walked towards her; unknown to Sakura, Sasuke watched her, before walking away.
"Tenten?" Sakura asked nervously.
"Ahh! The youth of enjoying your freedom with your vacation! Wonderful," Gai-sensei did a pose, "Enjoy your youth! Be free!" Tenten had an anime vein throbbing in her head as she scowled at her sensei.
"Is that a yes?"
"OF COURSE!"
Tenten quickly walked away. "Finally! He was starting to get on my nerves," she muttered. They laughed. "So all of us get to go?" she asked.
"Yup!"
"Hot springs here we come!" the weapons master whooped, "Time for relaxation for me,"
Sakura interrupted, "Oops. I kinda, uh, well, promised Kakashi-sensei that while we're there that we'd be training. Y'know, so we wouldn't be slacking off as much," A dark smile formed Tenten's lips, "But he said if we do, he'll send some hot guys to help us," she added. Her face brightened up.
"This couldn't get any better! Relaxation, hot guys with us. I hope their much better than the guys we have here,"
'I didn't really lie,' Sakura thought, 'I just changed the meaning.'
Hah! But if the guys do show up and their not hot as they thought, your dead!' Inner Sakura laughed.
She groaned, 'Just shut up for once, will you?
Nope! I enjoy criticizing your thoughts. Hehe.
Sakura blocked off her thoughts, not wanting to listen. "Oi, Sakura," Tenten said, "Exactly, how will he know if we're not training?"
She paused, "Hmm…true. Spying I guess? But hey, that'll be good. We'll meet new guys and we don't have to settle with the guys here anymore, ne?"
Ino giggled, "I wouldn't say that until we're there,"
Sakura tilted her head to the side, confusion seen in her eyes, "Ehh? What're you talking about? Why not? It's not like their right here. Their off training probably somewhere. You know how guys get, wanting to get stronger. 'Sides, why should they be here? Shikamaru thinks we're troublesome, Neji and Sasuke are somewhere else and Naruto is…in the ramen shop,"
"I wouldn't say that," her best friend whispered, pointing her finger behind her. Almost against her will and frightened, she turned around. "Uh.Oh."
Naruto was crying anime tears behind her, "Sakura-chan! You think I'm ugly?" he cried out.
She backed away and hid behind Hinata, using her as a shield, "No, no. I think you're cute. I was just saying how attached Tenten and Ino will be to the guys there. Ask Hinata," Naruto pouted as Hinata blushed at the attention given to her.
"I-I think you're b-better, Naruto-kun,"
"Thank you, Hinata-chan!" He went over and embraced the blushing heiress. "See! Hinata-chan is really kind! I'm sure she'll be even stronger!" He pulled away, with his trademark grin. "Don't forget me, okay?" She nodded, smiling back.
"Awww, you two are really cute!" Sakura blurted out. Hinata's face turned scarlet, Naruto looked confused. Ino covered her mouth, "Don't worry. I think she got drunk from the excitement,"
"Hey, Sakura-chan," Naruto began, "Before you leave, can we have a party? I mean, Kakashi-sensei told me you'll be gone for about a month. Can we, please?"
"That'll sound pretty fun," Ino agreed, "Getting drunk, partying. Then the next day we relax while they have to train. But the problem is, I don't think the guys, except you, will go."
"That's alright," Tenten cut off, "Naruto is a ladies man," she joked. "You're right about that," Sakura joined in, laughing.
"Mou, you two are mean," the blonde boy muttered.
"C'mon. Why wait? It's almost dawn. Let's celebrate!"
The Next Day
The girls, excluding Hinata, dragged themselves off the couch. Hinata shook her head, "I told you not to stay up to late because we have a bus trip to the hot springs the next day," She received a groan from each in reply. "Prepare yourselves. We're leaving in 20 minutes,"
It took a longer time than that to get themselves fixed up. When they were done, they left the house and to Ino's private bus and got on board. Naruto helped Hinata storing her luggage in. "Don't forget me, ne?" she nodded.
The bus drove off; they all laughed and waved at Naruto. "See ya, Naruto! We love you!" they called out, laughing. He gave them the peace sign with a goofy grin.
"This'll be a perfect vacation!" Tenten said, stretching her arms in the air. "But I can't help wonder…" she said in a whisper.
Ino and Sakura looked at brochure, "This is a four star hotel, right?" Ino asked. "Yeah. Looks like the best part of the hotel is the lounge," Sakura replied and squainted her eyes, "It says 'Where the best place to meet hot guys,'"
Ino nudged Sakura and gave her friends a sly look. "You know what that means, right? This'll be interesting," Tenten and Sakura backed away from here, close to each other; terrified at the sly grinning Ino. "I know that look," Tenten said, Sakura nodded, "It's the can't-wait-to-meet-hot-guys-and-flirt-with-them-and-you-girls-will-come smile,"
Ino laughed, "Oh come of it. I'm not doing this alone right? There's lotsa guys there, even hotter than the guys here,"
'Actually, I already have someone in mind,' Tenten thought, 'But…I don't think I'll have his attention. With his status, he's probably in an arrange marriage,' A hand was placed on her shoulder, "Are you alright, Tenten?" asked Hinata. She started to chuckle, scaring Hinata. She stood up, "I'M GONNA FLIRT ALL I WANT WITH ALLTHE GUYS! AHAHA!"
"YOU GO GIRL!" Ino hollered, getting up as well.
The bus came to a halt, signaling their arrival. Tenten and Ino crashed down, "WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR?"
The bus driver cringed, "You've reached your destination,"
"Already?"
"I guess time flies when you're having fun,"
They entered the hotel lobby, staring in awe at the beautiful setup. Grass filled the whole place outside, followed by stone steps to walk on. A small pond with tall different plants covered part of the sign. "Hello," said a man, the girls shuddered at the sight of his eyes.
"Hey, um, we came here for a reservation,"
A sly grin spread to the manager lips, "Yes, your names, ladies? Or should I say young ladies?" Ino growled, "Ino Yamanaka," she replied, clenching her fists.
"Oh, yes. You've made a reservation here for a month yes? Here are your room cards. Enjoy your stay here,"
Ino quickly grabbed the key cards and walked away. An anime vein throbbed her head and she turned around to slap whoever touched her lower part of the body, "You sick pervert!" She gave the manager a sharp kick in the ribs before storming off to the elevators.
'This may be the opposite of what we've thought fun would be,' Hinata thought silently, passing the unconscious man.
TBC
Can you noticed the parts I've change? Maybe a little obvious…oh well! Tell me, if you please, if there are parts that I should change again!