Summary: Following Pitch Black, Riddick crushes jack and leaves her on New Mecca. Jack wants revenge on him in later years for leaving her to her unwanted fate. So she makes her own. However when she teams up with him, she learns revenge isn't what she wanted.

Disclaimer: all I own is the stupid plot…Y OH Y CNT I OWN RIDDICK! crawls into a ball and cries …but I have met him. Literally. Just thought id rub it in to all the die hard fans! I got to HUG VIN diesel! Muhahahah.

(AN) Please don't flame me…im like 'like a virgin! WOO touched for the very first time!' This is my first story. And I had doubts of posting it up, because I didn't think it was good enough. But fudge it, I wana see if I can make it. So without any further delay… I give u… my first chappie! Ness AkA SatanicVersus

Chapter 1: Voices and broken hearts.

Tears streamed down her pale face. Her hands limp beside her. She felt so open. Like everything she was feeling right at that moment, was out, and publicized….right in front of him. He however stood in front of her, slightly agitated at her behavior. He rubbed his hand over his forehead with his index fingers.

"Kid stop crying already. It's not going to help you. Do you forget I don't care?"

Bullshit.

All bullshit. He knew he cared. If he didn't he wouldn't be leaving her to live a normal life. But he had to show tough…..

He couldn't even think it. It was impossible for him to feel. He had to be stern. He didn't know anything else.

"Please Riddick don't leave me here. I won't last! They don't understand me. Not like you do. I know you care"

She began to plead again, sniffling, and shaking in the middle of her sentence.

"You can't keep up" he spoke truthfully. It was true, she couldn't. She was just a kid.

"Please! Im begging you! Don't leave me here. There's nothing here for me. I CAN keep up! I can handle myself! You could teach me, we could be a t-"

He cut her off with and agitated sigh….he didn't want to come to this, but he left her no choice.

"No, you can't. Do you hear me? You can't keep up. You can't survive. No, I won't teach you, I don't have the time. No, you're not coming…no…understood?"

He spoke roughly; he was beginning to let the beast surface. But he didn't want to unleash it completely. She was a kid after all.

"No TIME? You prick! You're an escaped convict, on the run from mercs. Probably going to have a lot of time to you, hiding!"

"Exactly, and what im gunna let you get killed? Shit kid, are you crazy. Even I don't think I could have a kid on my list. If im trying not to get killed, how am I going to train you- why the fuck am I even explaining this to you? For the last time, don't make me repeat myself, No. I don't need, or want some Stupid kid, with a Stupid obsession, on me following me around. Do you understand? I don't want you around me."

He growled the last word out. Jack stood there frozen in spot at his sudden tone. Hear tear stricken face stared up at him

"Ill find you Riddick. One day. Mark my words. And when I do, you'll regret the day you left me on this DUST BALL of a planet."

Jack ground out, her teeth gritted.

"Stay in New Mecca jack. That's not a suggestion."

He growled out. He didn't need her fucking up her life. After he risked his life preserving it. The first good thing he ever did. She didn't deserve the life he had, nobody did. Not even him. It was hard. She wouldn't last. Not at this age. He didn't doubt that she would grow into a strong woman due to this very experience. Making fake promises would just screw her over.

"Ill see you around Riddick."

She spoke out calmly. She then turned around and walked out of the space port. Never once looking back. Riddick watched her leave, goggles set in place. He wouldn't return. Not for her.

When jack returned home. Alone, she was greeted by Imam. He held his hands out in a hugging gesture. A sad face in place of his usually peacefully content one. He knew jack would be upset. Jack brushed him off, and walked upstairs to her room. She felt slightly bad; Imam had been like a father to her. But she didn't need Imam. She needed Riddick. She flopped down onto her bed. Face buried into her pillow. And fresh tears sprung out her eyes. She sobbed quietly for a while.

"Barsted" she grunted in frustration. 'Stupid kid? Stupid obsession. Hate the fucker' she spoke viciously in her mind. 'Ill kill him!' she grunted in her head. The anger in her head boiling to the point her whole body was tense and shaking.

'You could do it you know' a deceptive voice whispered inside her head. At this jack perked up, and raised herself up into a sitting position on her bed.

"What…the hell…..am I going insane?" she spoke out quietly. Not wanting to make a fuss.

'No…but you could do it…what you want. You could pay him back. He thinks you can't keep up. You can't. Not now anyway. But you could. One day. Then take his own shiv, and kill the fuck out of him. Slowly.' The voice whispered in her head again. It sounded familiar yet unknown at the same time.

"Who the fuck are you?" she spoke out loud. This was freaking her out. Hello! She was having a discussion, with her head. Worse, about killing people. Slowly.

'Jack, jack, jack. Im just telling you what I know you want to hear. Im everything you want. Everything you could have. now do you want revenge or not?'
"Yes…I do….Riddick fucked me over. Ill kill him. I want him DEAD."

'Good….good…but it will take time…but it will happen. Then…well show him, who can keep up. You're a machine jack. You could be one. A soldier. An animal.'

"An animal….yeh….I like the sound of that…a lot…" she spoke back pleased.

"My child are you ok? Whom are you speaking with?" Imam's cool voice drifted from the door, with concern.

"Y…yeh Imam…im fine, I just need some sleep…thanks…" jack answered back, slightly jittery from being surprised from Imams voice

"Ok my child…as long as you are sure" Imam lingered for a moment, before his footsteps went into another direction away from her door.

A smile graced jacks lips. And she slowly laid back into her sheets. She was exhausted. She knew the idea of a voice in her head wasn't the best thing in the world…infact one telling you to kill the fuck out of people couldn't be the most reassuring of her sanity. But she enjoyed the idea of her being what the voice said she could be.

'Rest now jack. We'll start tomorrow. Rest. You're tired.'

The voice cooed and relaxed jack to sleep. She mumbled before sleep took her

"You better watch your back Riddick. Jack B. Badd is back."

Darkness took her. And she fell asleep.

AN.

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