Disclaimer: I don't own anything from Harry Potter
Author's Note: This is the revised edition of Time Travel! If you feel that you must review, but you have already done so, it would be great if you would do an anonymous review. But please in the review, tell me what your account name is.
At the end of each chapter, I will be putting notes on what I changed.
Chapter 1: PAST TIMES
"Harry! Pay attention, this is important!" Hermione snapped at him.
"Oh sure Hermione," Harry mumbled.
Hermione rolled her eyes. Suddenly, she felt the sparkle from his emerald green eyes meet hers. She bent down, so close, and….
"AAHH!" Hermione shrieked as she sat up in her bed. Well, it really wasn't her bed; Hermione had crept into an empty bed in Ginny's dormitory while they had talked for a bit. She supposed that she must have fallen asleep.
"What is it Hermione?" Ginny asked groggily.
"I had a dream that I was going to kiss Harry!" she said, still shocked.
"And that's a bad thing?" Ginny asked.
"Ginny you had a crush on him! That makes a whole lot of difference for your feelings. He's my best friend!" Hermione said.
"And you don't have one on him?" Ginny asked, smirking.
"NO! Why does everyone think that?" Hermione whined.
"Maybe because it's true?"
"Ginevra Weasley! I am appalled!" Hermione said, trying to mock Professor McGonagall and failing; she just couldn't get a grip on the fact that it was okay to make fun of teachers sometime.
"Oh I am so ashamed," Ginny said sarcastically.
"Ginny, I have to tell you something really important." Hermione said franticly.
"Shoot."
"I can go into the past and future with a spell. I have seen Harry's parents. Should I tell him?"
BAM! A balloon filled with cockroach clusters slammed onto Lily Evan's hair.
"JAMES!" she yelled at the top of her lungs.
"Evans, you shouldn't be putting candy in your hair; it will get stuck," James Potter said smugly.
"One, don't call me Evans. I am your girlfriend; you should NOT be doing this to me! she said, fighting to keep her voice down. "Or would you like me to tell everyone about that time… when you went with…" The threat struck home with James.
"Okay then, I am sorry," apologized James, most sincerely.
"Of course you are," Lily said, raising her eyebrows.
"You should be Prongs," came the voice of Sirius Black. "Doing a prank on Lily without us? How rude."
"Oh, am I not allowed to prank my girlfriend without your permission now?" James said sarcastically.
"No," said Padfoot.
"You guys are so STUPID!" Lily burst out.
"We know!" Prongs and Padfoot said with smiles.
Lily rolled her eyes and went to join her friend Marissa at the Gryffindor table. They gossiped and ate, like almost all the other girls.
"Okay, what should we do to Snivellus next?" Sirius said excitedly.
"Wait, we have to get Moony over here," James said.
"OI! MOONY GET OVER HERE!" Padfoot yelled over the crowd of people talking. Once Moony got over with them, he began again. "What should we do to Snivellus today?"
"Take his transfiguration papers, so he gets a zero?" Remus suggested.
"Yeah, that's a good idea!" James said excitedly. "Lets do it!"
"We should get to the table, McGonagall is coming," Remus said practically.
"Boys what are you doing? Go to your table and eat," she ordered.
"Yes, Professor," Peter squeaked.
As they walked away James and Sirius discussed Peter.
"Why is he even with us? He does what the teachers ask!" James whispered.
"I don't know. I think we felt sorry for him, because he looked so lost the first couple of days," Sirius answered with a flick of his hair.
"Yeah, and, wait. We shouldn't be talking about him like this. He is like our brother, he learned how to change with us," James replied.
"Glad you realized that Prongs. Padfoot, one: stop flicking your hair and two: you shouldn't talk about Wormtail like that," Moony suddenly said as he entered the conversation.
"Moony! Sirius yelled as he jumped a foot into the air.
"Nice jump. Have you considered playing Muggle sports?" Remus asked semi-seriously.
"Let's eat! I'm hungry," James said.
"Good, we can study too, we have a Transfiguration test today, and even though we hate studying, you don't want another Howler do you Prongs?" Padfoot taunted
"NO! That last one was horrible!" James said.
"Okay, let's go."
"What?"
"I can go into the past without a time turner. I don't know why I went to Harry's parents; I guess I was just thinking about them. Do I tell him?" Hermione explained worriedly.
"It depends. Do you want him to see them? It might be a little… strange for his parents to see their son when he isn't alive yet. You know? You have to decide for yourself," Ginny replied. "If you do, it might be the perfect time to tell him that you like him!"
"Ginny…" Hermione warned.
Ginny rolled over and her breath became steady and even. Hermione waited for a while and said, "I think." She crept back to her own dormitory and curled up in her warm covers. Parvati and Lavender were still slumbering with the occasional snore. Everything was as she had left it.
I just fixed up a couple things that didn't make sense to me as I read it: Hermione being in Ginny's dorm, "Mione", "Gin", and "Ginerva" instead of "Ginevra."