Its time to work on this story.
Who's Love?
This is a mix between "Borrowed Hearts" and "A Cinderella Story" I hope you like it.
"Why won't I ever be noticed," said the blond hair, blue eyed girl, "I never did anything to anyone. Why do people hate me so much?"
"I don't know. I notice you," Andy said as they walked to their 11th grade Science Class.
"You have to notice me. I'm your friend." Serena replied.
"Well, what do you want me to say? I don't notice you even though you are standing next to me." Andrew sighed.
"No, but you know that I'm not noticed ever." Serena stated.
Beryl walked by with some friends, "Ew, its geekzilla. What are you staring at?"
"You, because your shoes are untied." Serena calmly said.
She stopped to look at her shoes. She fell over onto her face. I laughed I couldn't help it. "Your such a freak Serena." She stated then walked off.
Rae and Darien followed. They were holding hands and kissing. Rae was wearing a short Fire Red Party dress and black heels. Her long black hair flowed behind her. 'We used to be friends but she spent the night in 8th grade and was grossed out by what my sisters did to me. You don't want to know what they did.'
"Andy you're drooling again, Hello earth to Andy." Serena sighed.
Slowly Andy came back to reality, "What where you saying Sere?"
"Never Mind we are late for class." Serena said agitated.
"Rae is so HOT, too bad she belongs to Darien," Andy said Googol-eyed.
Serena looked at Darien, the hottest guy in the school. He was tall with short black hair that semi covered his sapphire blue eyes. He always wore black pants and a tee shirt. He also always had that cute green jacket with him. It suited him so well.
Serena started to walk home. She took the long way. She followed the winding path through the park. She thought about how beautiful fall was. She always loved the beauty of nature. The leaves fell around her while she thought of how hot Darien was. Why did he have to be so popular? She sighed as she reached her house.
How do you like it? It's a start. I will update next week. It's a little longer. Please review me on whether you want me to fix this chapter even more.