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Whisper of identityChapter 2
"So this is village of the blood eh?"
Suddenly a barrage of arrows and kunai was launched at me...
"Heh, not very good manners. I'll be sure to remember that in my report..." I murmured...
I ran quickly down the street on swift feet, dodging whatever was in my way until I was out of range. Or so I thought.
Two shinobi launched themselves at me in unison, bearing weapons. I easily dodged and knocked them out.
Simple enough. I easily leapt high beyond the buildings and tried to get past the gate....only to find myself in a web of genjutsu much more complicated than I expected. 'Kuso!' As I weaved through each one, I felt many charka signatures moving, closer, closer.
So much more to go through!
The genjutsu loomed before me, taunting me, confusing me.
'anything created by charka can be nullified by it...' I remembered Kakashi's voice as he canceled a huge sliding mound of rock during a sparring period.
I pulled a handful of red charka from deep within me with a strong jerk...at least I tried to.
WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING NOW, GAKI?
'dammit, kitsune! I need this! Holy crap, do you want to die?'
He growled but let go,
'I'll make it up to you if I can!' I called out to him mentally, as I returned to reality.
"Fuck!" Naruto cursed as he found a half ring of shinobi about a foot away from me and tossed the red glowing ball in my hand at them.
Boom.
Boom to say the least.
Well, good part is all the genjutsu's been canceled...bad part is that about 8 dead shinobi were at his feet. Bad..er? (I think it's worse buh....) Part is that he activated one of the big traps in the wall. Before he noticed, he was hit by a wave of paralyzing red liquidy substance.
Naruto swayed and buckled, collapsing on his knees.
'awww...shit...' was his last conscious thought.
When the blonde-turned-redhead boy awoke, he was surrounded by voices, almost indecipherable murmurings, but voices all the same.
"How the hell do we tell him?" asked a worried voice.
"I dunno, we had an invader?" replied a nonchalant one.
"I'm serious! The major defenses of the gate has just been wiped out as well as the trap that he spent so much energy to put up! It was supposed to be for major invasions，not for one measly kid!"
Naruto feigned sleep as he continued to listen but his hyperactive senses told him easily that they were moving away.
"The kid's going to die soon anyways, he should be almost dead by now..."
He heard no more except a lock being clicked.
Naruto sat up warily, conscious of everything around him. And the number one thing that he noticed was that he was freezing and topless. Damn. Even worse, as he noticed when he looked down, was the manacles on his ankles, as well as on his wrists, not to mention the thick ring of ...leather around his neck...and if you didn't count the fact that he was chained by his right ankle to an old man, who was chained to a young boy who was in turn chained...
"Damn..." he groaned,
'How the hell did I get stuck in some kind of a freaking slave line? Wasn't slavery only in the books?'
He placed a hand over a thick metal manacle and tore it off easily, doing the same for the rest, but when reached the collar on his neck...it...didn't work. As much as he tried, it was stuck. It burned at his hands. Shit! Charka formed? Damn, these people must be strong to get these kinds of techniques, and for them to use them on me, a mere captive must've meant that the village had very significant power despite it's size.
What the hell do I do now?
-you wait...as damn degrading as this is, this could be a way to get more information, of course. You may get even deeper here than you would at the original plan.
Eventually, I can lend enough power into your body to break the collar and for you to escape but I can't send it all at once, it'll hurt your charka channels-
Typical...smartass kitsune...
-I would hope so, I didn't survive this freakin long on luck...-
...Hn...
A timid knock on the door resounded loudly through the large chamber. The man in the said room nearly groaned, his headache was building fast and whatever news that was here was probably not good.
"come in" he said, as he regained his regal composure.
'Figures' he thought as he saw the shinobi's stricken expression. 'can't be anything good...'
"s-sss-ssir..." he started, tumbling over his words in 'piss your pants' fear.
"Spit it out, unless you would you like me to assist you in it?" I said, frostily, watching him loose all the color that remained in his face.
"theresbeenabreakinandthiskidbroachedoursecurityandnullifedalldefenses!" 1
I mentally despaired a bit; after I processed what was said anyways.
Well, this is total fucking shit.
"What happened afterwards?" I asked, as calmly as possible, my voice and my face totally impassive.
I watched as the poor shinobi tried to breathe properly before finding the courage to continue. After a few moments waiting, I was finally rewarded with an answer.
"He was captured...he is trussed by one of the binding rings. He will be sold at the next auction and publicly punished by 100 strokes of the whip"
"Fine. But beforehand, I want you to bring him to me...I want to take a look at our little troublemaker" I finished, a bit curious as to who could've taken down all our defenses. They were already amazing and no one should've made it through the first layer as he himself had been the one to take days on end, setting up all the intricate webbings and traps.
As he bowed and scurried out like the devil was on his heels, a presence entered the range of my senses.
"Che, not even a month and already all our hard work is taken down, sad"
"Don't worry little brother...this will all work out..."
I was almost falling into a doze when the door slammed open.
"You, there! Who let you out?"
TBC...
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Signing out,
Fhalcon