Hello peoples! I finally found time and inspiration to make a story. This is my first fanfic ever and I'm posting it in hopes of getting feedback on my writing because I want to be a write but I don't know if I suck or not. If I do suck I'll know that I'll be spending the rest of my life asking "Would you like fries with that?" So flames are welcome but please do tell me specifically what's WRONG with it.

I'm going to be majorly messing with the story line of the X-men in order for it to work so if that really bothers you please don't read because I don't want to read a review bitching about how I'm evil for changing the story line. Also I'm not that good with the accents so they'll be slight ones. The first part of the story is just a narration in Rogue's point of view but it won't have her accent in it and I'll be putting the first chapter and maybe the second if its done up right after so you have something to actually review on. I'll allow suggestions on what you would like to see in my story. I may or may not listen and do it but you can suggest away if it makes you happy as can be. Its rated R for things later on....which I won't be telling you yet or else it'll ruin everything. (yes I know I'm evil, tell me something I don't know. Lol I'm kidding)

Disclaimer: As much as I wish, I did I don't own the X-men. Marvel and Stan Lee own them, though I'm trying to combine all my future birthday and Christmas presents from people and just ask for Remy but sadly its not working. I also don't own any of the scenes from movies that I used in my story. For example in the first chapter I use bits and pieces from the movie Girl Interrupted which is a movie I just love to death but I've yet to read the book due to not finding it in stores anywhere. (If you know where to get it please tell me and I will be ever so grateful

Summary: Rogue is the new patient at the Xavier Institute and nothing is how it seems. She keeps seeing weird things happen and a shadow is guarding her at night. She doesn't want to be there but she can't get out because everyone thinks she's insane and so she stays and harbors her secret of being a mutant with poisonous skin. But will a certain Cajun find he's way beneath her mask and melt her frozen heart? (I know its kind of a shitty summary but its better than you think...I hope...)

Narration

"People have been calling me crazy for as long as I can remember. The first time someone ever called me crazy was when I jumped out of the big Oak tree in the front yard in Mississippi when I was four. 'If I was crazy then, what am I now, insane? If I was crazy then, and crazy people are dangerous, then why was I said to be normal and fine all these years? If I was crazy for jumping, aren't most people?' These questions were the last things I asked, or really said for that matter, to Doctor William Stryker. I suppose they upset him, or maybe it was the fact that my face was inches from his when I said it and said it with a snarl tone in my voice. I doubt I'll ever know but whatever the reason, he got upset and decided rather quick with Doctor Essex, to ship me off to live at the Xavier Institute for 'treatment' with my fellow 'crazy' people and where I wouldn't be a 'danger to society.' In other words, he was sending me to hellish death"

That's the first part. I'm not asking you to read and review this little bit but if you want to go ahead. I'm going to try and get the first chapter to load today. I hope you liked this small part at least because that my be all you get if the other chapters won't load because a friend of mine tried to get it some of his stuff to load and it wouldn't. We still don't know why. Yes I'm rambling. I do this often just to let you know, so please don't be alarmed. Just laugh and call me a psycho like everyone else does! I wonder why the do that. (blank stare)