Author's Note: Umm... Oh yeah! Someone gave me a review saying that it wasn't clear where they were. See, that's the thing with these kinds of stories; when I write something like this (minus the poems) I don't usually put the setting. It's a comedy not a novel. As long as it gets a few laughs out of people. And someone also said something about the poems not rhyming... I think. But if someone did then you have to remember that these poems are being written by Touko, Amon, and Nagira. Well, they're being written by me but from their points of view and I'm just putting together something that they might say to each other and I have no clue what I just said. The point is they are not real poets people! Anyway... I really recommend reading that italic letters at the end (after reading the poem and short, short, short story). You might find to info there. Is it good or bad? I guess that's for you to decide.
Poetry from the Heart:
Chapter 3
Nagira: Wow Amon. That wasn't too bad for a guy who's never written a poem before, or anything else for that matter
Amon: Whatever
Nagira: Very romantic
Amon: It's not suppose to be romantic
Nagira: Either way, it's good... But not that good. I mean, half the stuff doesn't even rhyme.
Amon: What are you getting at?
Nagira: I'm just saying you could've done better
Amon: If you don't like then why don't you do one yourself
Nagira: I already got that covered (clears throat and reads his poem out loud)
Amon's Respond (Nagira's Version)
Sorry Touko, but I don't love you.
You're crazy and insane, things I try to avoid.
You were in a mental hospital for god's sake!
What kind of a family do you think you and I would make?
I don't think you and I were ever meant to be.
That's the reason I dumped you to begin with.
As for falling for your roommate, so what if it's true.
She's much younger and cuter than you.
Face it Touko, you're just not my type.
Then again, I don't think I even have a type.
Anyway, that poem you wrote, I really liked it.
It rhymed and sounded sweet and charming.
However, those last few lines were really unappreciated.
Robin never did anything to you, she just works with me!
And even then, you can't blame me for falling in love with her.
I mean, the girl does have looks.
I guess what I'm trying to say is, I don't like you that way.
From the beginning I was just using you to stay out of Crazy Zaizen's way.
I was never crazy enough to fall in love with you.
That's why it was so easy to dump you.
As for eloping with you, I don't think so
You'll have to kill me for that to come true.
You wanted sweet and honest words, well here they are.
Hey, at least they rhyme!
Please don't write back, rhyming takes lots of work.
So save your time and mine and leave me alone.
Nagira
Nagira: Well, did ya like?
Amon: You signed your name you know
Nagira: Oh (scratches out Nagira and puts Amon) Okay, ignore that and tell me how I did.
Amon: Its good. If me and Robin plan on making our lives short
Nagira: Huh?
Amon: As much as that rhymed, I don't think Touko would appreciate this
Nagira: And why not?
Amon: Let's see; you said she was crazy, insane, that she was in a mental hospital, and that her father was crazy. Not to mention you said I was in love with her roommate, which is not true
Nagira: But that part about Robin being cuter and younger is true
Amon: I... Well, yeah it is
Nagira: I knew you had it in you
Robin: Had what in him?
Amon: Uh oh
Robin: What are you guys doing?
Amon: We...
Nagira: We're writing poetry!
Robin: Well... There's something you don't hear everyday
Nagira: It's fun! You should try it
Robin: No thanks. I think I'll go make dinner instead
Amon: You do that
Robin: Okay (goes into the kitchen)
Amon: That was a close call
Nagira: Maybe we should let Robin read these
Amon: What are you, nuts?! No!
Nagira: It was just a suggestion
Amon: It was a stupid suggestion at that. We cannot let Robin see these. None of them!
Nagira: Alright already. Sheesh, calm down old man
Amon: (glares at him)
Nagira: Heh, heh
Amon: We are sending Touko my poem
Nagira: What's wrong with mine?
Amon: It's gonna get either me, Robin, or possible both of us killed
Nagira: So I just wrote that for nothing?
Amon: I guess so (starts walking out to the mailbox)
Nagira: Oh come on! Can't we send mine? Please!
Now that was fun to write. Originally I only had poems but then I added a short story to it. Well, that's a wrap for this fanfic. I hope you enjoyed it. I know you think its not my best work (duh!) but its my best comedy work. And I would say poetry work but that's not exactly true. I like all my poems the same so it would be unfair to all the others that are in my poetry book (I don't wanna make them feel bad). Anyway..... I guess that's all. Thanks for all the reviews, I hope to receive more, and be on the lookout for that sequel ya'll are anxiously waiting for... But don't waste your time checking every single day because its' not happening this month... And probably not the next for that matter. Anyway, bye bye :-)!
