Title: A sweet surprise
Author name: Trugeta
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by Akira Toriyama and Funimation. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended. Note further that I don't own any of the trademarks mentioned in this chapter.
This story focuses on Gohan and Videl, and is set after the Majin Buu Saga. It's an AU, and Reviews are welcome and appreciated.
Author's Note: Here it is. The final chapter to a story I had immense fun to write. In this spot I would like to thank all of my readers and reviewers, who motivated and encouraged and sometimes even demanded :) me constantly to write more. Without you, and especially without my loyal reviewers, this story would not even be here. Thank you!
On a further note, there will be a sequel. I will start working on it as soon as I have finished my 'Afterlife' storyline. The sequel will continue where 'Surprise' left off, but will contain more action. You can be sure that you will receive mail-notifications once the sequel starts. Now I will take some time off. Ja ne!
Chapter
39: The birth
Last
time...
Dende looked
up at Gohan and grinned.
"Thanks, Gohan. You would not believe how often I cursed you at the beginning, but then, when I got the knack to fighting, the punishment you inflicted onto me changed into something different. It became a chance for me to learn something new, something I had not even considered before. I apologize for the pranks I played at you and I promise I won't do it again." he ended solemnly.
Gohan nodded,
and was just about to answer when a frantic telepathic message
reached him.
'Gohan! Come fast! My water broke…'
Now
the continuation...
Flashback
Videl,
Bulma and Chi-Chi were sitting in the kitchen, discussing the latest
fashion-trends, when all of a sudden Videl's face became pained,
and subsequently she clutched her stomach with one hand.
"It's
getting worse." she whispered.
Chi-Chi
and Bulma looked at the young women concerned.
"What is getting
worse, dear?" Chi-Chi asked, her tone filled with concern and
suspicion.
"Pain...
in my abdomen. Been having it since last night. At first I thought it
was just indigestion, but now..." she said and trailed off,
clutching her stomach.
Chi-Chi
looked at Bulma and grasped Videl's hand.
"Do you think the
same, Bulma?"
The
blue-haired scientist nodded.
"Videl, is it a rhythmic pain or
is it constant?"
Videl
grimaced.
"Rhythmic." Then she understood what Bulma meant
with her question. "What! I can't be having contractions just
yet! It's too early!" she exclaimed concerned.
Bulma's
response was to smile at her gently.
"Trust me, Videl,
everything is perfectly in order. You know that Saiyan babies, and
even part-Saiyan babies at that, develop faster than normal human
babies. Even though Pan is only a quarter-Saiyan, the Saiyan genes in
her are dominant. Meaning, that you don't have anything to worry
about. My latest scans indicated that something like that might
happen, as Pan is far enough developed. Everything is in order,
Videl." she reassured.
Videl's
facial expression relaxed, only to contort in pain some time
later.
"Aaah!" she exclaimed, clutching her stomach with her
free hand again, while Chi-Chi rubbed her back in sympathy. She knew
exactly how painful contractions were.
"I
wonder why Gohan does not notice the fluctuations in your KI, Videl.
Hmm, I bet he's too engrossed in a fight..." Bulma mused.
"That
are our men. Fighting before everything else. Typical." Chi-Chi
exclaimed, only half in jest.
"At
least your water did not break till yet." Bulma said. "But we
have to get you to hospital as fast as possible. To be honest, I
don't fancy playing the role of a midwife." she said only
half-jokingly.
Suddenly
Videl's face contorted in pain again, as the next contraction
hit.
"Kami, it hurts!" she said softly. Her grip tightened
slightly in Chi-Chi's hand and her free hand was holding her
stomach.
"It's
okay, Videl. It's all okay," Chi-Chi said and patted her
daughter-in-laws back.
Slowly
the pain abated and gave Videl opportunity to breathe deeply. Bulma
handed her a glass of water, and Videl took it all too gladly and
emptied its contents thirstily.
This
reprieve was however short-lived, as the next contraction hit several
minutes later. Videl bit back her tears, but yelped.
Chi-Chi
looked at her daughter-in-law.
"Videl, Bulma will give word to
Gohan. I will get you into the car. We can't wait any longer. We
have got to get you to hospital, dear."
With
that, Chi-Chi helped Videl into a standing position, while Bulma made
her way to the cellar, intent on notifying the father-to-be.
Chi-Chi
and Videl had nearly reached the door, when Videl suddenly stopped
dead in her tracks. Next she looked down at herself,
horrified.
'Damn, I should be old enough to know when I need
to use the loo, ain't I?' she thought, chiding herself.
Then
she noticed the amount of fluid and put two and two together.
'Gohan!
Come fast! My water broke…' she send instinctively to her
husband.
End
Flashback
Down
in the GR
They
could see by the look on his face that something important had
happened, and all activity stopped instantly. Goku looked at his
oldest son concerned, and when Gohan nodded to him it confirmed what
he had thought. It had started.
Gohan
looked in the round of warriors and friends, keeping his emotions in
check.
"Guys, I gotta get Videl into the hospital fast. She told
me seconds ago that her water broke."
Offering
that as an explanation Gohan rushed out of the GR and to his wife.
Now that he was not concentrated on the fight solely any more, he
could actually feel the changes in Videl's KI. It would probably be
hours still until she actually would give birth, but he had to get to
the hospital. Pronto.
He
did barely notice that the others followed suit behind him and he
actually knocked the door to the cellar of its hinges in his haste to
get to his wife. Gohan's Saiyan side was going strong, and it was
responding to the pain he felt through the bond he shared with his
mate. She needed him, and he would be there.
Unconsciously
he had already switched into Super Saiyan Three mode, to offer a
maximum of speed and protection for the task ahead. Luckily the next
hospital was only five minutes away at maximum speed (he had actually
tested it beforehand, although it had startled the poor personal
quite thoroughly).
The
scenario that greeted him was the one he had awaited. Videl was lying
in the living room on the large sofa, while Chi-Chi held her hand.
His mother looked up at him, and her face lit up.
"There you are
finally, Gohan. We wanted to take her to the hospital via car, but
she refused to be taken once her water had broken. She said she was
waiting for you, and it was your duty as her mate. Thus we moved her
here."
Gohan
smirked proudly while acknowledging what his mother had said with a
nod. His Videl was acting the way he had hoped she would. He nodded
slightly to himself. In some aspects, Videl was quite Saiyan, and he
was glad for it.
"Who am I to decline my duty?" he asked, bend
down to one knee and swept Videl in his arms in one swift motion.
His
mother smiled at her son. Seeing him the way he acted made her proud.
Maybe it was a good thing after all that the warrior in Gohan had
broken through. Her son was so manly!
"Oh Gohan, just wait a
moment, you'll need that!" she said and reached for a bag. The
bag he and Videl had packed for just this occasion.
Gohan
flashed a small smile at his mother as she gave him the bag. Holding
Videl with one hand he slung the back over his shoulder with the
other.
Meanwhile
the others had gathered in the living room too, making it quite
crowded. Gohan, who was about to exit, looked over his
shoulder.
"We'll meet in the hospital." he said and stepped
into the direction of the door that led to the balcony.
Before
he could reach for the door handle, however, Videl had another
contraction. In pain, she grabbed the nearest thing available, in
this case, flesh. Gohan's flesh, his right arm, to be exact,
As
Videl clung to him, Gohan was more than glad that he had not
even considered to power down, for his flesh was so much harder as a
Super Saiyan Three than in his normal form. But still, that had
nearly hurt! His mate was strong, and it made Gohan
proud.
The
contraction ended soon enough as Videl released her hold on Gohan'
arm. Oh boy, was he ever glad that his skin was so hard now. Funny
how his dad has survived without a Super Saiyan form. He would have
to ask him how he had managed this. Later.
Gohan
then opened the door that led to the balcony and stepped outside,
holding Videl securely.
"Sorry, Gohan, I didn't expect it
to be this strong..." his wife apologized, only to be met
by a smile.
"Don't
you worry about it. No harm done, hun." Gohan said.
And
with this, he took off into the air, his precious cargo cradled
safely in his arms. Gohan extended his aura to cover his wife too,
and then he gathered speed. Soon he was nothing more than a golden
streak in the air to the others, fading in the distance.
Goku
clapped into his hands.
"Okay guys, I say we give them ten
minutes of a head-start and then I teleport us all over. Who's for
some lunch now?" he asked with his trademark Son grin.
Several
groans could be heard, but they could not deny the logic of what Goku
had suggested. It would be odd to be earlier at the hospital than
Gohan and Videl themselves, and until everything (except the birth,
of course) was settled, it would be best to leave the young
parents-to-be to their own devices.
After
all, they were adults, and from the 'training' they had received
the previous months they knew what they had to do. Chi-Chi looked up
from her place and nodded. Preparing something to eat would probably
distract her from her nervousness. For now she could do nothing more
than wait and pray to Kami that everything would be alright.
Speaking
of Kami, said Namekian going by the name of Piccolo, acting Kami of
Earth, who had still to mind everyone else's business, was pulling
every string possible to assure a safe travel for his first and until
recently only student.
He
had to subtly 'redirect' a crazy glider who would have otherwise
crossed paths with a certain demi-Saiyan in the mother of all
hurries, not to mention an adverse weather front with was headed this
way. It was the least he could do for Gohan, and he did it all too
gladly.
Meanwhile,
while Chi-Chi was preparing some food for the waiting Z-Senshi, Gohan
was nearing his destination. Videl, who had not suffered from another
contraction just yet, was snuggled up against his chest.
'We're
almost there, hun.' Gohan send to his wife telepathically, and
Videl nodded.
He
sped up some more when he felt Videl's KI fluctuate once more, and
the next contraction hit seconds later. Again Videl gasped in pain
and grabbed hold of Gohans arm in a rather firm grip, barely able to
stand the pain. As the pain finally abated, she wondered more and
more how people could want to go through this more than once.
Gohan
kissed Videl's forehead once her face had relaxed again, and that
simple gesture of affection gave her back some strength she had lost
during the contraction. Seconds later Gohan descended and landed in
front of the entrance of the 'Community General hospital',
startling quite a few people in the area.
Without
wasting any time Gohan grabbed the next person that looked remotely
like an employee and demanded assistance. Still in Super Saiyan Three
mode and quite frightening looking, it worked like a charm. Videl was
quickly retrieved and wheeled off to one of the delivery rooms.
Luckily
for Gohan, Chi-Chi had called Videl's doctor right after her water
had broken. The doctor met her in the entrance hall to her relief,
then looked about for the soon-to-be daddy.
Gohan
had finally powered down completely and tried to follow his wife who
had been wheeled into the delivery room already, but then he had got
lost in the hospital. Using his enhanced Saiyan senses he found her
scent, which was unmistakable to him.
It
was the oddest thing ever to see a grown-up man sniffing the air, but
the few passers-by only shook their heads and had no second thoughts.
Loads of strange this happened around here, a man sniffing the air
was nothing out of the ordinary.
And
finally, after what was like a life-time to Gohan, he had arrived
outside the delivery room, where the doc was already waiting for
him.
"Ahh, there you are, Mr. Son. Good, I thought we had
lost you. Here, put this on. It's time to help the newest addition
to your family onto this world." Videl's doctor told the now
nervous looking Gohan.
Using
all of his inner strength as a warrior Gohan put himself together and
seized control of his emotions. Nodding to the doc he was about to
enter, when he suddenly remembered something.
"Doctor, I've
forgotten something and will follow you shortly."
The
doctor shrugged and opened the door that led to the delivery room,
while Gohan contacted his father via telepathy.
'Hey dad,
we're at the hospital right now. The hall is clear, so you can
teleport over any time.'
Luckily
for Goku his son had contacted them via telepathy, as he and the
others were currently busy devouring Chi-Chi's cooking. The Son
matriarch had made full use of Videl's kitchen, and her nervous
energy had produced quite the meal.
'Okay, son. We'll
finish right up and IT over. You just give me a lock.'
Gohan
nodded and send his father the mental image of the hall he was
standing in.
'Alright, dad. See you when you have 'finished
up'. Let me guess, mom's nervous energy produced quite a meal,
huh?' he added grinning.
'You
bet, son.' was Goku's, and Gohan could hear the grin. 'We'll
be over in a few minutes. I'll inform the others now. See you soon.
Oh, and son, do what the doctor says, they know what they're doing
and what's best. Believe me, I'm talking from experience here.'
'Ok,
dad. I'll enter the lioness den now. Wish me luck!'
'You'll
make it. You're a warrior after all. I will call Hercule, too,
can't leave him out, can we?'
'Nope.
Till later, dad.'
With
that he closed the telepathic connection and entered the delivery
room.
Over
at Gohan's house
Goku
looked into the round.
"As you can guess, Gohan 'called'.
Videl's already in the delivery room, and Gohan's with her. He
send me a mental image of the location, and it is now safe to
teleport over. I'd say we do just that."
Nodding
heads everywhere.
"It is time to welcome a new Saiyan to this
world, Kakkarott." Vegeta stated, and Goku nodded proud.
"That
it is, Vegeta. Chi-Chi, could you call Hercule and inform him? I
guess he'd want to know."
His
wife nodded, got out her mobile and informed the Word Champ of what
was going on. Predictably Hercule was quite nervous, and said he'd
be there as fast as possible.
As
soon as the conversation was over, Chi-Chi grabbed hold of Goku.
Luckily Instant Transmission also worked if you touched the person
who had touched the 'teleporter', otherwise it would have been
quite problematic and ridiculous looking to boot if every Z-Senshi
would have had to touch Goku.
The
oldest Son Saiyan put two fingers to his forehead, concentrated on
the image his son had send him, and they were off.
A
minute before Gohan had decided that it would probably be much safer
for him to power up and make his skin as hard as possible. He had a
feeling that he would need it. Without breaking any sweat Gohan
switched into Super Saiyan 2 mode. That should be suffice...
Gohan
had put the hospital gown, which the doctor had given him, on and had
entered the delivery room. The demi noticed that security personal
was standing at each side of the door. He had noticed beforehand that
an ID-card was attached to the hospital gown.
Gohan
pointed to the card.
"I'm Gohan Son, and my wife is in there.
So make it fast!"
The
guard standing right checked the ID-card.
"Umm, this says Gohan
Son has black hair and black eyes. So you can't be Gohan Son, pal."
he said smirking.
Said
Gohan Son sighed. He should have guessed something like that would
happen. Deciding not to give in to his urge to beat those two goons
into next year, Gohan switched out of SSJ2 into his normal mode.
"Is
this better?" he asked.
The
guards looked at him flabbergasted, and once they had overcome their
shock, checked the ID-card and the person before them.
"O...
O... Okay, Mr. ... Son. You have clearance."
Gohan
nodded and powered up again. To his satisfaction he noticed that one
of the guards had fainted. Jerks! This obstacle removed, Gohan
entered the delivery room, smirking at the thought what his father
and the other Z-Senshi would do to the mental constitution of the
guards. He shrugged. That was not his problem, was it?
Videl's
doctor had looked at him surprised as he entered.
"Mr... Son?"
Gohan nodded. "Didn't you have... black hair and black eyes just
a minute ago?" the astonished doctor asked.
The
demi-Saiyan nodded.
"Never mind now, doc. I'd say we have more
important matters at hand." he said and went to his wife's side.
"Hi, hon."
Videl
looked up at him from her bed and managed a weak smile.
"Hi
luv."
She
wanted to say more, but then the next contraction hit and Videl cried
out in pain. She grabbed Gohan's hand, and the demi-Saiyan was very
glad that he had switched into Super Saiyan 2 mode again. Boy was she
strong!
He
didn't know what to do for her. Even his experience as a warrior
was of no help here. Gohan couldn't even begin to imagine
what the pain felt like.
He
could definitely tell it was agonizing judging by how her fingers
were nearly digging into his skin. All he could do was to hold her
hand and be with her, trying to comfort her.
"You're
doing very good, Videl!" the doctor encouraged her.
"Get
it out of me!" she shouted, nearly crying out in pain.
"Just
breathe, luv. You're almost through this one." Gohan coached her,
lending her some of his energy. It seemed to work, as Videl's face
visibly relaxed. After a few seconds the contraction was over, and
Videl leaned back, still holding his hand.
Just
as the contraction was over, Chi-Chi entered the room. Gohan had
barely suppressed a snicker when he had heard the shouts of the
guards. That must have been a funny picture. It was a pretty stupid
thing to try to stand up to his mother when she was determined.
Unless one was a Saiyan warrior...
Chi-Chi
rushed to Videl's side instantly, while the others obviously waited
outside.
"Videl, how are you?"
Videl
managed a smile.
"Good, mom, except for the fact that I'm
giving birth."
Gohan's
mother smiled in understanding.
"It will soon be over, daughter.
Be strong."
Videl
nodded, and Gohan noticed that Videl was working up quite a sweat, as
the little baby within her grew restless and wanted out.
Chi-Chi
looked at the doctor.
"Doctor, how far apart are they now?"
Videl's
doc, who had been quite astonished by the happenings of the last few
minutes, pulled himself together due to the experience he had gained
in countless years.
"Every four minutes now, Mrs. Son."
Chi-Chi
nodded, satisfied.
"She's getting close..." she murmured.
"Soon my son is going to be a father!" she then stated with
delight.
Gohan
could not help but shake his head as he held the hand of his
wife.
'Typical mum...' he thought.
As
the next contraction hit a few minutes later, Gohan tried to comfort
his wife the best he could, but again he had no idea how to do
so. He had so absolutely no idea what she was going trough right now,
and thus he could only offer his presence to help his wife.
Once
this new contraction was over, Gohan had a question for the
doctor.
"Doctor, when will my wife deliver?"
The
doctor looked at him.
"That's hard to tell. It could be a
while. I can't do anything unless there's a problem and so far
there isn't one. It all depends on the baby. It'll come when it's
ready." he replied, standing patiently at the bedside.
Two
minutes later the next contraction hit, and Gohan could feel through
his bond and through observing her KI, that it was a lot stronger
than the others.
"Oh
Kami, not again!" she said and squeezed her eyes shut, grabbing
Gohan's hand more strongly.
"I hate you!" Videl suddenly yelled as the contraction hit full on.
Gohan
looked at her shocked.
"What?" he asked, before remembering
what he had read. It was a reaction that often occurred, and he had
to play along.
"You
did this to me! You're not going to touch me again! Ever!" she
yelled and screamed out in pain again.
"Videl,
I . . ." he began.
"Just
take it, Mr. Son." the doc advised.
Gohan
nodded and did just that, knowing it would only be temporary. Then he
strengthened his grip around Videl's hand and began to strengthen
her with his KI once more, and he noticed the look of surprise on
Videl's face with a smile. It was obviously working, and he was
making it easier for her. Good.
"Sorry, luv. I didn't mean
it." she then said, when the contraction was finally over.
Gohan
smiled at her.
"Sssshhh. It's okay, hon. You concentrate on
Pan. Don't worry about me."
Videl
nodded.
'Good.'
Gohan thought to himself as he stroked Videl's cheeks. Now they
only had to wait until Videl was actually ready to give birth...
A
whole bunch of hours later...
Gohan
exited the delivery room with a large smirk on his face.
"Guys,
the newest addition to the Saiyans has finally arrived!" he
exclaimed happily, but with a warrior's composure.
Goku
was the first to approach him and smiled at him.
"Congrats,
my son!" he exclaimed.
Gohan
mirrored the smile and decided to say what the doctor had said to
him.
"And it is a girl. As we said. And it's the
most beautiful baby girl in the whole world!" he exclaimed.
The
older Saiyan smiled even more.
"That she surely is." he said
and patted his son on the back.
Vegeta
however had other interests.
"And what is she?"
Gohan
knew instantly what the Saiyan Prince meant.
"She has a tail,
Vegeta. And she is going to keep it." he said softly.
Vegeta
smirked with pride at hearing this. That was all he wanted to know.
Gohan was a true Saiyan, and the Saiyan Prince was sure that he would
make sure that Pan was too, even if she 'only' was a
quarter-Saiyan.
"Good to see that she takes after you."
he said, and Gohan understood, mirroring the Saiyan Princes' smirk.
The
Prince of all Saiyans was sure that Gohan would train her as soon as
she was old enough, and he as the Prince of all Saiyans, would see
personally to it that this young Saiyan would unfold her full
potential.
Bulma
quickly took over where her mate had left off.
"And, after
whom does she take?"
Gohan
grinned,
"We could not see the eye-colour yet, but she has
Saiyan-black hair. Thick and unruly." he said proudly.
Bulma
nodded and pulled the proud new-father in a hug, which he returned
all too gladly.
"Congrats, Gohan. I wish you, Videl and Pan all
the best."
Gohan
smiled at her.
"Thank you, Bulma. That means a lot."
Goku
looked at his son, a smile playing in the corners of his mouth.
"And
what about your mum? How did she take it?"
At
this, Gohan smirked a full-blown smirk.
"It was actually quite
funny, dad. As soon as Videl had given birth to Pan, and the nurse
gave a screaming Pan to Videl, Mom exclaimed 'I am a Grandmother! I
am a Grandmother!' and fainted. It took some nasty smelling salts
to revive her, but she recovered quickly."
Goku
smiled at hearing this. It was so typical for his wife, but he would
not have it any other way. The fact that she had not come out of the
delivery room meant that she had stayed with Videl. He would check on
his wife later.
Before
the others could question Gohan any further, a nurse asked if they
would all would like to meet near the nursery to view the new
addition to the Son family.
"Let's go see your newly born
daughter, son." Goku said softly as they followed the rest
towards the nursery.
Once
there, all were Oooing and Awwwing at the windows as the nurse showed
them Pan. The little girl wailed and howled, and was easily
distinguishable due to her tail. She bore Videl's facial structures,
Gohan's hair colour and Gohan' eyes, as they could tell now she had
opened them. She was indeed perfect.
Hercule,
who had as recently as now arrived, rushed forward.
"How's
my little girl?"
Gohan
smiled at him reassuringly.
"Completely exhausted, but ok.
She fell asleep within minutes after giving birth to our wonderful
daughter. That's why I'm out here too. I got shooed out so she could
get some well-deserved rest."
He
patted Hercule on the back.
"And now we have another little
girl!" he exclaimed happily and led Hercule towards the window, so
that the older man could have a look. Seconds later Hercule nodded
happily. The little one could be told apart from the other babies
easily, for her tail was simply too obvious.
Hercule
smiled.
"She is wonderful, Gohan! Do you have a name for
her already?" he asked.
The
others instantly pricked their ears. Gohan smiled.
"Of course,
Hercule. Since ages. Videl and I have decided to call her Pan. It is
Latin and means 'Everything'. That's just what the little one
means to us." he explained.
The
others ooowed and awwweed. This was simply too cute.
And
thus, a new life had entered the world. Her name was Pan, and she
would give her parents a lot of sleepless nights in the future, but
one smile of her would repay her parents instantly. Now a new
challenge would begin for two young lovers, who had now become two
young parents. The future looked bright.
FIN.
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As always very special thanks to my beta Rose Vaughn, who did an amazing job throughout all those chapters! Big Thx, Ash!
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Gogi:
Thanks! But yeah, now it is over. Sadly...
goldfighter:
Glad that you liked it. And here's more...
Vi3:
I'm glad to hear that. And that wait's over...
Candy
the Duck: Maybe not the best, but one of the better chappies, I'd
say...
Tootsy:
Thanks! Yeah, I knew that, and that will actually be a problem for my
wife too, should we be expecting some time. But everything went well
for you in the end, and that's most important.
Clarence:
No prob. Viruses are nasty things, and it's good to hear that you
freed your comp of it. Goten became a Super Elite, cause I didn't
want to leave him out. Ever since he started training in all earnest,
his attitude changed. But you're right, he's a Super Elite on
probation.
fireeyes:
Here's more...
Dooleys:
Hey pal, long time no see. Glad that you kicked yourself to catching
up, and I'm also glad that you liked what you read. Thanks for the
compliment, and I'll try to keep it up.
As for HP, haven't decided yet...
Rejhan
(from Ch. 38): Thanks! Glad that you like how Dende turns out.
Personally, I think that a Kami who can defend himself is much better
off...
Rejhan
(from Ch. 37): Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it. I must admit,
I too like how Vegeta's character developed over the course of the
story. Thanks for the compliment!
animeprincess1452:
Thanks! Hope you liked the delivery too. Took me a great deal of
research and thinking to make it (what I think) believable.
Electra
Black: Thank you! Yeah, that she sure is. She's a Saiyan after
all, and impatience runs high in Saiyans, as we know. Glad that you
liked the fight scene, and here's more...
Tsume-Hiei
luver (from Ch. 38): Thanks! Glad that you liked the chapter!
Tsume-Hiei
luver (from Ch. 37): Thank you!
Kiwigrl89:
Yeah, sadly. But as said above, there will be a sequel. I'm glad that
you like my story. Thanks for the compliment!
PanBraSaiyin:
Yup, nasty things, those. But I had to end it there. Glad that you
liked the chapter title, and right you are, she's already showing her
personality... :)
Michael
Marrano: Thanks! As said in the review, you have my permission to
use it.
nick-lover1991:
Thank you! I'm glad that you think the story is wonderful, and be
assured, there will be more coming from me. My next project is to
finish the 'Afterlife' storyline, and after that I'll write a sequel
to 'Surprise'. Thank for adding me to your favs, I appreciate it!
Daffodil8728:
Yeah, that's really too bad. But as you say, all good things must
come to an end. And nope, no open ending here. And thanks for the
compliment, its greatly appreciated!
SSJ3MysticGohan:
Yup, that they are, but sometimes cliffies are necessary, to give the
author enough time to write more. :)
And don't worry, usually I
don't do it often, but that was really necessary here. And thanks!
powerof3halliwells:
That's, as always, a matter of taste. I prefer coke, but that's just
me...
Glad that you liked the chapter, but the wait for this one was necessary...
Marshmellow13Dragon:
Heh heh, someone's sure enthusiastic here, ne? As for Videl getting
mad, I consulted several sources, and all told me that something like
what I wrote really tends to happen. But clever as our demi is, he
read of it beforehand as was prepared. As for taking long, no prob!
Saiya-jin
Queen: as said above, i had to end it there. As for seeing dende
fight, i guess opportunity will present itself in the sequel.
thanks!
supernatural-gal:
glad to have you here now. And you bet that vegeta had to say
something...
Megs21:
see, you got your chi-chi reaction, just as promised. thanks for the
compliment!
Rose
Vaughn: you sure have. But as always, you were the first to
actually read it. :)
Glad that you approve of Dende appreciating fighting now.
Saiyan-of-the-Seas:
as mentioned above, i had to leave it there last chappie. But now the
wait is over. Thanks!
Princess
of the Saiyans 16: and about time too in my opinion. Cant believe
they left the sons 3rd classes in the series. They deserved more in
my opinion. glad that you liked it!
InuSaiyan007:
i know, but that was the best place to end it. Good to hear that the
answers will be given soon in your story. And you're welcome, I'm
glad I could help. Writers block is really an evil thing, and i hope
it is shattered for good.
Son
Oliver: thanks, pal. You can bet the pan of my au will indeed be
a valuable addition to the z-senshi, as well as bra. Glad that you
like the development of Dende, I just didn't like the idea of a
defenceless Kami. Yup, you were right with your prediction, as you
usually are. :)
Heh, as you saw Gohan was clever enough to stay in his ssj2-form, otherwise she might really have broken his hand. As for Pan seeing her Dad in SSJ form, that does not really matter, for babies can't differentiate colours when they're newly born...
cosmictwilight:
Yup, I know that I'm evil. My wife tells me often enough. :)
Nope,
as you saw, no complications here. Thanks for the compliment!
Mei
fa-chan: Heh, glad that you liked it! Here's the update...
Cappucine:
Thank you! That it did really, didn't it? With Dende being able to
defend himself the Z-Senshi have one less thing to worry about. And I
think Gohan handled the delivery pretty well, didn't he?
zara
m: Heh, I hope you had. Yeah, I think Dende's combat abilities
(which he'll undoubtedly train, ne, Dende?) will come in handy.
Glad that you liked my idea of putting a GR in the HTC. I think it
was one of my better ones. :)
Thanks for the compliment, I like to
think I handed it well!
zfighter1989:
# cringes # I hate them too, but it was necessary. Glad that you
like Dende's training. And here's the update.
korrd:
Yup, she's finally in labour. And nope, there was no reason to
split the delivery up. There, all finished.
Again,
big thanks to all my reviewers. Without your support, this story
would have never been here in the first place. I hope you continue
your support throughout my other projects. Thanks! Ja ne!