Hey guys,
This is the after word and I would like to take the space (not time) to thank everyone who has reviewed my story:
Princess Paige
leo/piper4ever
Charmboy4
LeoPiper24/7
piperleo4eva
iheartgreenday
Chub
p3charmed4eva
xXx RT xXx
Charmed-Phoebe03
LeoPiperAndyPrue
xjelliepotatoex
Spidyrocks-3
katie
DuCksRVeRykOoL
BeAuTy AnGeL
Jessica Clark
patricia
Sci fi fan
Most of you guys have actually reviewed more than once and I would really like to thank you guys for all that really helping reviews (ie NO!::Breathes:: NO! SHE CAN'T DIE! Did you get the noo! part? She can't die! They can not be seperated...Bring her back right now! I mean it!::stands with hands on hips staring at PC screen:: NOW!)
Well I'll just basically give you the figures, even though I know I shouldn't! This is of the real, actual story text...
Chapter 1: Meetings- 248 words Chapter 2: Decisions- 497 words Chapter 3: Death and Destruction- 430 words Chapter 4: Conscience- 911 words Chapter 5: White to Black- 1,377 words Chapter 6: I Will Always Love You- 1,542 words Chapter 7: Elder land- 1,650 words Chapter 8: Tomorrow is Another Day- 1,211 words
The number of words has been gradually increasing (usually). Sort of like the Harry Potter books, getting bigger and bigger, only these are chapters. I have to say after I posted up the first two chapters I forgot about this story for a while (you can see the writing style change) but when I restarted it I've gradually built up steam.
I'm most proud of 'Elder land'. It was my longest and easiest to write, present Leo is quite predictable but I changed him with the whole impatient thing. I guess being in love changes you especially when your changing your past for what you hope is the best. Then there was that whole Gideon thing (was he even an elder back then?)...
I look back and say it's been fun. This whole thing has definitely changed me for the better and helped my writing style and everything. I admit I kept on going into third person when it was meant to be Leo's POV. I got really pissed off with myself! I kept on having to double back and change pronouns and everything. Talk about annoying!
Sigh It's been a rollercoaster ride and I didn't actually mean for the story to be this long and it's changed quite a bit from what I thought it would be when I first started it. Oh well, I've enjoyed it and I hope you have too. Kisses and hugs to all (especially those who reviewed!).
Luv,
P3
P.S. If you want anything explained just email me and I'll reply as best as I can, promise! =P
This is the after word and I would like to take the space (not time) to thank everyone who has reviewed my story:
Princess Paige
leo/piper4ever
Charmboy4
LeoPiper24/7
piperleo4eva
iheartgreenday
Chub
p3charmed4eva
xXx RT xXx
Charmed-Phoebe03
LeoPiperAndyPrue
xjelliepotatoex
Spidyrocks-3
katie
DuCksRVeRykOoL
BeAuTy AnGeL
Jessica Clark
patricia
Sci fi fan
Most of you guys have actually reviewed more than once and I would really like to thank you guys for all that really helping reviews (ie NO!::Breathes:: NO! SHE CAN'T DIE! Did you get the noo! part? She can't die! They can not be seperated...Bring her back right now! I mean it!::stands with hands on hips staring at PC screen:: NOW!)
Well I'll just basically give you the figures, even though I know I shouldn't! This is of the real, actual story text...
Chapter 1: Meetings- 248 words Chapter 2: Decisions- 497 words Chapter 3: Death and Destruction- 430 words Chapter 4: Conscience- 911 words Chapter 5: White to Black- 1,377 words Chapter 6: I Will Always Love You- 1,542 words Chapter 7: Elder land- 1,650 words Chapter 8: Tomorrow is Another Day- 1,211 words
The number of words has been gradually increasing (usually). Sort of like the Harry Potter books, getting bigger and bigger, only these are chapters. I have to say after I posted up the first two chapters I forgot about this story for a while (you can see the writing style change) but when I restarted it I've gradually built up steam.
I'm most proud of 'Elder land'. It was my longest and easiest to write, present Leo is quite predictable but I changed him with the whole impatient thing. I guess being in love changes you especially when your changing your past for what you hope is the best. Then there was that whole Gideon thing (was he even an elder back then?)...
I look back and say it's been fun. This whole thing has definitely changed me for the better and helped my writing style and everything. I admit I kept on going into third person when it was meant to be Leo's POV. I got really pissed off with myself! I kept on having to double back and change pronouns and everything. Talk about annoying!
Sigh It's been a rollercoaster ride and I didn't actually mean for the story to be this long and it's changed quite a bit from what I thought it would be when I first started it. Oh well, I've enjoyed it and I hope you have too. Kisses and hugs to all (especially those who reviewed!).
Luv,
P3
P.S. If you want anything explained just email me and I'll reply as best as I can, promise! =P