Mom, I Miss You
I'm soooooooooooo sorry this hasn't come out sooner!!! First I was grounded and couldn't use the computer, then it screwed up and I couldn't load it!!! I'm soooooooooooo sorry!!!!! YaY!!!! Sooooooooo many people love me!!!!!!!!!!!! A cirtain reviewer (you know who you are) asked my to do a TON of work and type everything out! Do you like, Do you!!!!????? Gohan: ya, she does all this work for you and all you do is complain!!!! Videl: that isn't nice! She Did say it doesn't deserve a flame. Me: Ya! Besides, I was just kidding! Sheesh! Besides, Mystic, you are sooooooooo cool!!!!!!!! I LUV His Dark Materials by: Philip Pullman!!!!!!! (if any one likes sci- fi/ fantasy stuff, read it!!!!!)
I'm sooooooooo surprised sooooooooo many people were supportive in my last chappie! I thought I would get a ton of hate mail, but WOW! I didn't!!!!!! I was sooooooooo stuck with this chappie, but thanks to my friend Nicole, (I sorta borrowed an idea from her fic. hehehe) I was able to post it!!! YaY!!!!!! Gohan: Ya, and me and Videl helped!!! Videl: Ya, we did!!!!! Me: Fine!!!!! You guys helped me, along with Microsoft word's SPELL CHECK!!!!!!! (i no own that) Now. on to review responses!!!!!!!!:
MysticGohan3: Thanks!!!!! Gohan, don't you have something to say to her! Gohan: I'm sooooooooo sorry for being mean to you up there!!!!! Please forgive me!!!!! *falls on knees* I beg you!!!!! Videl: Nice show! Gohan: Thanks! (
Slashing Jaded Ignorance(G-KS: you are a great person!!!!!! Yes, I do stick up for my friends! *stands up proudly* I want to thank you for apologizing for your not quite flame. it wasn't even a speck of a flame, anywayz, you are a great person! Wait! Didn't I say that already? Gohan: Yes, you did. Videl: I'll say it again!!!! You are a great person!!!!!! Me: YaY!!!!! People like me!!!!!! Thank you!!!! Videl: what is she going on about? Gohan: I don't know, but I think we should leave her alone right now me: Yesyesyesyesyes!!!!!!!! I RULE fanfiction.net!!!!!!! Muhahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!! ( Videl: Yes, we should go now.
KaneTheRed: hold on a sec! I'm not going that far that soon! Gohan is NOT a super Saiya-jin yet; he only taps into the power of being one when surrounded with a strong emotion. You can be sure that my Gohan is NOT becoming weak!!!!!! No Way!!!!!!! Gohan: YaY I'm not becoming a wimp like in the show!!!!! I thank you Kane for saying I got skills! I always thought so, but you're the first one to say it in this fic! You Rule!!!!! (
Luna's Meow: You are absolutely right!!!! I got some crazy idea to boycott fanfiction.net to punish all the stupid flamers, but I realized that was STUPID!!!!!! If I were you, I would say the same thing! I'm sorry all you faithful reviewers!!!!!! *breaks down crying* ( Gohan: sorry about her, she's been a LITTLE crazy. Videl: 2 tests, a quiz and a project due tomorrow just found out about today would make a normal person crazy, with her. ummmmm put her in a strait jacket anyone?
butterball jackson: you are soooooo mean!!!!! Why even TRY to make someone feel bad!!!??? How would you like it if I did that to you!!!??? Videl: Yeah!!!!! Read chappie #4!!!!! That will teach ya!!!!
Wow!!!! Just the top part of this story took a while to type!!!! 2 pages!!!!!! Videl: Shut up and write! Me: Yes mam! On to the story!!!:
Out stepped Yoshimi. She had shoulder length dark blue hair, and deep black eyes, and a smirk identical to Videl's. In her hand was a black box with a big red button on it, playing with it, she spoke: "Sooo, you must be Gohan! We have a surprise for you!"
Gohan just stared blankly at Yoshimi wondering what the little black box could mean, that is until he felt a necklace fall around his neck. "Yes!" Videl cried. "Mission Accomplished!" A big, dark beaded chocker with shark teeth was stuck around his neck! (think Inuyasha here peoples!) The girls began to giggle, and Gohan began to get worried. "What is this?" he asked.
Still laughing, Videl replied, "You can't take it off! Only the one who places it around your neck can, and now you have to do what ever I say!!!!!! You can thank Bulma for this you know!"
"Wh wha what does Bulma have to do with this?" Gohan stuttered. He could feel a powerful ancient magic surround him, one that he couldn't understand. "Ohhhhhhhh Bulma made this off a copy made thousands of years ago, added with modern technology of course." Recited Yoshimi. "And, if anything goes wrong, all I have to do is press this button, and help, who understands this magic, will appear."
"Good! It looks like everything is in order!" Bulma said as she waltzed in. "Now Gohan, in case you haven't heard, you have to do EVERYTHING Videl says, or u will be thrown to the ground and will not be able to get up again until Videl says so. Yoshimi has a button to press if anything gets to far out of hand. Have FUN!!!!!" Bulma walked back into the forest and a small jet appeared out of a clearing near them, and it took off. Bulma smirked as she waved goodbye; 'Videl would do nicely for Gohan. She was strong like Chichi and wouldn't let him do just anything he wanted to. She was smart too; maybe I'll give her a job at C. Corp. when she gets older. mmmmmmm she would be a nice partner.'
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"Go get me a cup of water!"
"Go get it yourself!"
"No! You get it!"
"Sit boy!"
*thud* "Hey! Let me up!"
"Not until you agree to get me a cup of water!"
"Fine! I'll get your cup of water! Let me up!"
"Fine!"
"Fine!"
Gohan trudged off to get Videl's cup of water. As he was gone, Videl told Piccolo to get her some food. Piccolo quietly reminded her that he WAS NOT HER SERVANT! AND DIDN'T WANT TO BE ORDERED AROUND LIKE SOME SLAVE! And left.
After an hour and a training house in the forest with TONS of equipment and toys later, and Videl dismissed Gohan with a days' good work. Yoshimi asked "Del, don't you think you were a BIT hard on him?"
"Shimi, of course not! He is a guy, and guys are meant to serve us!" (WOW! She learns fast!!!! Go VIDEL! Go Videl!) She replied as if it was the most obvious thing in the world. "Fine," she gave in to the pleading eyes. "I won't work him as hard tomorrow, so get some sleep! OK?"
"Ok! Good Night V."
"Good Night Shimi!"
And with that, the girls fell asleep. In the middle of the night, Yoshimi rolled over, and hit the big red button. When they woke up, a new landscape awaited them.
DUN, DUN, DUN!!!!!!!! End of the chappie!!! I hope you liked it!
JUST KIDDING!!!! That was waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to short to be a chappie!!!!!!!!!! Here is the end!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not, now
Not here either
Maybe here?
Nooooooooooooo!
Fine, fine getting closer
Here?
Now?
NOW!!!!!! YaY!!!!!
As Gohan awoke, he knew something was different. He jumped up. WHERE WAS VIDEL! He flew out of his cave, and found a completely different wood. He searched out Videl's ki and followed it. As he got there, the girls were just beginning to wake up.
"OH MY GOD!!!" could be heard all over the woods. And someone heard it. He alerted his friends, and they began to march in that direction.
Oooooooooooh well, too bad! End of the chappie! For real this time! I know I'm the meanest jerk, pansy, a$$ hole, whateva! Ima lost! I can't decide whether to put the setting in the Lord of the Rings, or Inuyasha, or something else. PLEASE HELP ME!!!!!! Oooooooooooh! DBZ Priestess Kikyo has changed her s/n to Sailor Neptune291. She is Yoshimi, just to let yall know. I love that word! Yall! It is soooooo kool!!!!!!!! Please review and Please Help me!!!!!!!
Luv yall
~esteebee~ ~Videl~ ~Gohan~
Gohan: why am I always on the bottom!? Me: Cuz. Gohan: Cuz why? Me: Cuz I feel like it! *glares all around* and if any one else has a problems, just let me know!!!!
Oooo this meanie named Sporanox writes really good stuff, but has flamed a ton of people about if their stories really sux or something. Check him out. He told me I used too many exclamation marks, so I changed them in all the chapters. I also redid chappie #1 so I could fix the errors in there. I did the same 4 the rest of them, but most changes are in #1. Thanks dude! After what you did to my friend, you should be thanking me for doing this for you! Oooo if anyone can tell me about ANY mistakes at all, I'll be glad to change them! And please recommend authors to put down here! I don't get many chances to read fics any more, so please send them to me!!! Thanks peoples!!!
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I'm soooooooooooo sorry this hasn't come out sooner!!! First I was grounded and couldn't use the computer, then it screwed up and I couldn't load it!!! I'm soooooooooooo sorry!!!!! YaY!!!! Sooooooooo many people love me!!!!!!!!!!!! A cirtain reviewer (you know who you are) asked my to do a TON of work and type everything out! Do you like, Do you!!!!????? Gohan: ya, she does all this work for you and all you do is complain!!!! Videl: that isn't nice! She Did say it doesn't deserve a flame. Me: Ya! Besides, I was just kidding! Sheesh! Besides, Mystic, you are sooooooooo cool!!!!!!!! I LUV His Dark Materials by: Philip Pullman!!!!!!! (if any one likes sci- fi/ fantasy stuff, read it!!!!!)
I'm sooooooooo surprised sooooooooo many people were supportive in my last chappie! I thought I would get a ton of hate mail, but WOW! I didn't!!!!!! I was sooooooooo stuck with this chappie, but thanks to my friend Nicole, (I sorta borrowed an idea from her fic. hehehe) I was able to post it!!! YaY!!!!!! Gohan: Ya, and me and Videl helped!!! Videl: Ya, we did!!!!! Me: Fine!!!!! You guys helped me, along with Microsoft word's SPELL CHECK!!!!!!! (i no own that) Now. on to review responses!!!!!!!!:
MysticGohan3: Thanks!!!!! Gohan, don't you have something to say to her! Gohan: I'm sooooooooo sorry for being mean to you up there!!!!! Please forgive me!!!!! *falls on knees* I beg you!!!!! Videl: Nice show! Gohan: Thanks! (
Slashing Jaded Ignorance(G-KS: you are a great person!!!!!! Yes, I do stick up for my friends! *stands up proudly* I want to thank you for apologizing for your not quite flame. it wasn't even a speck of a flame, anywayz, you are a great person! Wait! Didn't I say that already? Gohan: Yes, you did. Videl: I'll say it again!!!! You are a great person!!!!!! Me: YaY!!!!! People like me!!!!!! Thank you!!!! Videl: what is she going on about? Gohan: I don't know, but I think we should leave her alone right now me: Yesyesyesyesyes!!!!!!!! I RULE fanfiction.net!!!!!!! Muhahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!! ( Videl: Yes, we should go now.
KaneTheRed: hold on a sec! I'm not going that far that soon! Gohan is NOT a super Saiya-jin yet; he only taps into the power of being one when surrounded with a strong emotion. You can be sure that my Gohan is NOT becoming weak!!!!!! No Way!!!!!!! Gohan: YaY I'm not becoming a wimp like in the show!!!!! I thank you Kane for saying I got skills! I always thought so, but you're the first one to say it in this fic! You Rule!!!!! (
Luna's Meow: You are absolutely right!!!! I got some crazy idea to boycott fanfiction.net to punish all the stupid flamers, but I realized that was STUPID!!!!!! If I were you, I would say the same thing! I'm sorry all you faithful reviewers!!!!!! *breaks down crying* ( Gohan: sorry about her, she's been a LITTLE crazy. Videl: 2 tests, a quiz and a project due tomorrow just found out about today would make a normal person crazy, with her. ummmmm put her in a strait jacket anyone?
butterball jackson: you are soooooo mean!!!!! Why even TRY to make someone feel bad!!!??? How would you like it if I did that to you!!!??? Videl: Yeah!!!!! Read chappie #4!!!!! That will teach ya!!!!
Wow!!!! Just the top part of this story took a while to type!!!! 2 pages!!!!!! Videl: Shut up and write! Me: Yes mam! On to the story!!!:
Out stepped Yoshimi. She had shoulder length dark blue hair, and deep black eyes, and a smirk identical to Videl's. In her hand was a black box with a big red button on it, playing with it, she spoke: "Sooo, you must be Gohan! We have a surprise for you!"
Gohan just stared blankly at Yoshimi wondering what the little black box could mean, that is until he felt a necklace fall around his neck. "Yes!" Videl cried. "Mission Accomplished!" A big, dark beaded chocker with shark teeth was stuck around his neck! (think Inuyasha here peoples!) The girls began to giggle, and Gohan began to get worried. "What is this?" he asked.
Still laughing, Videl replied, "You can't take it off! Only the one who places it around your neck can, and now you have to do what ever I say!!!!!! You can thank Bulma for this you know!"
"Wh wha what does Bulma have to do with this?" Gohan stuttered. He could feel a powerful ancient magic surround him, one that he couldn't understand. "Ohhhhhhhh Bulma made this off a copy made thousands of years ago, added with modern technology of course." Recited Yoshimi. "And, if anything goes wrong, all I have to do is press this button, and help, who understands this magic, will appear."
"Good! It looks like everything is in order!" Bulma said as she waltzed in. "Now Gohan, in case you haven't heard, you have to do EVERYTHING Videl says, or u will be thrown to the ground and will not be able to get up again until Videl says so. Yoshimi has a button to press if anything gets to far out of hand. Have FUN!!!!!" Bulma walked back into the forest and a small jet appeared out of a clearing near them, and it took off. Bulma smirked as she waved goodbye; 'Videl would do nicely for Gohan. She was strong like Chichi and wouldn't let him do just anything he wanted to. She was smart too; maybe I'll give her a job at C. Corp. when she gets older. mmmmmmm she would be a nice partner.'
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"Go get me a cup of water!"
"Go get it yourself!"
"No! You get it!"
"Sit boy!"
*thud* "Hey! Let me up!"
"Not until you agree to get me a cup of water!"
"Fine! I'll get your cup of water! Let me up!"
"Fine!"
"Fine!"
Gohan trudged off to get Videl's cup of water. As he was gone, Videl told Piccolo to get her some food. Piccolo quietly reminded her that he WAS NOT HER SERVANT! AND DIDN'T WANT TO BE ORDERED AROUND LIKE SOME SLAVE! And left.
After an hour and a training house in the forest with TONS of equipment and toys later, and Videl dismissed Gohan with a days' good work. Yoshimi asked "Del, don't you think you were a BIT hard on him?"
"Shimi, of course not! He is a guy, and guys are meant to serve us!" (WOW! She learns fast!!!! Go VIDEL! Go Videl!) She replied as if it was the most obvious thing in the world. "Fine," she gave in to the pleading eyes. "I won't work him as hard tomorrow, so get some sleep! OK?"
"Ok! Good Night V."
"Good Night Shimi!"
And with that, the girls fell asleep. In the middle of the night, Yoshimi rolled over, and hit the big red button. When they woke up, a new landscape awaited them.
DUN, DUN, DUN!!!!!!!! End of the chappie!!! I hope you liked it!
JUST KIDDING!!!! That was waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to short to be a chappie!!!!!!!!!! Here is the end!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not, now
Not here either
Maybe here?
Nooooooooooooo!
Fine, fine getting closer
Here?
Now?
NOW!!!!!! YaY!!!!!
As Gohan awoke, he knew something was different. He jumped up. WHERE WAS VIDEL! He flew out of his cave, and found a completely different wood. He searched out Videl's ki and followed it. As he got there, the girls were just beginning to wake up.
"OH MY GOD!!!" could be heard all over the woods. And someone heard it. He alerted his friends, and they began to march in that direction.
Oooooooooooh well, too bad! End of the chappie! For real this time! I know I'm the meanest jerk, pansy, a$$ hole, whateva! Ima lost! I can't decide whether to put the setting in the Lord of the Rings, or Inuyasha, or something else. PLEASE HELP ME!!!!!! Oooooooooooh! DBZ Priestess Kikyo has changed her s/n to Sailor Neptune291. She is Yoshimi, just to let yall know. I love that word! Yall! It is soooooo kool!!!!!!!! Please review and Please Help me!!!!!!!
Luv yall
~esteebee~ ~Videl~ ~Gohan~
Gohan: why am I always on the bottom!? Me: Cuz. Gohan: Cuz why? Me: Cuz I feel like it! *glares all around* and if any one else has a problems, just let me know!!!!
Oooo this meanie named Sporanox writes really good stuff, but has flamed a ton of people about if their stories really sux or something. Check him out. He told me I used too many exclamation marks, so I changed them in all the chapters. I also redid chappie #1 so I could fix the errors in there. I did the same 4 the rest of them, but most changes are in #1. Thanks dude! After what you did to my friend, you should be thanking me for doing this for you! Oooo if anyone can tell me about ANY mistakes at all, I'll be glad to change them! And please recommend authors to put down here! I don't get many chances to read fics any more, so please send them to me!!! Thanks peoples!!!
B Y E Z !
R E V I E W !
S H
U T
U P ! ! ! ! ! REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!