THX AGIN TO ALL MY REVIWERS.
CH.3
AS THEY WALKED IN RACHEL ELBOWED JESSICA "1 MORE THING TALK LIKE A NEWSIE."
"OK"
THEY WALKED RIGHT OVER TO ITALICAS AND JESSICA SAID IN HER BEST NEWSIE ACCENT "WES NEED A PLACE TA STAY ANDAND WANT TA NO IF WES CAN STAY ERE'." "CAN YA FIGHT?" "SORTA" "HIT ME AS HARD AS YA CAN" "REALLY" "YA" "OK" JESSICA HIT AS HARD AS SHE COULD. (RACHEL COULDN'T BECAUSE SHE WAS SOPPOSE TO BE A GIRL.) ITALICAS TRIED TO STIFFEL A SHOUT OF PAIN.HE SUCCED FOR ABOUT 30 SECONDS. "MERRRRRR GRRRRRRRRRRRR"STILL TRYING NOT TO YELL. JESSICA DOBLE OVER IN LAUGHTER. "SO HAVE U DISCIED?" "JUST ONE MORE THING" "WHAT" "CAN U USE A SLINGSHOT?" "YA" "HIT DAT BODDLE UP DER."HE SAID POINTING TO A BOTTLE 20 FEET FROM DA GROUND.JESSICA PULLED OUT THE SLINGSHOT SHE ALWAYS CARRIED WITH HER. (SHE HAD GOTTEN IT IN NAVADE WHEN SHE WENT THERE.) SHE ALSO PULLED OUT A ROCK.SHE AIMED AT THE BOTTLE QUICKLY AND SHOT.THE BOTTLE BLOW UP INTO A 1000 PEACES.ITALICAS MOUTH DROPED. "HOWD YA DO DAT?" "PRACTICED" "CAN YA FRIEND DO DAT?" "YA" "BOYS"HE SAID TO THE OTHER NEWSIES THAT HAD GATHERD AROUND "LOOKS LIKE WES GOTS OURSELFS A COUPLE NEW NEWSIES." A ROUND OF CHEERS CAME UPFROM THE CROUD.RACHEL SPOKE FOR THE FIRST TIME "THEN YOUS DON'T MIND ITS US"SHE PULLED OFF HER HAT SLOWLY.HER LONG BLACK HAIR FELL TO THE MIDDLE OF HER BACK.EVERY ONE GASPED.JESSICA PULLED OFF HER HAT TOO.MORE GASPS. "YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "YA YOU GOT A PROBLOM WID DAT?"SHE STEPPED TOWERD HIM WITH HER FISTS UP. "NOT IF YA PUT IT DAT WAY." "GOOD.NOW SOMEONE GET ME DIFFRETT CHOTHES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NOW!!!!!!!!!!OR I'S GONA KILLS SOMEONE!!!!!! "OK OK"ITALICAS SAID TO RACHEL TO ONE FOR THE OTHER NEWSIES HE CALLED "SHOOTA GO AN GETS HER SOME PANTS!" "OK" IN A MINUTE THE NEWSIE NAMED SHOOTER CAME RUNNING DOWN THE STAIRS, WITH A SHIRT AND PANTS.HE HANDED THEM TO RACHEL. "HAY DOS IS MINE!"SHOUTED A NEWSIE IN THE CORNER. "GET OVA IT."RACHEL RETORTED. "WERES CAN IS CHANCE?" "UP IN DA WASHROOM,BUT ONE THING FORIST"ITALICAS REPLIDED. "WHAT"JESSICA ASKED. "YOUS NEED NICKNAMES." "WELL MINES SPHINXX"RACHEL STATED. "AND IS DON'T GOTS ONE." "WELL IS CAN FIX DAT"ITALICAS REPLIDED "YOUS HAVE BARLY TALKED SENCE WES MEET YA SO YOUS ARE MOUSE." "IS LIKE IT" "DEN MOUSE IT IS.
PLZ REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IF U HAVE PEOPLE I CAN USE PLZ TELL ME: HOW OLD WHOS GIRLFRIEND (U CANT BE SPOTS GIRL MOUSE HAS HER.) WHAT COLER HAIR/EYES WHAT RACE HIGHT AND WHIGHT ANYTHING ELSE U WANT ME TO ADD. SO PLZ REVIEW
CH.3
AS THEY WALKED IN RACHEL ELBOWED JESSICA "1 MORE THING TALK LIKE A NEWSIE."
"OK"
THEY WALKED RIGHT OVER TO ITALICAS AND JESSICA SAID IN HER BEST NEWSIE ACCENT "WES NEED A PLACE TA STAY ANDAND WANT TA NO IF WES CAN STAY ERE'." "CAN YA FIGHT?" "SORTA" "HIT ME AS HARD AS YA CAN" "REALLY" "YA" "OK" JESSICA HIT AS HARD AS SHE COULD. (RACHEL COULDN'T BECAUSE SHE WAS SOPPOSE TO BE A GIRL.) ITALICAS TRIED TO STIFFEL A SHOUT OF PAIN.HE SUCCED FOR ABOUT 30 SECONDS. "MERRRRRR GRRRRRRRRRRRR"STILL TRYING NOT TO YELL. JESSICA DOBLE OVER IN LAUGHTER. "SO HAVE U DISCIED?" "JUST ONE MORE THING" "WHAT" "CAN U USE A SLINGSHOT?" "YA" "HIT DAT BODDLE UP DER."HE SAID POINTING TO A BOTTLE 20 FEET FROM DA GROUND.JESSICA PULLED OUT THE SLINGSHOT SHE ALWAYS CARRIED WITH HER. (SHE HAD GOTTEN IT IN NAVADE WHEN SHE WENT THERE.) SHE ALSO PULLED OUT A ROCK.SHE AIMED AT THE BOTTLE QUICKLY AND SHOT.THE BOTTLE BLOW UP INTO A 1000 PEACES.ITALICAS MOUTH DROPED. "HOWD YA DO DAT?" "PRACTICED" "CAN YA FRIEND DO DAT?" "YA" "BOYS"HE SAID TO THE OTHER NEWSIES THAT HAD GATHERD AROUND "LOOKS LIKE WES GOTS OURSELFS A COUPLE NEW NEWSIES." A ROUND OF CHEERS CAME UPFROM THE CROUD.RACHEL SPOKE FOR THE FIRST TIME "THEN YOUS DON'T MIND ITS US"SHE PULLED OFF HER HAT SLOWLY.HER LONG BLACK HAIR FELL TO THE MIDDLE OF HER BACK.EVERY ONE GASPED.JESSICA PULLED OFF HER HAT TOO.MORE GASPS. "YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "YA YOU GOT A PROBLOM WID DAT?"SHE STEPPED TOWERD HIM WITH HER FISTS UP. "NOT IF YA PUT IT DAT WAY." "GOOD.NOW SOMEONE GET ME DIFFRETT CHOTHES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NOW!!!!!!!!!!OR I'S GONA KILLS SOMEONE!!!!!! "OK OK"ITALICAS SAID TO RACHEL TO ONE FOR THE OTHER NEWSIES HE CALLED "SHOOTA GO AN GETS HER SOME PANTS!" "OK" IN A MINUTE THE NEWSIE NAMED SHOOTER CAME RUNNING DOWN THE STAIRS, WITH A SHIRT AND PANTS.HE HANDED THEM TO RACHEL. "HAY DOS IS MINE!"SHOUTED A NEWSIE IN THE CORNER. "GET OVA IT."RACHEL RETORTED. "WERES CAN IS CHANCE?" "UP IN DA WASHROOM,BUT ONE THING FORIST"ITALICAS REPLIDED. "WHAT"JESSICA ASKED. "YOUS NEED NICKNAMES." "WELL MINES SPHINXX"RACHEL STATED. "AND IS DON'T GOTS ONE." "WELL IS CAN FIX DAT"ITALICAS REPLIDED "YOUS HAVE BARLY TALKED SENCE WES MEET YA SO YOUS ARE MOUSE." "IS LIKE IT" "DEN MOUSE IT IS.
PLZ REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IF U HAVE PEOPLE I CAN USE PLZ TELL ME: HOW OLD WHOS GIRLFRIEND (U CANT BE SPOTS GIRL MOUSE HAS HER.) WHAT COLER HAIR/EYES WHAT RACE HIGHT AND WHIGHT ANYTHING ELSE U WANT ME TO ADD. SO PLZ REVIEW