Hello and welcome to my first ever fanfiction / story that I am writing. I would highly appreciate it if you could give me a review and writing tips on this story
Text = Classroom
"Text" = Speaking
Text = Thinking
Text = Magic god speaking
Text = Story
"Text" = Story speaking
Text = Inner monolouge
The war is over. Russia has declared an armistice and with that WW3 has finally drawn to a close. While this was happening, students and teachers were still going to class without any idea of a certain student's location, status, or involvement in this global fight.
I wonder how they would react to the misadventure of their fellow classmate and the double-life he lived.
Within a classroom outside the confines of space and time was a stack of DVDs, a projector, a pile of students all lumped together and one person on a desk with a smile on his face waiting for them to wake up.
"Get off me!" "What happened!" "Where am I" "Can't breathe!" "Help!"
Students began to wake up one by one as they got off one another. While this is going, an iron wall tries to confront the remaining delta force members.
"OK Aogami, Tsuchimikado what is the meaning of this? why did you do this?"
"Ouch I'm hurt by this Fukiyose, while I will admit I would have liked to do this sort of thing, it wasn't me."
"Yeah we're innocent in this so please do not assault us, instead how abut the smiling guy just sitting there"
You should listen to that two-faced backstabber he may end up saying something useful
Everyone immediately stared at this mysterious figure who looked like a human silhouette of the universe.
"Who are you and what are you're intentions in the name of the class representative"
"And the one who actually acts like one"
Relax I am not here to threaten or hurt you, instead I would like you to talk about one of the students in your class who died
"What are you talking about no one in our class is dead, yet"
Then where is The one who purifies gods and slays demons, where is Kamijou Touma
With that everyone looked at each other searching for the bad luck magnet that they either love or hate
Look I am going to cut to the chase now. Beside me is a bunch of dvds that tell you about this classmate and the only way to leave this space outside of time itself is by watching them all. I hope you enjoy it since it will take a while. Your sincerely, Magic god Writer
And with a pillar of flame he disappeared leaving nothing behind. Everyone freaked out began to run to each possible exit, but it was all locked shut and wouldn't break no matter the force. There was no escape
"Order, Order. Everyone just calm down and listen. Panicking will get us nowhere so let us think for a minute"
"I think we should watch these supposed tapes with Kami-yan. It seems as though that man just wants us to watch his life story and we will finally learn the truth behind his harem."
"Really"
"You got a better idea, anyway we are basically watching a show all we got to do is sit back and watch. Plus, I am not the only one wondering what he meant by Kami-yan being dead. All in favour raise your hand."
Good job, anyway I have to think about this supposed magic god
The entire class began to raise their hands curious to the secrets of their misfortunate classmate
"I'm only doing this to figure out why he keeps failing at schoolwork ok. Insert the disc"
With that Aogami placed the first disc into the player
"I just noticed that these discs are all labelled under a common name and an arc, A certain magical index and the first arc is called Index arc. Isn't that the name of that nun who follows him everywhere?"
"We'll think about it later. I more interested in this supposed magical aspect. Now play the disc"
With that all the students gathered around the projector as it began to play
It shows a satellite above the planet before zooming into the city onto a spiky haired teen running through the night away from some thugs
"Ahh! Shit! Shit! God damn it! This is just too much misfortune!"
Thank you for reading this piece, this is my first time writing anything for people to read. For people wondering I will be using events in the novel not the anime.
I am trying to improve my writing skills for my final terms in high school and I was a partial fan of A certain magical index and the whole watching the show sort of format for fanfiction some I'm taking a step into this territory.
Anyway, Can you please give me a review and writing tips for this series. This is the main reason that I became a fanfiction writer. Anything is helpful.
Thank you