A/N]] Thanks for the many great suggestions from all my reviewers!! Especially stresser and Chibi-Onna!!! I will be combining both of your suggestions and make a great sequel to "Mother". Hope you all like this one!!! Slight shounen-ai.

Disclaimer(!?): Some great plots are given to me from Stresser, Chibi-onna and many other reviewers!! But the style is totally mine!!! Wahahahahahahhaha!!! K…sorry.  I do not own saiyuki, but Minekura Kazuya sama does.

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Mystical Earth (chapter one)

I won't help you because I love you my child I will not pity you because it would only make you weak

My children became strong because I never landed a hand

They are beautiful and powerful just like you are

Because I never landed a hand

I will watch

But I will not help

If you want happiness,

Seek it yourself

I will watch………

I would gather your crystal tears

And make a brilliant riverbank

I would feel your crushing pain

But never would I comfort you

I would pick up your agony

whenever they stare with those hideous eyes

And hide them away inside your glass heart of secrets

If you wish to forget them all

But how proud I would be,

Whenever you stand with your chest raised high,

Beaming your gorgeous grins,

Appreciating the present I gave

…………………life.

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A beautiful white lady watched her favorite child as he reached out a hand towards the sun. He tried to grasp the blinding golden rays, but the rails prevented his reach. His beautiful eyes widened as he looked back at his tanned hand. Those great topaz were blank and dark from the lonely dark jail. The prison crushed his hear, but purified his mind. He forgot everything, but wasn't that the best? Unbearable pain would only kill his soul, leaving only a lifeless doll.

The pitch blank eyes called cold his brother night. Tear flowed down silently as darkness embraced light. He looked up at the pale lady moon as she smiled in sympathy at his insanely crushed feature. The boy smiled with his eyes wide opened. Those mentally unbalanced eyes indicated endless pain. Unspoken silver stream trickled down his cheeks as he closed his eyes and fell back onto the cold hard ground.

The night became an abysmal darkness, with on light, no comfort, and no one. Slowly, the boy drifted off into a bitter comfortless sleep.  Her glowing pale feet traveled through the sealed forbidden prison. She kneeled besides him and brushed his chocolate hair. Her mirror eyes showed no pity, no sympathy, but a mere allayed affection. As if loving the surrounding her child was in, she touched the cold floor, making it instantly an ice.

"It's life's trial……..so become stronger my boy, as strong as your other self."  She kissed his forehead and vanished into the abysmal darkness of his cave. "Afterwards….."

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"Goku! Over here!" Hakkai waved from the inn's entrance as his white dragon flew happily toward a teen running their way, cooing.

"Hakkai!!! I missed you so much! Especially your cooking! Ehehhehe." The boy jumped onto the brunette, sending them both almost down to the floor. Hakuryu circled their head endlessly before a redheaded man grabbed him.

"Yo, bakasaru." The redhead ruffled Goku's hair, making the boy to turn his head. His feature doubled it's happiness as he hugged the man's stomach.

"Gojyo!!" Patting the boy's head, Gojyo laughed with his head thrown back.

"See you still haven't grown an inch since the last time I saw you!!" Goku's smile faded, replaced by a frown and a twitch of his mouth.

"Shut up erokappa!!! At least I'm still young not like certain someone who seems to be getting wrinkles!!"

"..# why your little mouth…..!!! Take this you bakasaru!!" Gojyo's fist made a strike on the center of bitter chocolate.

"Itaaiiiii!!!!" So the fight began.

"Uruseeee!!!!" A blonde sexy monk appeared from the doorway, shooting a bullet just missing the read head's ear.

"!!!*gasp*!! The most corrupted monk who ever lived, Genjo Sanzo!!! You're still alive!!!!"

"I knew I should have killed you back then……#"  Sanzo shot three more bullets, frightening the crap out of inn costumers, who were all trembling with their backs pressed against the holed wall.

"Aah, just like the old days…." Hakkai laughed and patted his pet.

The four bishounens sat on the corner table with the usual Goku ordering about everything on the menu. Hakkai and Gojyo sat on the chairs, and Sanzo sat on the comfy seats facing them; with a little monkey on his lap. The monk rested his chin on Goku's shoulder as the young lad tried to squeeze the food item minimal.

"So, Goku I've heard that you are able to control your other self now?" Hakkai popped a spoon inside Hakuryu's mouth.

"Hm?" The lad looked up from his food with crumbles left on the side of his lips. "Oh, Yeah. It's kinda weird though, I mean with him inside of me and I can feel it."

"Whadya mean saru?" Gojyo finished his meal and took out a cigarette, handing the box to Sanzo.

"I mean it's like you can meet him anytime and we're sensing the same things. I can talk to him inside me if I like, and he can come out if I allowed him to."

"It's like double personality." Exhaling the smoke, Sanzo answered for his pet.

"Exactly."

"Naruhodo." Hakkai whipped the white dragon's mouth and settled him on the table.

"Wanna meet him?" Goku put down his folk and closed his eyes.

"NO!!!!!" The priest's protest was too late. Seiten Taisen awoke, replacing Goku's smile with a smirk.

"boo." 

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"So did you guys get to talk to him?" Goku jumped merrily as they walked down the street. He fell down to the floor as Gojyo hit his head like a punching bag, and Sanzo slapped him with Mr. Harisen. Even Hakkai seemed to agree upon their acts this time. "Itaiiiii!!!! What did I do!!!"

"Bakazaru!!! You let that freak out again and I'll eat you raw!!!"

"Bakazaru!! You let that freak out again and I'll dump you back to that mountain!!!!"

Sanzo and Gojyo shouted at the same time.

"….what did he do?" Goku looked up at the furious elders with his teary gold. Hakkai cleared his throat, talking in a fast pace.

"Well……first of all… he grabbed Sanzo's cigarette away, kissed Sanzo hard, tried to eat Hakuryu saying about how dragons tastes like, kicked Gojyo….there, and took away the hearts of about all of the women in that inn."

"…oh….but I don't think the last one was a big deal since we do that all the time."  

"Yes…."

"I wonder when the hell is he gonna go away…" Sanzo murmured under his breath, but the keen hearing of Goku caught it.

"Who? The other me?"

The sky started to grow dark as the four climbed onto Hakuryu.

"Argh! And we were going to go onto a picnic!!" Goku whined as he jumped onto the seat next to Gojyo who cursed along with Sanzo.

"Tell me about it. Hope it wouldn't rain until we get back to the inn." As if to answer Gojyo, the sky shed it's heavy tears. Sanzo, frustrated, raised his gun in the air and fired.

"Fuck."

"Ok. NOW it can't get any worse." The thunder rumbled nearby. "…..I think." Their jeep was running as fast as he can go toward the inn, but the heavy rainstorm prevented Hakkai from seeing clearly. Suddenly, a lightening struck just missing the wheel.

"OH Shit! What the…" Another struck just beside the other wheel and one by one the lightening attacked the Sanzo-ikkou.

Frightened, Hakuryu transformed back to his original form, leaving the others to land on their butts.

"Itee…"

"….###" Mad, furious, frustrated, Sanzo shot 5 bullets to the sky.

"….it won't help Sanzo.." Goku informed his master nicely(!?), but got a slap from his fan instead. "ite…" As if the nature was on Goku's side, a lightening struck again, landing directly on the monk's fan.

"…Wow….for the first time, Sanzo-sama's fan has been defeated." Gojyo clapped his hands. Hakkai …well he just smiled. The thunder rumbled again, but amazingly, the sky cleared leaving nothing but soft breeze and purifying blue pool.

From nowhere in particular, a tinkling laughter entered their ears. Puzzled, the ikkou looked around them in search of the owner of such a graceful note.

"Gommennasai. I get naughty sometimes." The voice traveled with the wind and blew on their skin, followed by another tinkling laughter.

"Who the hell are you?" Sanzo looked annoyed at the wind's soft kisses, brushed the air as if shooing away some dirty fly.

" My my, How rude you are." The tinkling giggles stopped its enigmatic breeze, but came out this time as a real voice entering their eardrums. The ikkou turned their heads back, prepared to meet an enemy.

Light fair feet stepped itself on the earth. When it left, the soil's fertilization doubled and white flowers sprang from its core. Each step the feet took, different type of plants sprang into life, but each time she took her feet away, the green turned brown, eventually losing it's short period of living. The brown leaves turned into dirt, turned into soil, and back into the earth. Her pink lips curled as she laughed her tinkling laughter. Her moon-white strings swayed like a professional dancer, and her clear transparent cloth flowed like streams.

The four could only gape at her beauty as she limited the distance between them. This is the first time we see her right? They all wondered at the familiar presence of her. Getting close enough, she lifted her head up to reveal the eyes hidden beneath her snow-white strings. The only thing the four could do was to gape.

Her eye was a mirror.

She smiled at their bewildered features as they each could clearly identify their own figure. It was as if they were standing right before a miniature hand mirror, planted inside a beautiful woman's eyes. But something was different about her mirror. Every time you look into a normal mirror, you don't really see yourself. The person you see everyday is fake. Normal mirrors only show what you look towards the others, but this one…makes you look at that person you always hide inside.

The four just dazed as if they had seem themselves for the first time.

Goku didn't notice that the other him had come out until he met with the darkness of his heart whenever he was in.  Goku watched as the strange beautiful women came closer and touched his cheek. The other three seemed to be out of their trance also, watching as the woman tilted forward and kissed Goku's cheek. Not giving a damn about her affection, Seiten Taisen glared a death glare and took a step backwards.

"What the fuck do you want old hag." It sounded more like a demand than a question. The other three widened their eyes. Goku, inside himself gaped like a goldfish.

"YOU KNOW HER??" 

"…I do, he doesn't." Son Goku pointed a finger to his own heart, meaning the innocent one hidden inside. "Get to the point hag." He turned back to the lady who was giggling beside.

"..um…Excuse me…but ma'am, could you tell me who you are?" Hakkai politely asked.

"Of Course. I'm his mother." She pointed a pale finger at Goku who in turn snorted. She laughed her tinkling laugh as the four, including the Goku inside, shouted in union.

"WHAT??!!!" 

To Be Continued……..

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How was it how was it?? Should I continue?? I promise it'll get cooler later! I donno, I'm doing this as my own hobby so I donno if you will like it or not. But hope you do!

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