Okay. So as like one of you may know I have been redoing my In The Darkness story. I figured out how to do the line thingy, thanks to twm2002. So I was going back through all my stories and putting in the line break things, and I've realized how fucking terrible they are. Many spelling mistakes, word gumbles, and just not very accurate. So for starters I'm going to be doing the same thing that I'm doing for In The Darkness. I'm going to redo a few things, elaborate more, expand the story. And so on.

Do you remember in Chapter five where I said I didn't want to go on and explain the whole temple thing because just the small scene in Kanan's room took thirty minutes. Yeah well. It out that they made books on every episode on the first season of Rebels. Now you're probably thinking that copyright. It basically is yes.. But the book itself is just literally the whole episode, so they stole it first. The only difference between them, and me if they have rights to it. And I don't have shit. So the book is already copying the show. Now for sure, I'm not going to copy the book exactly. Just copy and paste it into a google docs and change sentences for the sake of my story, and for the sake of for the most part it's more mine, then the other author. I'm only doing it for the dialogue, and movements.

The reason I'm doing this is because pausing every second to check to subtitles then copy what they said, then copy every little movement, and emotion they make, takes damn forever! Because then you also have to go back like three minutes and double check if everything is correct, then change it if its not. It's just a very annoying process. But this way I can get it out in half the time! Probably even less than that. The first what two minutes of the episode took me almost almost thirty minutes. Can't even imagine a two part episode. I'm glad I started the story where I did.

Now for In The Darkness I complete just deleted like six chapters. I'm not going to do that here I've found a way to actually change the order of the chapters. Had no clue you could even do that. Its insane. But anyways, currently I'm rewriting Chapter two. I feel like I didn't really play Ezra correctly. I feel like he just gave in too quickly. I think my thinking was that he just wanted to sleep. But also realistically he wouldn't have told Hera yet. So I'm going to stretch it out a little bit longer and then make it connect back to where I paused the story. A few things will change in the story because time wise. But anyways yeah. The new and approved Chapter two will now be out in like thirty minutes or so. And for the mean time there will be a giant rift in the story. Soo uhhh... just please ignore that for now.