Hey guys! Wait! Before you get mad at me for getting your hopes up, let me share the main thing I messed up with in this story.
And that would be the characters.
The reason I started with a small group to begin with is because as this was the first time I was writing such a story, I was nervous about me including everyone correctly. But now, that decision is biting me in... butt.
Anyway, please give your insight to which choice you would prefer that I do.
1. Keep adding characters that suit the memories, adding them one by one, and have their friends fill them in on what happened so far.
2. Enact lazy writing #1, add everyone, and I mean everyone! And have the host give the whole room memories of what has happened so far...
Hang on a minute...
I think I can make that work well. It being a group thing would make it more dramatic. The ones who already saw it can be more used to them. And since no doubt the memories would leave them all crying, the next chapter will be more fitting, as it will be a happy one.
I think I can pull this off!
3. Wait what else is there? If you have another idea, let me know, or else I'm going with number two. (heh number two.)
AND DONT WORRY! I'M NOT GONNA DO A REWRITE!