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A Night Only For Two: Alternate Ending
Chapter 10: Jealousy And Confrontations
Previously
"Lum...I...I like kissing you, I do...but if Mendou and those idiots see us-
'I will simply zap them and we continue with what we are doing...Darling...don't think about them or anyone else...just think about me..."Lum said as she leaned in and started kissing him again.
Ataru thought about what she said and sighed.
"Oh what the heck? I'm screwed either way...what's the difference?...'Ataru thought with a shrug, using the same reasoning that convinced him to sleep with Lum in the first place and soon started kissing her back
Lum even pinned him against an old tree, pressing him against it as she continued to press herself against him and she continued to make out with him. For a moment, Ataru felt a little smothered, but that feeling melted away when she used her tongue and he wrapped his arms around her, pulling her closer. She is enjoying it, even lifting her leg a bit during the kiss.
MUAH!
Lum soon pulled away from his lips and soon playfully started kissing him on the cheek three times, saying "Darling" over and over again.
"Oh, darling…"Lum purred, before turning to his neck.
"L-Lum..that…that tickles…'Ataru laughed, which encouraged Lum even more.
Soon their lips met once again, and the two engaged in a passionate tongue tango once again and Ataru, in a haze of lust, forgot where he was and decided to act on instinct, he lowered his hands slowly from Lum's back and was inching closer and closer to her glorious posterior, with full intent satisfy his libido, while his mind was now thinking about this girl whom he is with and what he is doing with and to her right now…
"Oh Lum…Oh Lum-chan…I… I…I want this…I want y-
"ATARU?!...."A new voice called, forcing Ataru to pull away from Lum and to his horror, see how has caught them this time.
"Shi-SHINOBU?!...."Ataru screamed in horror at the sight of his very angry EX-Girlfriend.
What is she doing here?!
Present Time
Ataru couldn't believe it. This had to be a nightmare or something, or a hallucination brought on the blow to the head Megane gave him while they were at the noodle shop or something. This just can't be happening.
Shinobu couldn't have caught him kissing Lum WILLINGLY.
He blinked, hoping it would go away but no luck. This is very much really happening.
Ataru is sweating bullets, Shinobu is trembling in rage and Lum...she frowned as she saw the nervous look on her darling's face and then sent a frown at Shinobu, her old jealousy towards her was resurfacing right now.
"Darling..."Lum said as she grabbed his face and continued to kiss him and Ataru was too petrified to do anything about it.
Shinobu got angrier and before any of them realized, she lifted up a large rock that she found nearby and flung it at Ataru, hitting him square on the head and sending him to the ground.
'OW!..." Ataru yelled as a bump formed on his head.
'DARLING?!..."Lum exclaimed in worry, before sending an angry look at Shinobu.
"WHAT DID YOU DO THAT FOR?!...'Lum yelled at her.
"THAT'S WHAT I SHOULD BE SAYING! WHAT THE HECK DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING AND IN PUBLIC OF ALL PLACES?!..."Shinobu shouted and Lum sent her a dirty look.
"We were kissing, it's what couples do to express their love...not that you would understand such a thing..."Lum said mockingly and Shinobu glared even harder at her.
"WHAT'S THAT SUPPOSE TO MEAN?!...'Shinobu yelled.
Just when Ataru recovered and got back up.
"Ow..."Ataru muttered, only to see his ex girlfriend angrily march up to him and slapped him.
"OW! Shinobu, what the heck has come over you?!...'Ataru yelled.
"What has come over me?! What has come over you?! You never go around doing those perverted sort of things towards Lum, every other girl in the world YES, but never her!...'Shinobu yelled as she pointed to an annoyed looking Lum.
"Isn't it obvious? Darling is finally showing me that he cares..."Lum said as she wrapped her arms around Ataru, who got nervous as he realized Lum's actions was further infuriating Shinobu.
"Lum...I...I don't think this is helping..."Ataru whispered at her as he squirmed out of her arms and he just barely avoid getting punched again by a very angry Shinobu, who tried to swing again.
"Shinobu!..."Ataru shouted, unable to believe this.
It's been months since Shinobu officially dumped him in order to focus all of her efforts on Mendou and since she knew Lum was never going to give up on Ataru and she deemed him "not worth the trouble".
She said she no longer cared what he ended up doing with Lum, so where is this coming from?!
"You...You...YOU PERVERT!...'Shinobu yelled, only for Lum to get in the way.
"He's my pervert! So leave us alone!...'Lum shouted as she got between them, blue eyes glaring into brown eyes, until Ataru told Lum to stand down.
"Shinobu, what is going on here?!..."Ataru asked, so confused right now.
"What's going on here is that you told me that you didn't do anything with Lum? That you didn't want her and then I catch you fooling around with her? I can't believe that you actually lied to me!...'Shinobu yelled and Ataru blinked.
"LIE?! What the heck are you talking about?! Before last week, I never did anything with Lum by choice!..."Ataru yelled at Shinobu.
"Something that is still a sore subject with me..."Lum muttered with her arms cross but Ataru ignored her.
"You expect me to believe that? Are Megane and Mendou's rumors true?! Did you actually sleep with her?..." Shinobu demanded and Ataru gasped.
'RUMORS?! Wait...why do you even care Shinobu? I thought you dumped me and told me you didn't even care..."Ataru demanded and Shinobu just looked at him like he was a cockroach...with disgust.
"Shinobu! I don't know what rumors you heard but whatever they are , they are wrong…Lum and I didn't do anything wrong and I never even kissed her by choice before last Wednesday!...'Ataru said.
"You asked me to go watch a movie with you just last Tuesday…" Shinobu yelled.
"In case I forgot, you told me that you weren't interested...'Ataru muttered, remembering that Lum interfered and got Shinobu jealous that she flat out yelled at him that she wouldn't go to the movies with him.
"That's irrelevent. Honestly, I knew you were a pervert Ataru but for a moment, I almost expected more from you…"Shinobu said with her arms crossed.
Ataru's jaw dropped when he heard this and…and…his eyes narrowed as he even felt himself trembling a bit…and not from fear.
"W-What the…who…who does she think she is?!...'Ataru thought, feeling something he rarely felt towards a girl that wasn't Lum.
He felt ANGRY!
"Darling?..."Lum asked, noticing his expression and then Ataru turned to glaring outright at Shinobu.
"You're one to talk! You refused to go with me just so you could go to that fancy tea house with Mendou last Tuesday and to that fancy opera two weeks ago!...'Ataru yelled at Shinobu, who was actually taken back by his tone.
"A-Ataru..."Shinobu let out in shock.
"Shinobu, I don't know what rumors you heard, but I don't care. I didn't do anything bad with Lum, and honestly…it's none of your business…you said you didn't care…'Ataru yelled at her and Shinobu got angry at her.
"I just find it sickening that you asked me out and then go frogging with her…how do I know that you didn't do that when she first-
"SHINOBU! SHUT UP!..."Ataru yelled before she could even finish that, surprising the brunette and even Lum.
She has never seen Ataru look this angry and to Shinobu of all people.
"Ataru…"Shinobu exclaimed.
"SHUT UP! I mean it Shinobu, you dumped me and have been rejecting me for months, saying over and over again that you don't care anymore what I do with Lum…and for the first time I ever, I chose to kiss Lum and you come here, attack me and yell at me like I am cheating on you, when YOU DUMPED me, remember!..." Ataru yelled and Shinobu sent him a rotten look.
"Hmpt…No wonder I dumped you if you are like this…and to think , I almost considered giving you another chance today…but not anymore…"Shinobu said and Atarus jaw dropped.
"Shinobu…'Ataru whispered, before looking down, his fist clenching as he started shaking a bit in anger.
He remembered that when Lum first came along, he did all sorts of stuff to prove to her that he didn't like the green haired alien and did everything just to get just even the smallest bit of her attention and now, just after she officially dumped him, he decided to give into Lum's advances and now, NOW Shinobu does this to him, even though she is constantly telling him that they were over and that she loves Mendou now…
"Shinobu…"Ataru thought, still glaring at Shinobu, unable to believe her hypocrisy.
"Darling, if you want to take anyone to the movies...you should have just ask me...'Lum said as she struck a pose, wanting his attention back on her, since she already punished him for that last week.
Before Ataru would have snapped at her, but after last night and maybe, because of his anger at Shinobu's own hypocrisy ,he didn't know what came over him. Maybe he wanted to get back at Shinobu for dumping him for Mendou last week...and maybe a part of him wanted to stay on Lum's good side, since...it might lead to more good times in the near future.
Ataru turned to Lum, with a grin on his face, though his eyes were still on Shinobu.
"You know what Lum-chan…that sounds like a great idea…'Ataru said as he continued to send Shinobu a smug look.
Both girl's jaws dropped upon hearing this.
"W-Wait...you mean it?..."Lum asked, happily and Ataru still glared at a jaw dropping Shinobu, who then sent the alien girl a smile a smile.
"Why yes, Lum-chan…do you want to go watch a movie with me? And maybe get some tea afterwards?..."Ataru said, using his usual date requests he had for his girl hunting but using it on her, though he still sent a smug look to a still jaw dropping Shinobu.
Lum squeeled in delight and hugged him.
"Oh, of course darling! I'd love to…"Lum said, unable to believe it.
Her darling is actually asking her to go on an official date with her, not as some deal or whatever, but a legitimate date.
This is the best!
"Cool, come on…let's go…'Ataru said as he even wrapped his arm around her and Lum giggled .
'Oh, darling.."Lum said as she hugged him and they both walked away.
Leaving a jaw dropping Shinobu behind, unable to believe what she is seeing. It was one thing to see Lum all over Ataru and drag him to go on dates with her but Ataru...just...blew...her...off...for...Lum...
"WHAT THE HECK?!..."Shinobu shouted as her voice rang all throughout the town, unable to believe what she just experienced.
-To Be Continued
Next Time on A Night Only For Two
Awkward
A/N: I found it kind of jarring that Shinobu would always get mad at Ataru for his wondering eye yet went gaga over Mendou and still got jealous over Ataru's "dating habits".
REPLIES to my loyal and totally awesome reviewers:
Pyeknu: At least none on the OUTSIDE but still, it had to sting what Ataru said to her.
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