Well, I don't have experience writing stories,

But I do like writing even if I don't do it often. So I'm sorry if this is horrible. Also it takes place after chapter 1? (I don't think there's shipping?) also they aren't controlled by anyone and have their soul? Idk

Chapter 1: kris

At toriels house:

"Kris! Kris, you have to wake up honey! You're gonna be late for school!" Yelled Toriel anxiously as you sleep unaware of the cries. You suddenly wake up as your bedroom door swings open.

"I'm up mom" you say in a tired voice. Toriel paces around the room and puts your backpack and clean clothes on the bed beside you. Toriel rushes out the door while quietly telling you to hury and get dressed.

You get dressed and walk downstairs to see Toriel head outside to the car. You follow after she gets out the door. Once you are in the car Toriel starts to drive to your school. You wonder if Susie is going to be mean to you or not. You brush off the thought as you arrive at school.

"Bye mom" you quickly say your farewells and both rush to your expected class. You stumble in the classroom, everyone looks up as Alphys stops teaching.

"Oh kris! It's nice to see you." Alphys said as she motioned him to sit down. You take at seat and look out the window as you slowly become unaware of your surroundings.

Suddenly you hear a loud bang and jump slightly in surprise. You look at the door to see Susie walk into class. Everyone tenses up except you.

"Oh! H-hey Susie" Alphys said quietly as Susie stumbled into the room. Susie grunted and sat in one of the seats. You slowly start to get tired. You feel strange. Then nothing. There is nothing.

You wake up. You look around the class and everything is the same. You look at the clock and only 2 minutes have went by. You silently sigh. You wish something interesting would happen.

The bell rang 30 minutes after. You walk out of the class. Nothing will happen you remind yourself. You stop to drink from the fountain. You hear somebody walk up to you.

You turn around to see Susie. She seems to be nervous. "Hey nerd" Susie says in a non threatening voice. You look at Susie then hum in response. She shrugs nervously "I thought we could hang out later and.. um... do whatever you nerds.. do?"

Susie seems distressed. You decide to answer with a friendly response. "Sure Susie. That'd be alright" you say in your normal voice. Susie smiles then huffs and walks away.

You question what happened then you walk to your next class.

Time skip: after school

You walk outside to see Susie nervously looking around. You wonder why she is so tense. You walk up to Susie in a casual manner. Susie looks up then walks over to meet you.

You look at Susie, she looks at you. You look at eachother for an awkward amount of time. You then see your mom and becon Susie to follow you.

"Hey, mom." You say as you walk up to Toriel, a nervous Susie close behind. Toriel looks up at you and will a cheery voice says,

"hello, my child. Have you had a good day at school"

you nod and decide to introduce Susie to Toriel.

"Mom, this is Susie. My.. uh.. friend?" You tell Toriel, not sure if Susie is your friend yet. Toriel looks behind you to see Susie hiding behind you. Toriel walkes over to Susie, you sense susie tense as Toriel walks up. Toriel then hugs a now supprised Susie.

"Thank you" Toriel said as she let go of Susie. Susie looked at Toriel,

"for what?" She said.

Toriel looked at Susie and smiled, "for being Kris's friend" toriel explained.

You decide to ask Susie if she would like to come over to your house. "Susie?" You start. Susie looks at you and tilts her head as if saying what. "Would you like to come to my house. Only if mom is ok with it"

Susie pauses and then smiles. "Sure." She said in her casual voice. Kris looked at Toriel and Toriel nodded to say it was ok.

They got in the car and drove to his house. Kris stared out the window while Susie fidgeted with her hands. Kris sighed quietly and stared at the passing objects.

Once they got to the house, kris got out of the car, walked to Susie's side and helped her out. (Not that she needed help) Susie smiled and gave him a small thanks.

Once they were all inside Toriel ushered them upstairs so she could make pie. Susie and you walk to your room. You sit on your bed she sits on the other bed.

"Susie?" You ask in a small voice.

"Yeah?" She says while looking at you.

"Why are you so nervous?" You question freely.

Susie jumps a little and pulls on her sweater's sleeve. She looks at anything but you. "I'm not used to having people around me and I didn't want to mess anything up, because I wanted to be friends?.. you know what? Forget everything I said!"

Susie cut off the explanation with a nervous laugh.

You smile. "I thought we were already friends."

Susie looks at you and smiles. She then rushes and hugs you off the bed. Susie is very tall. You hug her back and laugh a little.

Susie sets you down and backs up. She seems a little embarrassed. But she sees how happy you are and calms down a little.

You notice your smile and quickly go back to your neutral face. Susie lookes at you and huffs. You question her glance.

"You know you can smile, I won't make fun of you." Susie says in a calm voice. You put on a soft smile. Susie seems happy you did.

You hear your mom call you down for pie. You start to walk out of your room when you black out and fall.

This sucks. But it exists. (I don't think this is a ship story it is about friendship?) anyway, don't expect anything better...