This is the story about a chakraless girl from out world. She has one thing on her side though, time. She is frozen in time. Therefore she cannot die. She is immune to poison and disease.
Ladies and gentlemen I give you, Timeless.
'what is this?' She couldn't see, colors flew past her. It was mostly blue, though.
(It's pretty, like a kaleidoscope)
The blueness hurt her eyes as she felt pressure on her face, forcing her to keep them closed, else they might fly out. This was odd... it didn't feel like a dream. Her dreams were vivid but never like this. She vaguely remembered taking a rather nasty fall through a mirror.
(I fell through the mirror)
'A mirror? How did that happen? It must have been a two way mirror..' She could barely register the way her hair was flying up, and her clothing was as well, almost as if being sucked away from her. The skin on her body was attempting to do the same...
(Falling)
She let her arms hang out, feeling free and alive, her heart pumping in her chest and a smile going across her face. 'I'm high... get it?' She laughed to herself, the sound being carried away by the wind.
'Wait... wind.. falling... I'm falling!" The feeling of joy soon turned to terror as she let out a blood curtailing scream that was lost in the wind. She flailed as the ground rush to meet her, hitting branches and snapping twigs as she flailed to grab onto something to save her life. Pain shoot across her body as she heard a sickening snap from her leg as her leg hit a branch, but the adrenaline and higher priorities drowned the pain as she caught hold of a branch, halting her fall.
(Pain, shooting pain... fading)
She forgot the pain as she struggled to pull herself onto the branch, her unused muscles burned, but in her desperation she let out a cry as the branch snapped. Then she was falling. 'Son of a-' Her back hit the ground with a sickening snap once again, and her vision became blurry as pain spread across her entire being.
(Darkness)
And that's the prologue. Please review.