Well Hello dear readers!
After reading again the story that I myself wrote and with some advice from readers, I'll rewrite the story of Hero Faction on Apocrypha. That means that Hero Faction on Supernatural World will be discontinued until the new rewrite version reaches there again.
For the reasons that why I rewrite it again, I put it into three simple reasons. Number one: The personality flip that I sensed to weird after I read it once again. I mean, the first part show Cao Cao and the Hero Faction is arrogant and smug as always but in the later part, they suddenly turn good? Talk about how amateur myself write it. The second: How the battle goes. I realized that most battle in the story were too short and only few that some readers view as epic. The example is Cao Cao first clash with Karna. Maybe is because my English is not good enough considering I'm Indonesian. The third: The power level. I once read a reviews from certain reader in Fate x DxD crossover. He said that DxD is hyped Devils too much, which I realised was right. I mean c'mon! Devils just a small fish in a big pond! There still other stronger Supernatural Beings from other mythologies! And Ishibumi just hyped Devil to hell! And I agree about what Cao Cao said during LN Vol. 9: Humans is a beings among the others in DxD verse that can tapped their full potential.
And not long after this, the old fic will be deleted. Anyways, thanks to many negative critics even flames on this crossovers, helps me to mature to received critics and fix my way to write a crossover as fair as possible.
I hope you will enjoy the rewrite version. I currently on work of it.
