Imortant note:

This story has a new rewrite so please check it out and tell me what you think and I am sorry for doing this but the old version was going in the wrong direction I was planning to go and so, a few people have point it out to me the story if continuing, in the same way, would suck to mutch and it would risk me quoting writing forever.

The name of the new story is:

Effect of Immortal A self-insert story,