Well, well, well! I decided to take a breath from Detective Conan and go to the world of Naruto! The story and ideas for this story have been bugging me for quite some time now but I figured I could make this into a fanfic cause I can't let such a good story idea be wasted. Naruto has always been one of my favorite animes and I am certainly excited to begin my own fanfic regarding it. Now before we get to the story, there are so many things you guys need to understand first and don't worry, the first chapter is already underway so expect it soon. To anyone who reads my DC fic, IABH, you know that I update so quick that it only takes a few days, right? So let's get through this…
Okay, the main thing about this story is Naruto's unique ability. I won't tell where he got it nor when he did but I'll tell you what it is. He'll get infused with energy/chakra from a space rock that will result in him getting a bloodline: the Uchūtengan (Heavenly Eye of the Universe). Laugh at me for the boring name but I don't care. Anyway, it's a dōjutsu like the Sharingan and Rinnegan. While the Sharingan provides the user with distinct abilities inlcuding the Tsukuyomi, Amaterasu, and Susanoo and the Rinnegan giving the user the power of the 6 paths, the Uchūtengan provides the user with a unique nature transformation. Actually, I'm not even sure if it really is a nature transformation or not. Its name is Uchūton (Space Release). From the name itself, it involves the heavenly bodies, like the planets, stars, and so on. In order to clear things up, here is the list of jutsus/techniques that the Uchūtengan gives. (A/N: For more info, visit this page... just remove the damn spaces and captilization - H T T P : / / naruto originals . wikia wiki / Uch % C5 % AB tengan)
Ninjutsu:
- Heavenly Ray - Tengoku no Kōsen (Emit a laser beam from a finger to incapacitate enemy, can either burn or simply push enemies anyway according to the user's wish; C-Rank)
- Rings of Saturn - Dosei no Ringu (Summon energy discs to throw to the enemy, explodes upon contact; can be enlarged when more chakra is used; C-Rank)
- Holy Blast - Seinaru Bakufū (Beams of energy attack the enemy after being thrown, can destroy the techniques of an enemy by nullifying them; C-Rank)
- Asteroid's Rage - Shōwakusei no ikari (Summon space rock to attack enemy, sizes vary in the user's wishes, but depending on the chakra; the direction of where the rocks will go depends on the user; C-Rank)
- Blazing Comet - Moeru suisei (Hands of the user are enveloped in blue flames to attack the enemy, flames can burn instantly, but can be controlled; B-Rank)
- Meteor - Ryūsei (Envelopes the user in a yellow energy field to move at incredible speeds, allows flight, can be channeled into a single body part to increase strength immensely; B-Rank)
- Neptune's Wrath - Neppu no Kaminoikari (Call forth the icy winds to lessen movement and temperature, near recognizable to Ice Release; B-Rank)
- Venus' Love - Kinboshi no Ai (Breath out flames from the planet Venus, intense heat that can melt almost anything in contact; B-Rank)
- Star Armor - Hoshi Yoroi (Armor made from the core of a star, impenetrable to most attacks; A-Rank)
. Sun Form - Increases the power of earth and fire-based techniques by an immense amount, enhances the strength and endurance of the user, provides the user with Solarion, the sword of the sun and Helior, the shield accompanying it; takes on a more fiery appearance than the normal Star Armor
. Moon Form - Increases the power of water and wind-based techniques by an immense amount, enhances the speed and agility of the user, provides the user with the legendary bow, Luna, that has an unlimited supply of arrows and is powerful enough to break through rock without effort; takes on a overall white-colored armor that is light enough for quicker movement
. Eclipse Form - Increases the power of lightning-based techniques by an immense amount, enhances the durability and vitality of the user, provides the user with two gauntlets with matching boots, representing both Lunar and Solar Eclipses that is very dangerous for close combat; the armor is not fully covering the body, with only a few protective plates at some places
- Jupiter - Mokusei (Summon the energy beam of the largest planet to pulverize and incapacitate the enemy; A-Rank)
- Rasengan (Space Release: Rasengan can be thrown and pull enemies towards its center for an opening, similar to a black hole, can crush enemies due to its gravity; A-Rank)
- Solar Flares - Taiyō Mosu (Emit long solar flares from hands to attack the enemy like whips, temperature can be adjustable to the user's wishes; A-Rank)
- Heavy Rain - Ōame (Summon rain to absorb the chakra of those in it, and heals the people the user deems as friendly of their injuries, the ultimate support technique; S-Rank)
- Supernova - Chōshinsei (Unleash a gigantic explosion of space energy, near uncontrollable, some ways to protect oneself from it; starts from a little sphere in the user's palm and will explode within ten seconds once it has been thrown; S-Rank)
- Supergiant Armor - Chōjin Yoroi (Upgraded version of Star Armor, invulnerable to any attack with the sole weakness being Space Release jutsu itself, the ultimate defense, consumes an immense amount of chakra; S-Rank)
- Heavenly Judgement - Ten no handan (Call forth the power of all heavenly bodies into one single beam, highly dangerous to both enemy and user, full power can only be used once but can still be usable afterwards, albeit not that powerful anymore; S-Rank)
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Taijutsu:
- Dance of the Seven Stars - Nanahoshi no Mai (Left, Right, Gut kick, Chin kick, Uppercut, Axe kick to the ground, Right straight; C-Rank)
- Moon Mass - Tsuki Shitsuryō (User spins around before delivering a massive kick powered by the Moon's energy; C-Rank)
- Rainmaker - Reinmēkā (Powerful lariat with sharp raindrops infused in the arm for more damage; B-Rank)
- Judgement of the Seven Stars - Nanahoshi no Hantei (Seven shadow clones attack with a Meteor-powered hit; B-Rank)
- Rainshower - Ame Shō (Shadow clones use the rain to hide movement and repeatedly strike the enemy with raindrop-infused attacks, can only be used when rain is present, can be lethal; A-Rank)
- Starlight - Myojo no Hikari (Focus all of the Earth's life energy in one punch, aftereffects include a semi-permanent broken arm, but can be healed with Space chakra itself; S-Rank)
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Genjutsu:
- Crowning Light - Taikan no Hikari (Call forth the light of Sirius to force enemy to blindness due to the intense brightness; B-Rank)
- Cloud Nebula - Seiun no Kumo (Force the enemy to the illusion of being inside a cloud of nebula, can disorient enemy regarding reality and illusion; A-Rank)
- Eclipse - Nisshoku (Opposite of Crowning Light, cut off enemy's vision; A-Rank)
- Black Hole - Burakkuhōru (Summon an imaginary black hole to disorient enemy, almost inescapable due to the strong pull; S-Rank)
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Kenjutsu (Stardust/Hoshi-kori - name of Naruto's sword):
- Heavenly Beam - Ten no Hari (Unleash a small beam of energy from the sword, only capable of incapacitating enemies; C-Rank)
- Colossus' Power - Kyōjin no Chikara (Bring down all of the planets' weight in one slash, a bit slow during the opening moments of this technique; B-Rank)
- Meteor Slice - Ryūsei Setsudan (Incorporate Meteor with user's attacks, due to the speed of which the user travels, attacks can be lethal; B-Rank)
- Grand Song - Sōdaina Uta (Powerful combo that ends with an energy-enhanced slash; A-Rank)
- Rain Dip - Shinshi no Ame (Strike the enemy repeatedly with the sword imbued by sharp raindrops, can only be performed if there is rain; A-Rank)
- God's Comet - Kami no Suisei (Enhance sword with the energy of all stars and rush forward so fast that the sword will go through the enemy, cutting through every obstacle and organ inside the opponent's body; S-Rank)
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Special Techniques:
- Infinity Drive - Mugen Zenshin (Teleports the user or a group of people into a random planet in outer space in the blink of an eye; S-Rank)
- Overdrive - 'Ōbādoraibu (Enhances a particular attribute of the user corresponding to what planet they choose, can only last for 10 minutes; A-Rank)
. Mercury (Speed)
. Venus (Fire)
. Earth (Water)
. Mars (Earth)
. Jupiter (Strength)
. Saturn (Durability)
. Uranus (Lightning)
. Neptune (Wind)
Woah, what a long list! Before anything else, he is still the Kyuubi jinchuuriki here, of course. The Uchūtengan is an added attribute to him. Another thing to clear up, he doesn't have a high affinity in other elements. While some of his jutsus uses water (the Rain jutsus above), flames (Venus), and so on, he can't use jutsus which are above B-Rank for other elements. The elements he can use are Fire, Wind, and Water, but like I said, his affinity isn't really high nor average, which is a problem that will be solved once he receives Six Paths Sage Mode. For Part 1 of the Naruto story here, he'll be mostly relying on his Uchūtengan's powers but by Part 2, he'll use his dōjutsu only when necessary. The Uchūtengan is a very powerful dōjutsu, which kinda rivals the Rinnegan in some ways. And you all have yet to see it's full potential. But for now, this list of jutsus are the ones you should expect. Expect more jutsus to come.
About the Uchūtengan's appearance, I'll try to draw it, but hear me out with this description. The eye's pupil is black and the cornea is yellow. The yellow cornea glows slightly brighter than the regular yellow. The pupil is shaped like a eight-ray star (which is the basic look of the sun). Once the drawing is out, I'll inform you all.
Be reminded that Naruto will not be OP or Godlike here. He is still an idiot and not a genius. He can still lose, although if his enemy is like Sasuke, Neji or Kiba, or any of the Part 1 characters, he can win. Most of the time, he'll lose especially in Part 1 here, since he'll only rely on his Uchūtengan most of the time. But by Part 2, only a select few people can manage to defeat or be on par with him, but you'll have to wait for that.
Next, there will be only one pairing here. NO HAREM. It'll be hard for me since it's not my type to write multiple ships here. Still wondering on what pairing to do though. I have a poll in my profile so that readers can help me decide. The girls that can be paired with Naruto are:
- Hinata
- Kurotsuchi
- Shion
I chose them because they are simply my favorite girls to pair with Naruto. I would add Ayame, but I want a kunoichi to pair with Naruto. About Shion, if she does manage to win the poll, she will have a massive power up that will change her life forever. I would add Sakura, but she's paired with Sasuke here. Ino? She's with Sai. Tenten? It's a secret. Kurotsuchi because she's one of my favorites and I rarely sse fics with her paired up with Naruto. If she does win, I already have a way to create romance between her and Naruto. Hinata because NaruHina is my OP and it'd be an honor to write for my ship. Now I can't decide who to use. So I'm counting on you, readers to help me decide. There are only three choices and it won't be hard to pick. The poll will be up until I publish the first chapter, so choose wisely!
This fic will be mostly AU, but will still follow the canon story. There are deaths that will be prevented and some that are still happening like in the series. There will also be character/personality changes throughout the whole series, so expect some baddies turning good and goodies turning bad. The filler arcs in Part 1 will most certainly be ignored, but I don't know, I'm unpredicatable. Hehe… LOL. I don't know if I will include movies here, but in case Shion wins as Naruto's love interest, then Naruto Shippuden: The Movie will be confirmed to be here. This fic will continue until the end of the Shippuden series, and maybe I'll add a sequel with Boruto and the new gang as the main characters if you guys want to.
Naruto is still the Kyuubi jinchuuriki here, okay? I originally planned to have an OC be the jinchuuriki since Naruto already has the Uchūtengan, but it just feels weird for me if Naruto wasn't the guy with Kurama. He'll retain all the abilities of the Kyuubi jinchuriki, including the healing factor, and the chakra reserves. And imagine how awesome he'd be if the power of Kurama is combined with the Uchūtengan!
FOUR NEW ARCS ADDED TO THE CANON STORYLINE: (Summaries are in Chapter 8 of the story, not including this)
1. The Man from the Future Arc (after Sasuke Retrieval Mission Arc)
2. Training at Turtle Island Arc (after Tale of Jiraiya the Gallant Arc)
3. Restoration of Konoha Arc (after Training at Turtle Island Arc).
4. Rise of the Uzumaki Empire Arc (after Kaguya Otsutsuki Strikes Arc)
Well, that's about it! That's everything you need to know about this fanfic… for now. The first chapter will be out soon so if you want to stay tuned, either download the fic or follow me. Got anything to say about the things I told you above? Got something to suggest? Tell me in a review. To anyone out there who'd be willing to be my writing partner for this story, don't hesitate to PM me and we shall write this story together. Goodbye… and good night! BANG!
-Lance