Chapter 4 is here. Sorry for the delay, works gotten a bit busy.

Like always I only own the plot and OC Ellie


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Placing my palm on the barrier, I gather my Wakfu focusing it into my palm. Holding onto it till it builds then I release it, all of it. I fell the barrier start to shatter, pushing, my hand starts to move forward. Then it stops, my hand stops as a new barrier starts to form from the excess Wakfu from my own attack. The voice, oddly proud about me breaking her barrier but angry too.

'It's too soon, you have to wait, have to trust.'

"No, I can't, I can't watch him get hurt again, not again." Sliding down to my knees tears falling down my face. Starting to build up more Wakfu, but then stop. Knowing that if I was able to break it again, I wouldn't have the energy to go through. I watch as Qilby passes out, watching Yugo and his friends take him to a room to recover.

"Please, let me go to him. Let me put Qilby back into excite ."

'They need to be tested, Qilby to see if he can redeem himself, and Yugo, to see if he is ready to lead. And you will help judge.'

Slowly turning my head towards the voice, for the first time 'hearing' the voice and not just sensing it in my head. There standing beside me, the most beautiful woman I've ever seen. Made out of pure Wakfu, the great goddess Eliatrope, my mother.

I look up at her in aww, in all my lives, I have never seen our mother since she gave the last of us our gifts. It becomes clear, who made this place, who brought me here.

'Do you trust me my daughter?'

"I… I…" for the first time since my first life I truly feel like a child. Turning to watch Yugo, he's excited that Qilby's there, a grown Eliatrope, that could tell him about his people. I slowly start to realize, "I, do... I just don't trust Qilby."

'Do you believe people can change?'

Closing my eyes thinking about what my mother has asked. "I think they can, if they want to change."

'We will see if his time alone has changed his ways. No matter what you must let it play out, and be fair.'

Eliatrope motions for me to stand up. I slowly stand as she waves her hand, the images speed forward then slows back to normal as Qilby wakes up. I watch along side my mother as Qilby begins by lying, claiming the crown as his own. Claiming Chibi as an inventor, and Yugo as our hero.

Closing my eyes with a sign I state, "it's not a good start for Qilby."

'No, not a good start but we show keep watching.'

Nodding I turn back to the window of mist, watching and listening as Qilby sends Yugo on a quest for his sisters Dufos.

'Yugo seems a little too trusting, don't you think my daughter?'

"He's always been like that, trusting people. But when they break his trust… they never truly get it back. Not until Yugo's rebirth. When he forgets." Lifting my hand and placing it on the barrier, wish for Yugo's fight with Nox to appear. To my surprise the image changes, to the moment in time that I wanted to see.

The window shows Yugo being caught by surprise, of them going back in time. Nox's realize of what he's done. As the Sadida people close in Yugo jumps in front of Nox saying it's over…

"He is wise, he could have allowed Sadida's people to continue. But that wouldn't have done anything. Nox already saw the error of his was. He protected a defeated, defenceless man who only wanted his family back."

Placing her hand on my head a feeling of warmth and love fills me. 'Your powers have grown, your right Yugo saw no reason for Sadida's to hold Nox. Only time will tell if it was the right decision.'

Moving my hand away from the mist the scene changes to Chibi, Adamai and Qilby, looking up at my mother, "that was me?"

'It was, you have more power then you know.'

She moves her hand on my head I close my eyes as warm feeling flows over my head and down my body. I get a feeling as if my hat and dress are lifting away, right after cloth replacing what was removed. As the new dress falls into place just passed my knees moving slight as if in a breeze. I open my eyes. Not sure what to say.

'I must go, I well keep an eye on you all. Keep watch so you can help judge, and practice. I am always with you.' As she glides backwards she fades as a full size mirror appears in her place.

On slightly weak legs I move forward to the mirror to see what my new clothes look like. My hat is no longer faded pink but now a soft bright pink. The cloth covering my entire head but no longer covers all of my hair, the back of the hat ends at my neck. My soft golden blonde hair flowing from the sides and bottom, disappearing behind my back. The front of the ears hold our goddesses symbol in Wakfu blue. My new dresses colour matched the hat, the design was simple. The sleeves ending just below my shoulders. The end of it coming to just below my knees, with a matching symbol above my heart.

As I turn away from the mirror and open a portal the mirror fades from existence. Jumping in coming out of the second twenty feet in the air. I let myself fall before opening a second set. I fly through the air for a few more minutes before using my instant teleport power to land a five feet above the floor landing on one knee.

A tiny tear falls as I Slowly standing up. Covering the Wakfu blue symbol above my heart I whisper thank you mother. Turning to watch Yugo's window of mist I wondering what Qilby is planing, silently hoping he would make the right choice when it matters.


Aurthor tapping away on tablet, pink symbols start to appear behind him shortly followed by a portal. Ellie sticks head throw.

Ellie, "Hey, what you doing?"

Jumps and starts juggling his tablet, catching it then quickly hugs it to his chest letting out a sigh of relief. Turning to look behind him, "wha... how? You can't be here."

Ellie, "why not?"

Aurthor, "um, well" checks story, "your a fictional character from my mind, and your not allowed to leave your realm yet."

Ellie, "technically I haven't left, my feet are still on my side of the portal."

Aurthor, looks at open portal "I see your point. Well next time don't scare me."

Thats it for this chapter, don't for get to review.