I want to say Thank You to everyone who supported my story or even gave a review, follows, favorite. This means so much to me to get good feedback on my first ever fanfic.
I read through every review I got and have decided to take this story the way I want it to be I will ask the readers for any pairings or any ideas they have that I may want to use.
This may be Cliché but Fuck it, I'm going to make it unique while keeping it cliché.
So I am thankful for all the feedback I received and hope I can make this interesting for the readers.
So I hope you enjoy.
I DO NOT OWN NARUTO.
Just as he said
that a man whose face was covered with a black hood that had a gold outline that the sun only made brighter going down the left side. "Didn't know gate guards were supposed to leave their post just to inform the Hokage of someone's arrival."
This lead Genma to feel a shiver go through his spine when he heard the hard as steel voice that showed no emotions.
Everyone else looked at the man who was sitting on the window ledge looking at the window frame right in front him. While smoking a cigarette and looking outside to see where the ashes of his cigarette fell. Then he took his hood off and looked at them while smoking for the first time in 5 years.
Everyone was looking at the new Naruto that was in front of them with wide eyes. Long gone was the boy. Now he was a man. The blond spiky hair was nowhere to be found now there was only jet black hair with the red Uzumaki trait on the end of his long hair that was in a ponytail.
All of the females in rookie 12 and senseis, including Kushina who was supporting a tinge of red on her cheeks, were blushing while looking at this fallen angel who was Naruto himself. While the males were taking in Naruto's new appearance.
Minato felt shocked to the core to see his son smoking something him and his wife hated more than anything. The rest were surprised to see him all grown up it was as if he was a different person now.
Minato cleared his throat and asked a question to get rid of the awkwardness in the room.
"Is that you Naruto?"
His answer showed he was annoyed by the stupid question "No I'm an illusion that you alone can see", said Naruto sarcastically all the while smoking his cigarette while looking at his so-called father. Minato felt a bit surprised on how his son responded and felt hurt just like how Kushina did. His siblings felt surprised to see their older brother disrespect their father like that.
Jiraiya was a bit surprised to see Naruto talk like that to his own father and decided to remind him who he was talking to." Gaki that's your father you are talking to, show some respect.", said Jiraiya with a slighter raise in his voice to support his point but all he got from Naruto was a blank look as if telling him 'does it look like I care'.
"…", Naruto said nothing and kept smoking while moving his legs so he was leaning on the window ledge while smoking with his left hand while his right was in his pocket. He was staring at them with deep violet eyes that were empty as they could be which something everyone noticed was.
Having enough of watching her son smoke Kushina stepped forward and looked into her son's eyes with her red puffy eyes that showed that she had been crying. She stood in front of him looking up at him as he was a head taller than her.
She looked in his eyes and she could see long gone was her son and she felt like she was looking at a stranger who she knew nothing about. But her heart kept telling her that he was her son. So she did what she came to do which was remove that cigarette from his mouth because she knew what cigarettes could do as her uncle died because of smoking.
But as she reached out for the cigarette she felt her hand being slapped by the back of his right hand. This left everyone feels surprised while Minato and Kushina felt pain in their hearts because they knew how much they had hurt him.
Naruto threw the cigarette out of the window and looked at them and said. " So can I go now, since the Hokage knows I am back and all", this made everyone feel uneasy as they expected Naruto to at least hate them or say something negative. His parents knew that he would not forgive them but Kushina still had hope and she chose to test the waters between him and her.
"Naruto I am so sorry for all you had to go through because of us but you need to understand that what we did was for the greater good. I know you might hate and is fine but you need to at least give us a chance to make amends for our mistakes", said Kushina on the verge of crying and hoping that he would understand.
Then Minato thought this would be a good chance to apologize. "Yes Naruto I know we screwed up but you need to understand the Eji and Mito needed our attention so what we did was for all our good and I am sorry for what you had to grow up with and how you felt because of us," Minato said this with a much calmer than Kushina and a pleading look on his face.
What Naruto said next shocked everyone especially his parents, "Save me the bullshit will you? " Kushina could feel the venom in his words which lead to her covering her mouth and crying her eye out. Even Minato had tears coming out of his eyes.
All of the jounins did not know what to do. In front of them their leader, the Hokage was crying. Kakashi was about to say something until Jiraiya spoke and said something that he would regret.
"Gaki that's your parents you are talking to and you should be thankful they even apologized. Unlike you, they need it the attention because unlike you they are going to become saviors of this world so stop being a brat and be grateful." Minato and Kushina were frowning at Jiraiya who implicitly just said their eldest son was not important.
Just as he finished saying that Naruto dematerialized and reformed behind everyone and a few steps away from the door while facing the door. Then he raised his left hand while his right hand was still in his pocket. While he raised his left hand you could see Concrete hugging Jiraiya's legs which lead him to yell in pain.
"Saviors? Huh, let's make this clear, comparing them to me is comparing ants to a tail-beast. They are nothing compared to me so never think they are much important than me", Said Naruto in his cold steel voice with a hint of annoyance.
"Well since I'm done here I'm out of here", said Naruto with a much calmer voice than before. Just as he said that Naruto reached for the door handle but stopped when he heard his father.
"Wait! at least take your headband" said Minato is a shaky voice that showed he was still not over what his son has said. Naruto turned around and looked at his father right in the eye which made Minato avert his eyes from his own eyes.
"If I remember correctly I was exiled from this village which meant me being kicked out of the Leaf Shinobi Program, why would I join something that didn't want me?" said Naruto this time in a more annoying voice. Just as he was about to leave he heard someone he didn't want to see anytime soon.
Eji and Mito were on the verge of crying because they had always looked up to Naruto and loved him, even though Mito was very clingy to Naruto just like Mina. So just to hear that from their older brother hurt more than a kunai to the heart would have. Mito having her mother's temp said something that both of them would regret and everyone else would feel sorry for them.
"Oni-chan what did we do? Didn't we know that you were hurting so why are you like this to us? Did we do something to make you angry?"
Naruto having a lot to say said something that he had wanted to for more than a decade.
"Your existent is what made me angry," said Naruto as he left the Hokage tower.
Mito and Eji were looking down at the floor but all the adults know that both of them were crying. Kushina went up to them and pulled them into a hug. Then you could hear their cries down the hallway where Naruto was.
"Kaa-san is it true did us being born to make Oni-chan angry?" asked Eiji as he cried into his mother's embrace. Kushina had a much-pained look on her face as she was looking for an answer to that question.
"No it's not like that, Oni-chan is only tired and he needs a bit of time before he can open up again." Said Kushina trying to convince her two of her children as well as herself.
Minato seeing this signaled an ANBU to come out of the shadow and handed him the scroll that was the mission that he was going to give. After that, he nodded his head to the jounins and after that everyone left except for Jiraiya who was still stuck to the ground and Kushina who was still embracing the twins.
Everyone left with different thoughts that evening.
Jiraiya went home limping because after everyone had left the concrete dissipated and turned into dust. He was thinking how to avoid Naruto because he knew that the kid was holding back on his power. Also, he was doubting himself on how important Naruto may be but put that thought pin the back of his mind when he passed the bathhouse.
Kakashi was thinking about how different his life would be if Naruto was in this village. Naruto was like a younger brother to Kakashi. He reminded him of Obito his dead teammate. But the Naruto he saw today was different as if he became a different person.
Asuma was still thinking about what he saw and if he would have done the same if he was in the same shoes as Naruto. He was surprised to see the young man Naruto had become but was not sure if Naruto would still have the childish side that his girlfriend, Shizune, loved.
Gai felt that Naruto was being very 'unyouthful' when it came to his family. But knew that he could not say anything when he knew what Naruto had felt.
As Kurenai was walking to the Dango shop to get some food in her stomach. Kurenai was feeling lost on what to feel. She was happy to see Naruto alive and well but at the same time she felt that she was looking at a different man. Deep inside she felt the same feeling she was feeling back then. However, she felt a new feeling which leads to her feeling moisture between her legs when she was taken in his new appearance.
Rookie 12 was feeling a mixture of sadness to see their friends' family and also were curious to what happened to Naruto to make him say something like that. The last thing they felt was anger for making their sensei and their friends cry. But felt surprised to see that Naruto was the complete opposite of what Mito and Eji had told them.
Sasuke was feeling relieved and happy to see someone who was like an older brother and was running home to tell the news. Even though he was not happy to see what he saw in the Hokage tower but he knew that it was not his business. He felt bad to see Mito and Eji cry as he saw Eji as a rival and Mito as a love interest. Sasuke could not wait to tell his older brother and mother about this news.
Naruto after he had left the tower he undid his jutsu on Jiraiya a made his way to somewhere where he could eat. This happened to be a Dango shop that a woman with black hair and crimson eyes went inside a few minutes before.
So this is all there is for this week. I should upload Chapter 3 by next Friday.