Alright, it seems that I've made many of my readers upset by the latest chapter. I suppose the chapter had too much of a change in momentum, and my inexperience as a writer showed it. Like many people said, my 8man had a complete 180 and this lead to many readers becoming upset. I mainly write to improve my writing, but my readers' thoughts mean a lot to me as well. I won't like and say that the reviews for the last chapter didn't hurt, cuz it did, but it also made me happy to know that people actually gave a crap about it. But, still, I am sorry for disappointing the people who liked the story.
So now, I come to you with a few options. However, before i give you the options, know that this story will be on-hold for the time being. Despite what option may be voted on the most, I have decided to start a new project (hopefully more consistent this time) and will restart this project after my next one or two project. I deliberated with myself whether i should give this a troll ending just to end the story, but I really don't want my very first story to go down like that. As such, i have come up with these options:
1.) Carry on with the story as is, and just go from where i left it.
2.) Scrap chapter 5 (and maybe 4) and pretend I never wrote it. Nobody will ever speak of it again. We can replace it with a more consistent chapter.
3.) Scrap the whole story and pretend that I actually never wrote a FanFic called "Of Delusions and Dreams"
Well there you have it, my options. Just tell me in the reviews or private message me. I'll determine which has the most and let you guys know what won. Anyway, sorry again for the f*ck up with my story and hopefully you'll give my next story a chance.
Until next time