Hello readers~!
This is my birthday present to you! I am now officially 16 years old~ This is a new fic I've been working on. I'm already really far with this story, but I wasn't sure if I was going to publish this for real... but, I wanted to give it a try.
My good friend Eme Hire already told me this story is good, but I wanted to know what you guys thought of it. I noticed NOBODY had ever done anything like this before, so I'm not sure if you'll like it...
IMPORTANT FOR THE STORY!
Here, you should read this if you want to understand what this is about.
Three years after the original series, and Tenma is sixteen in the story. They've all graduated from Raimon Jr High and are now in Raimon High School, where everyone from the Raimon goes to school together with some others (Taiyou, for example). Tenma is, of course, the captain and Gouenji is the coach. The characters are kind of OOC because it's been three years and some of them have matured a bit. Others... not so much.
Fei, who is also sixteen now, is using a time machine to visit them whenever he feels like it, so it's normal for him to suddenly show up. But he's also picked up the habit of messing with time machines, which normally doesn't work out all that well...
One day, it goes horribly wrong and one of his machines explodes. Tenma is caught up in the blast and is send to the day he joined Raimon. Since there's not much he can do he just decides to 'go with the flow' and relive the whole series... only this time, he has two things he didn't have in the normal series:
Knowledge of the future and this little handy thing called common sense. Oh, and a thirst for revenge because his older teammates are REALLY annoying and now they're still innocent. Basically, he's just gonna mess with everyone because it's fun (yes, he can be mature. Sometimes.)
By the way, the characters have changed in the way they interact since it's been three years since the original series.
Please tell me what you think!
Disclaimer: Don't own
Matsukaze Tenma, the sixteen-year-old captain of the Raimon High School soccer team, is thoroughly unimpressed.
Sitting with his arms crossed in the 'captain chair' of the club room, he looks at his teammates blankly. Said teammates are staring back with hopeful, begging eyes.
''Tenmaaaa! Please please pleeeeaaase?'' pouts a small, brown-haired boy, brown eyes filling with tears. When the puppy dog eyes don't work, the boy lets his head hang sadly. ''P-please…?'' he tries again.
Without moving his head, the captain scans his other teammates. A boy with purple hair is next to the brown-haired boy, eyes big and begging. Behind him is a taller boy with dark blue hair and orange eyes, not begging like the other two, yet a hopeful spark is seen in his eyes. Next to him is a wavy-haired boy with amused brown eyes, but he too seems interested in the situation.
''We'll be really very extra careful!'' adds a boy with bright orange hair, clasping his hands together and falling to his knees. ''Please Ten-chan! If you really love us, you'll allow us to do this!''
Tenma raises an unimpressed eyebrow and everyone blanches. For a moment everything is silent but then the orange-haired teen clasps his heart with his right hand and places his left hand against his forehead. ''No!'' he cries dramatically. ''It's THE eyebrow! We are doooooomed…'' with his dramatic shout he lets himself fall to the floor, lying completely still.
The captain is unaffected, having seen this scene before. ''Taiyou, get off the floor. Your uniform is getting dirty,'' he says blankly. After a few seconds the boy, now known as Taiyou, sits up with a bright grin, dusting his yellow and blue jersey off. Tenma looks at his other teammates again. ''Last time you did something like this, you blew up half of the lounge. The school only payed for all the damage because the soccer section is the most successful part of our education system. Not to mention, coach Gouenji was almost fired – again – and you created mountains of paperwork for the both of us. So give me one good reason why I should let you do this.''
''You're overreacting,'' says a green-haired boy, waving his hand carelessly. ''It wasn't that bad, and they'd never fire coach. He's one of the best things that happened to this school in the last three years, just like our presence here. The school loves us, so we can get away with anything,'' he grins. ''And I promise we'll be really careful!''
The brunet glares at him. ''Fei, you're one of the people who causes the most trouble here,'' he states. ''You're not even from this time.''
''Yes,'' agrees Fei seriously, ''but nobody cares.''
Tenma sighs desperately. ''God, what happened to all of you? I thought you were a little smarter than this.''
''It'll be fun,'' says the wavy-haired boy in amusement, immediately supported by the other soccer players.
The captain leans back in his seat. ''Takuto-san,'' he starts slowly, ''I cannot believe you agree with this. They blew up the lounge. Blew up! And not even a month before that they broke all the windows in the locker room-''
''By accident!'' protests Taiyou.
''-and two weeks before that they covered the outside field in gelatin,'' says Tenma, completely ignoring Taiyou.
''Hey, don't act like you were innocent,'' says a teal-haired boy. ''The gelatin was your idea!''
''WHAT?!'' shouts a light blue-haired boy with tanned skin, who was previously sitting on one of the couches in the clubroom but is now standing and glaring murder at the captain. ''You're the one who did that?!'' he hisses.
''Kurama-san…'' Tenma's strict behavior dissipates for a moment as he chuckles sheepishly. ''Okay, that was my idea but I only thought they'd cover the locker room, not the outside field. If I'd know we would have to use the inside field for two more weeks because of that, I'd never have suggested it.'' Then his glare is back, this time directed at the teal-haired boy. ''Kariya, I thought you promised not to tell any of the senpai that.''
Kariya freezes when he sees the dark aura growing around his captain. He raises his hands in an attempt to calm the brunet. ''U-um, I didn't mean to! Sorry!'' he cries desperately, but the brunet doesn't listen. His teammates can swear that horns are growing on the brunet's head.
''It's demon-Tenma,'' states Taiyou blankly. ''Good luck surviving this, Kariya.'' He gives the boy thumbs up.
''WHAT KIND OF TEAMMATES ARE YOU?! HE'S GOING TO KILL ME!''
''Hehehe,'' laughs the brunet lowly. ''Ka~ri~ya-kun~'' he sings, ''Your training menu is doubled~''
''NOOOOO!''
Fei pulls Tenma's attention back to the matter at hand. ''Come on Ten-chan, can we please do this?''
The brunet sighs tiredly. ''You know what, do what you want. I don't care anymore. If you want to play with time, fine, just don't say I didn't warn you.'' With that he picks up the pen lying on the desk in front of him and continues signing the stack of paperwork.
The others stare at him in surprise but then start to grin, immediately running towards a corner of the club room to start their little project. For about half an hour, everything is going well until-
''Oops.''
Everyone freezes.
Very slowly, Tenma looks up at the cluster of people, directing his eyes towards the horrified, green-haired rabbit. ''What. Did. You. Do?''
''Um…'' begins Fei, ''I… might'vedonesomethingwrongbutI'mnotsurewhat?''
Before anything else can be said, the small machine starts to beep and Fei's eyes widen in horror. ''Everyone get down! IT'S GOING TO EXPLODE!'' everyone immediately throws themselves on the ground.
Everyone but Tenma, whose desk is standing in the way.
A ring of white light comes from the machine, passing harmlessly over the teens lying on the ground. A second later it reaches the captain, hitting him in the chest.
The last thing he sees is a bright light and then everything goes black.
When Tenma wakes up, the first thing he sees is the familiar ceiling of his room. He blinks a few times because he is sure that he was in the club room where Fei managed to blow up another time machine, but then sighs and decides he honestly doesn't care.
A moment later a beeping sound fills the air.
The brunet frowns because that beep sounds suspiciously much like his old alarm clock, but he got rid of that thing two years ago and-
His eyes widen.
Oh god, please let this not be as messed up as he thinks it is.
'God bless Fei if I was accidentally send to the past. I don't care that he's not a part of Raimon's team, I will make him train until he collapses.'
Knowing there's only one way to find out, he sighs and turns his head to face the room.
His old room.
Tenma groans when he sees his old room – which he redecorated two years ago – and mentally he swears that Fei will pay for this.
'Better find a way to contact Fei… then he can get me out of here. Wouldn't do to mess up the timeline.'
He sits up and freezes.
Something is wrong.
His body feels weird. Like… like it's not his own body. The brunet frowns and ignores the fear that is starting to fill his stomach. Slowly he gets out of his bed and stumbles-because whatthehell why is his body feeling so weird thisiswrong -but he manages to catch himself due to his reflexes that have gotten so much better over the years.
The brunet takes a breath to calm his racing heart and makes his way to the closet and the mirror he knows is on the inside of the door- this feels
W
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–and opens it.
His eyes fall on the mirror and-
'Oh. My. God.'
No. This can't be happening. This. Can't. Be. Happening. Time travel is one thing but- but this is- this should be impossible!
Because when he looks in the mirror, he sees himself.
Correction. He sees his thirteen-year-old self and last time he checked he was sixteen-
His thirteen-year-old self. His hair is slightly shorter than the last time he checked the mirror, and oh god why are his eyes so big? And not to mention, sparkly?
And perhaps the worst…
He's short.
Not as short as Shinsuke, but still shorter than Kyousuke and Takuto are at this age and they had teased him so much after the GCG because he was still short and then he got a grow spurt and thentheydidn'tlaughanymore-
He's hyperventilating now.
'Okay Matsukaze, pull it together! You're three years into the past. Big deal. You've gotten younger. Big. Deal. You've dealt with worse! Like that time you figured out that time travel is real- Fei you better watch out –or that time you found out that aliens exist and Kyousuke was kidnapped- serves him right, bastard –or when Kariya, Kirino and Hamano decided to cover a third of the school in spaghetti- what is it with causing trouble? –that was all way worse than this-'
No. This is definitely worse.
He gets his breath under control and sighs tiredly. '…so… what now?'
And immediately freezes again when he realizes-
Does this mean he has to go through the past three years again?!
No. Way.
Tenma looks at his young- so young, so SHORT –reflection again and takes a deep, deep breath.
''I AM GOING TO KILL YOU, YOU STUPID RABBIT!''
So, that was that. Hope you enjoyed.
I'm pretty sure I'm going to continue this story, but it's quite a lot of work so it might take a few months before I'm starting it for real. Sorry about that. Ideas are welcome, though!
(Actually, if it wasn't my birthday today and I didn't feel like being nice, you wouldn't have gotten this at all).
Bye bye~!
The now sixteen-year-old Yara Meijer :)
PS: I've decided that this is going to be a one-shot collection for Accidental Reverse.